Friday 12 August 2011

Evening Bite




evening stroll
apples dangle
curving branches
no leaves nor twigs
conceal its
gleaming color

though shadowy dark,  
fresh faced, they 
sway, mocking
restraints
in tidy small boxes.
no sun

they burst ripe full
brushing tongue 
along my neck
whispering throaty 
promises

enticing me to
come closer

pluck me


do I take just
one small
bite? 

 

Author's Note:   This post is for  Poetry Jam, the theme is Evening and Flash Fiction Friday.   Tell a story in 55 words.  G-man, here is my post, exactly 55 words.

picture credit:  http://purplefairies.tumblr.com/post/4530392430/darkface-dark-apple-background-by-lilifilane
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25 comments:

  1. G-Man12 August 2011 at 08:23

    Heaven...
    All is forgiven...:P
    Your Poerotica wallows in symbolic creativity.
    You have a fantastic talent.
    Loved your 55.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  2. Dulce12 August 2011 at 08:28

    That's a sweet very sweet temptation that i'd take...
    Beautiful 55er, so fitting with that beautiful pic.
    ;-)

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  3. Anonymous12 August 2011 at 09:13

    enticing! :-)

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  4. Brian Miller12 August 2011 at 09:20

    there would be juice dripping down my chin...smiles...

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  5. Jyoti Mishra12 August 2011 at 10:41

    simple but effective..
    creatively crafted

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  6. Pat Hatt12 August 2011 at 11:13

    Nicely done once more
    See it didn't matter that you put off the 55 word tour
    Still came back with a great post

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  7. Maude Lynn12 August 2011 at 11:25

    This has got to be one of my favorites. Great write!

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  8. joanna12 August 2011 at 13:42

    delicious! a charmingly sinuous write. :)

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  9. Anonymous12 August 2011 at 14:18

    BRILLIANT! This speaks of Eve...well done :)

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  10. Anonymous12 August 2011 at 14:27

    I title this "The Lure"...it's beyond temptation.

    -H

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  11. Daydreamertoo12 August 2011 at 15:52

    Never was anything to tempt someone stronger than that sweet apple. Delicious :)

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  12. ayala12 August 2011 at 15:57

    love it...do I just take one bite? maybe more than one :)

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  13. Luke Prater12 August 2011 at 17:30

    oh boy. 'pluck me'... love the underlying sexuality here

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  14. Monkey Man12 August 2011 at 18:55

    Branches beckoning you to the fruit like a come hither finger. Good stuff.

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  15. Helen12 August 2011 at 20:13

    My monitor is steaming right now ... incredibly alive and quite sensuous.

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  16. Anonymous12 August 2011 at 22:24

    No leaves? I'd be checking for poison.

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  17. deeps13 August 2011 at 03:26

    Resisting temptation makes or breaks you :P
    But then once ripe it s got to be taken a bite at least ;)

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  18. kaykuala13 August 2011 at 11:52

    Heavens! the 100th? I'm so honored. I did like what others did but never anticipate this special 'award'. Keep connected Ma'am, we'll keep things moving!

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  19. kaykuala13 August 2011 at 11:56

    Wonderful write! Gosh! You are not going to start everything all over again?

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  20. Ani13 August 2011 at 13:44

    Great writing and combination of writing and photo. Thanks for sharing and thanks for your recent visit to my blog too! -Lola at Buddhatropolis

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  21. Drenchxoxo13 August 2011 at 17:30

    ohhhh the temptation

    Quite the talent you have for so eloquently describing the pictures and really capturing it's essence.

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  22. Enchanted Oak15 August 2011 at 00:08

    I like your choice of ending on such a question. This was fun.

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  23. Bagman and Butler15 August 2011 at 09:58

    Mmmm...the illustration was a perfect touch for it. And the enticement was...well..enticing!

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  24. Mary17 August 2011 at 18:43

    Beautiful. I love this. Hard to take 'just one small bite.'

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  25. Shah Wharton19 August 2011 at 00:13

    Atmospheric and sensual - a great imaginary combination. Lovin it!

    Here from Poetry Jam Shah. x

    http://wordsinsync.blogspot.com/2011/08/weekend-creation-blog-hop-plus-poem_19.html

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