he adores
the candle light playing on her sun-kissed skin
eyes closed, she smells of pink corals, and
orange sunset by the beach
for the first time, he is
shy and intimidated by their intimacy,
whispering softly, she says to her new lover,
do not be shy
we have been making love for days
he reaches
to touch her fullness, moonflower white
fragile as a pearl, in his firm arms
she is sensuality, bold and heady
on his lips,
rapture dance of the sea and the sun
he knows
as he writes and sings their music
as he draws and paints their dance
Author's note: Posted for the OpenLinkNight of Real Toads and D'verse Poets Pub - every Tuesday starting at 3pm EST. I am also writing nature themed posts in my other blog.
picture credit: here
original post : http://realmsofbeauty.tumblr.com/post/15910958702/sensuality-does-not-wear-a-watch-but-she-always
Your words really sparkle today, as the put on another great sensual display. Liked how the surroundings really painted the picture.
ReplyDeleteYou wrote this is such an authentic manner. Well crafted.
ReplyDeleteSensuality at it's best.... *sigh*
ReplyDeleteThese lines are perfectly placed, and really suggest to me the union of the lovers described:
ReplyDeletedo not be shy
we have been making love for days
Such beautifully expressed intimacy!
ReplyDeletenice...love the textures in this...and that he captures them as well in music and art...he sees...
ReplyDeleteVery loving poem, and I like the last stanza where music and dance add yet another layer!
ReplyDeletei love the descriptions. very vivid.
ReplyDeleteLove the combination of the couple with the sea and sun images.....
ReplyDeleteThat is making love, not just raw sex, lovely, sensual.
ReplyDeleteMMMMMM sounds like a swell way to spend an afternoon ...loved it thank you x x x
ReplyDeleteoh i love that he sings their music and paints their dance...expressing what he feels..nice..
ReplyDeletelove the idea of painting a dance with fingertips. K.
ReplyDeleteHot write. Flows in as sensual manner as the words themselves illustrate, and the incorporation of the arts in the end was a beautiful touch. thanks
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful and sensuous!
ReplyDeletesparkling, authentic, beautiful and intimate
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, sensual piece!
ReplyDeleteVery erotic, masterfully written.
ReplyDeleteI have lived that third stanza, and you captured it perfectly.
what a yummy read, with all the smells and images you so sweetly speak of in a soft and sensual way that is completely alluring! nice pen!
ReplyDeletemy offering:
http://magicinthebackyard.wordpress.com/2012/01/17/we-make-love/
WoW how cool this is, and adoring!
ReplyDelete...he knows
as he writes and sings their music
as he draws and paints their dance...
LOVELY ending
beautiful...feels so fresh, like new love...but then again, it could be a long cultivated love, renewed in that candlelight:-)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and sweet!
ReplyDelete*he knows
ReplyDeleteas he writes and sings their music
as he draws and paints their dance
Love those lines
A lovely write, Heaven.
"...as he writes and sings their music
ReplyDeleteas he draws and paints their dance"
Love the intimacy and sensuality in this. Beautifully worded!
"...as he writes and sings their music
ReplyDeleteas he draws and paints their dance"
Love the intimacy and sensuality in this. Beautifully worded!
(Oops, Sorry for the double comment, not sure how that happened.)
ReplyDeleteSensual but not crude. Love it!
ReplyDeletehot! the ending gives it just the right touch.
ReplyDeleteIts sensuaous and very enticing... lovely ...
ReplyDelete"on his lips,
rapture dance of the sea and the sun"
Beautiful...
Shashi
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2012/01/whispers-haiku-on-how-i-write-poetry.html
At twitter @VerseEveryDay
Great read all the way through, and love the end! fantastic :)
ReplyDeleteVery romantic write Heaven...
ReplyDeleteThese are my favorites:
ReplyDelete"her fullness, moonflower white"
"he knows
as he writes and sings their music
as he draws and paints their dance"
~Shawna
rosemarymint.wordpress.com
sensuous connection you wove here, nicely penned ~ Rose
ReplyDeleteSensual and sensational.
ReplyDeletedivine..
ReplyDeleteOh...so beautiful, Heaven!! I found the whole thing very 'melty' haaa...really loved the following line which was such a wonderful image:
ReplyDelete'he reaches
to touch her fullness, moonflower white'
Gorgeous!
Love, Eva
(PS, I tried several times to post comment as myself, but it wouldn't take)
your words describing perfectly,
ReplyDeletethe feelings
the thoughts
the wants
wonderful write!
oh how I liked this! a synaesthetic touch - strong descriptions - the sensuality mixed with the colours, scents - a sensate experience! so well written too, nicely done!
ReplyDeletebeautiful and intense
ReplyDeleteSo soft and sensual as I read this... I was whispering in my mind. Nice flow and feel.
ReplyDelete-Christopher
www.HeadenElite.org