Wednesday 22 June 2011

Eyes closed



the room was bathed in the moonlight
he came to her as he always does
faithful to her wishes, and to his duties

she feels his hand
on her breast, kneading and kissing it
with him, she is soft and alluring

she knows his body very well
she feels safe, comfortable with the ride
she closes her eyes

her mind sought to open
her innermost desires & unspeakable thoughts
her deepest fantasy coming to play

her lover’s lips on her back, her butt and thighs
in the unexpected terrain, her body hums
delighted in his playfulness, his daring assault

her lover carries her out into the field
into the mountains they both explored & feasted 
with him, she is daring and wanton

her eyes closed, fists clenched, she reaches for release
one lover upon another, neither one fulfilling her
completely







Author's Note:   In my Painting Love post, one of my readers, Ethan has requested me to share my thoughts on this picture.   It was a challenge but I found my muse.          

Also, I see that my readers and commentators are coming from a diverse group with different tastes.   I try to be versatile with my posts - sometimes bold, sometimes soft.  Read what you like, and if you like it, leave a comment.   Thanks for your visit  ~ 

10 comments:

  1. Very versitile with this one.
    Another very well done.
    You really hit every intimate high note
    With each word you wrote

    How's that for versitile
    With some style..lol

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  2. i don't know why, i'm sure there
    is some scientific explanation...
    but eyes closed seem to intensify
    our senses.

    passionate write.

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  3. hotspicywings@yahoo.com23 June 2011 at 03:17

    i love your duality of reality and fantasy in this write... the simple act of closing the eyes separating the body and the mind to be irreducibly distinct... the husband and the lover as separate entities... with you as the focal point in the triangle.
    you are right, the ultimate goal is to have a satisfying release by fusing together the two opposing forces -- the body and the mind, the reality and the fantasy, the husband and the lover. but alas, you have only to open your eyes to see that that is not cumming.

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  4. nice intimate pic and vivacious verse

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  5. Wonderful post as always. Your beautiful and sensual mind is well conveyed.

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  6. i love your pictures and your writing, as always, you make me think in new ways

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  7. This IS a wonderful post indeed. I always enjoy your words.

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  8. i dunno, eyes open to me is all the more intimate, fully engaged with my lover...smiles. lovely piece, i missed it while out of town.

    good job teaching your daughter as well...they need to hear that...

    happy saturday!

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  9. I really enjoyed this. Thank you so much for trying it!

    I think my favorite lines were:

    she feels safe, comfortable with the ride
    she closes her eyes

    her mind sought to open
    her innermost desires & unspeakable thoughts
    her deepest fantasy coming to play


    I just really liked the contrast between eyes opened (safe, comfortable) with eyes closed (unspeakable was a great word choice).

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