i remembered his dark
laughing eyes as we raced under
white shelled crusted Spanish windows
nestled close in tropical
summer, we played hide and seek
Plaza's ground all lazy afternoon
whilst old folks snored, siesta (nap) time
colourful days, drums dancing
we screamed chaos for every fiesta
banners waving, MassKara Festival
whilst old folks snored, siesta (nap) time
colourful days, drums dancing
we screamed chaos for every fiesta
banners waving, MassKara Festival
dirty ice cream, sweet rice cakes, caramel custard
candied yams, fried bananas, sugar cane sticks
Dulce Gatas, mango tarts; all delighted our palate
Dulce Gatas, mango tarts; all delighted our palate
Cathedral's bells pealing at 6:00 pm
reminded us to tarry home
prayers, processions long
one night, underneath the guava tree,
he held me in his skinny arms and
kissed me tenderly. i kissed him back,
not knowing what it really meant.
i left the tiny city for bigger places
brighter dreams, but I couldn't forget
his sugary taste in my mouth
someday, i will go back
kiss him with all the fervor,
sweet longing
in me.
sweet longing
in me.
Author's note: Reposted for The Gooseberry Garden - Longing, Loss, and Failure.
This post is for D'Verse Poets Pub hosted by Claudia. The prompt is going urban: Today we want you to take us on a trip around the world, to the city where you lost your heart, were born, fell in love, spent the most beautiful or most ugly time in your life…no matter if it’s a small or a mega city.
I wrote about the small city known for its sugar cane products, Bacolod City, Philippines. It is also known as the City of Smiles, and host of MassKara Festival (every October). It has been years since we visited the city, but my tongue still remembers its sweet treats.
Beautiful imagery. So sincere.
ReplyDeleteAnd he'll be a lucky man when you return, lovely colours and tastes throughout, thanks !! Steve
ReplyDeleteThis transported me to such a nice place. I like the romance in it too. Thanks for this.
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful. Your words took me right to the very spot of which you wrote....brilliant.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem, rich with the sights, sounds, yearnings of the city-- an exotic city at that. xj
ReplyDeleteA romantic episode and a longing to meet again. Beautiful piece!
ReplyDeleteit is a hot time in the old town tonight...smiles. nice on all the confections available as it built up well to that kiss...very nice...
ReplyDeleteSet the scene wonderfully, taking the reader right there. Sounds like a nice city, if there is such a thing..haha
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ReplyDeleteMy fingers must have been sticky, running through the sugary goodness here--too many typos, so let me say again, this is sweet and rich but leaves a hunger for more, Heaven.
ReplyDeletesweet with a tinge of spice. i love it Heaven. the Philippines is in our neck of the woods! :)
ReplyDeleteSincere and sweet- Heaven
ReplyDeleteBeautiful sense of your chosen city. I felt like I was in Spain at first.
ReplyDeleteSugary sweet, sensuous and summertime good. I loved it - Thanks you took me to your ---- heaven!
ReplyDeleteHeaven, this is quite lovely!
ReplyDeleteBravo on the writing!
You are good, very good!
Margie :)
Very sweet!!!!!! Very nice. I really enjoyed this piece. Extremely well written. Great discriptions and a story in the city to boot. Excellente.
ReplyDeleteReminds me of my first love - at least,k I think she was! Charming poem, delightful.
ReplyDeletehmmm...nice and sweet with all the sugar treats...up to that tender kiss and the hunger for more...sounds like you had a delightful time there...
ReplyDeleteYou have really told a wonderful story here. I was captured right within your poem.
ReplyDeleteSweet, delicious memory!
ReplyDeleteYou did a really nice job here. I never thought of the Philippines in this way before. never been there either. Really make it sound wonderful. Thanks for the share, opened my eyes a bit, thanks:)
ReplyDeleteSticky sweet tale of youth, of love, of innocence and naive desire...loved the tale and the images.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely memory, filled with exotic sweetness. Swept me away to the tropics. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteSweet write... great reflection.
ReplyDeleteSounds -er - heavenly! The list of sweet things made my mouth water too. I woud never have known about this city, which sounds enchanting, if not for your post here.
ReplyDeleteA delectable journey. Nice write ~ Rose
ReplyDeletedirty ice-cream is a poem in itself..well done
ReplyDeletesuch brilliant metaphor.
ReplyDeletewell penned entry.
how sweet.
ReplyDeletelove the beautiful memories in your words.
how sweet.
ReplyDeletelove the beautiful memories in your words.
I just had a melty moment reading this...
ReplyDeleteso sweet and delicious and wonderful tasting can really taste the sugar on this one great image
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