Showing posts with label Poetry United. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Poetry United. Show all posts

Thursday, 3 November 2011

Clinging to you




kiss me anew, here
before the last maple leaf
falls, and first snowflake
wets my pale lips, stilling time 
twisted in salty drenched arms 

hurl me anew, here
before the last rose petal
dips, and first winter 
drop caresses my bare hips
unfolding, clinging to you  



Posted for D'verse Poets Pub - Form for All - Man’yoshu Poetry – Hosted today by Jane Kohut-Bartels (Lady Nyo)The challenge is to write the Somon category of  Man’yoshu Japanese Poetry. In this category, the tanka style poems refer to love and longing. 
and Poetry United: Thursday Think Tank - Waning days of Fall


picture credit:  http://littlepawz.tumblr.com/

Thursday, 27 October 2011

Under the block

everywhere
i search for whiff
of your warm breath,
speck of dust from
cold pale skin,
just any part of you
even your shadow
behind grey roof




during grandpa’s funeral, 
grandma roasted a fat pig,
chickens for the guests
amidst murmured words,
i heard yelps by  
animals in back kitchen.

heart attack-
i was told.

Author's Note: Posted for Poetry United:   Writer's Block  - the first part of the poem.

And D'Verse Poets Pub- Meeting the Bar: Critique and Craft - Conflation.  Hosted by emmett wheatfall.


  • Write a poem that is constructed using conflation. This means the poem must possess at least two different, wholly unrelated themes package together.


  • To challenge you further, the two or more thematic aspects of the poem must be revealing about yourself. 



  • Also for Flash Fiction 55.   G-man, joining you today.   

    picture credit:  Adam Martinakis (Greece), here

    Thursday, 1 September 2011

    Breath of Summer

    House is quiet
    Standing still, ghostly pale
    Like no one lives there

    Bed is tidy
    Pillows, cushions stiffed-neck
    No one ruffling it today

    Floor is clean
    Polished like a mirror
    Looking at itself

    Suddenly, luggage heaving
    Doors opening wide
    Running feet, gleeful sounds

    Windows flinging sideways
    Bright sunflowers in pockets
    Last breath of summer
        


    Author's Note:   Flash Fiction Friday - Tell a story in 55 words.  G-man, here's one! 


    I can feel the cool air nipping, don't you?  
    My pre-teen daughter arrived yesterday after spending the month with her cousins in Vancouver for vacation.  Her school starts next week, Tuesday after our long weekend.  She is like a breeze of summer with her endless chatter. ;-)

    Friday, 29 July 2011

    Content


    fingers amble to  
    gently caress my flushed cheek
    for moment, time stilled      







    shoulders burrow deep
    listening to shallow breaths
    heart content, i sleep


     


    Author's Note:   This is a senryu (a haiku form) because the subject is emotions or life; outside of nature.  While writing with a form restricts my thoughts, it is a challenge to find the right words to make it tight and meaningful (17 syllables).  The haiku form is growing on me; it is much easier than the Royal Rhyme Form.