i inhale your tender sighs
warming my soft breasts
i savor the slow beat
flickering candle lights
i listen to silky cadence
enveloped in your ardent arms
our hands grasp firmly
sea of our passion
cherishing breadth and
fullness of precious time
gentle is the night
when we celebrate us
Shared with The Gooseberry Garden: Poetry Picnic 14: What I am thankful for in my life. I am thankful for the quiet moments with my family.
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Wow ramping it up even more this time, truly passionate and sensual piece, great job!ReplyDelete
nice...celebrating us...that is awesome heaven...felt the heat on it but i think that goes much deeper than love making...ReplyDelete
You sure have the knack for this, Heaven. Wonderful.ReplyDelete
i especially love your opening line.ReplyDelete
Nice articles. I'm just blogwalking and very happy to stop here. And also give you some comment here.ReplyDelete
Dont forget to give us some your comment into my blog too.
Thanks for share,
¤ Rio Prasetyo ¤
This poem is hot!! I never used the word "hot" to describe a poem before, so consider that a really nice compliment. I've been reading through your blog and you are VERY talented. You got a new follower :) I can't wait to catch up!ReplyDelete
Hot and cool!ReplyDelete
...*Celebrate us* that is a phrase to be kept in a big book!
Such a lovely write Heaven. It's how I feel around the holidays, when I wish for a moment, just for us...ReplyDelete
Oohlala. Wonderful write. : )ReplyDelete
You are one spicy taco, Heaven!ReplyDelete
Beautiful! A wonderful thing to be thankful for!ReplyDelete
"Silky cadence" is beautiful and fits so well.ReplyDelete
breath taking imagery.ReplyDelete
Beautiful words of love's celebration. Wonderful!ReplyDelete
Lovely! Reminds me of that song...Tonight I celebrate my love for you. Tonight...there will be no distance between us...It's an 80's ballad. Can't remember the singers now.ReplyDelete
Very nicely penned, Heaven.
very sensual and romantic piece.ReplyDelete
yes. I remember love.
very nice piece here. all in couplets too! even more apropos!
I love the idea of "celebrat(ing) us" - very sensual.ReplyDelete
beautifully said -ReplyDelete
"gentle is the night
when we celebrate us"
nice! thank you ;-)