Sunday 14 August 2011

Whisper my name

i hold you closer
no hushed sounds, not a whisper  
but love's voice clearly      





dawn comes quickly as 
velvet lips whisper my name 
breaking night's silence  



Author's Note:   This post is for Haiku Heights and the theme is Whisper.   Haiku and Senryu are both Japanese poetry forms that have three lines. The three lines (5,7,5 syllables), if reflecting nature, form a haiku; and if reflecting emotions and life in general, forms a Senryu.


Also shared with One Single Impression, the prompt is Silence.   And Poets United # 62.
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41 comments:

  1. totomai14 August 2011 at 09:38

    very apt photo for both ku. sensual.

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  2. Mary14 August 2011 at 09:40

    Lovely and very sensual writing!

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  3. Anonymous14 August 2011 at 10:03

    velvet lips whisper my name....I love that line, so sensual....

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  4. Pat Hatt14 August 2011 at 11:04

    sensual indeed, just flows form your haiku and feed.

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  5. Brian Miller14 August 2011 at 11:47

    mmm...warm touches...loves voice can certainly be a loud silence...

    and the breaking of it first thing in the morning a very sweet experience...

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  6. hend anwar14 August 2011 at 12:17

    nice

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  7. Harshad Mehta14 August 2011 at 13:15

    Sensual and beautiful.

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  8. Anonymous14 August 2011 at 13:48

    *Deep sigh*

    Enjoyed this.

    -H

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  9. Strummed Words14 August 2011 at 14:19

    Very nice, romantic.

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  10. The Poet14 August 2011 at 14:51

    Sensuously beautiful!

    Thanks for sharing.

    Remove These Satin Sheets...

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  11. Maude Lynn14 August 2011 at 14:54

    Beautiful!

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  12. Anonymous14 August 2011 at 17:39

    beautiful as a hearts beat.



    daily athens

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  13. Judith Westerfield14 August 2011 at 18:10

    Whoa! This is bREATHtaking!

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  14. Linda Jacobs14 August 2011 at 21:04

    Beautifully erotic! Love the image too!

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  15. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry14 August 2011 at 21:32

    love it.


    ;)

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  16. Marbles in My Pocket14 August 2011 at 21:35

    Beautiful and sensually sweet!

    Here's my offering for Potluck 48: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/14/the-lake/

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  17. Anonymous14 August 2011 at 21:53

    hmmm sensuous!! :) love it!
    Happy potluck!!!

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/08/13/words-not-spoken/

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  18. Anonymous14 August 2011 at 21:57

    so sultry, this is awesome!

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  19. Shauna14 August 2011 at 22:58

    quiet sex

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  20. Gowthami Nandigala14 August 2011 at 23:24

    so sensual and purely romantic!

    loved it <3

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  21. Margie14 August 2011 at 23:33

    Beautiful!
    Thank you Heaven for sharing your beautiful writings!
    I always enjoy reading and commenting.

    Margie :)

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  22. henry clemmons15 August 2011 at 00:19

    Very nice haikus. Very nice.

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  23. Chim's World of Literature15 August 2011 at 06:06

    mmmmm amazingly hot ..

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  24. Ramesh Sood15 August 2011 at 13:38

    Oh, what a heavenly bliss!!!!

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  25. Anonymous15 August 2011 at 13:56

    very nice!

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  26. Daydreamertoo15 August 2011 at 15:07

    So short but, very sensual and .... mmmm... Lovely

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  27. Jannie Funster15 August 2011 at 16:35

    Words not needed, very well said and so silkily.

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  28. Lolamouse15 August 2011 at 20:36

    sweet and lovely words.

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  29. Dave King16 August 2011 at 05:33

    Wow!

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  30. Poetry and Icecream16 August 2011 at 08:24

    Beautifully written, very sensual :)

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  31. Ostensible Truth16 August 2011 at 09:30

    brilliantly sensual! nice job!

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  32. Jyoti Mishra16 August 2011 at 11:12

    Love the way u are able to sum up so much intensity in few words :)

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  33. Anonymous16 August 2011 at 13:16

    Beautifully written.
    Thanks for a great read.

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  34. Mike Patrick16 August 2011 at 14:12

    You possess the passion pen. I suspect it is rather like the philosopher’s stone in its power.

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  35. Live2cherish16 August 2011 at 16:05

    romantic one.

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  36. Kathie Brown16 August 2011 at 17:20

    Lovley words and image. I had not heard of a senryu before. Interesting distinction.

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  37. Anonymous16 August 2011 at 20:21

    Smart, Sassy, Sensual...
    Keep flowing and I'll continue to enjoy the journey as a meander these luscious currents...
    SLx

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  38. Jinksy17 August 2011 at 13:26

    The sound of silence...

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  39. Patti18 August 2011 at 08:52

    Wow- that was lovely- sensual and beautifully written! Thanks for the recent comment on my post~~very much appreciated!

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  40. Maureen Walsh21 October 2011 at 19:57

    Oh God, this is absolutely gorgeous! My first visit to your blog! Sheer class!

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  41. Maureen Walsh21 October 2011 at 19:57

    Oh God, this is absolutely gorgeous! My first visit to your blog! Sheer class!

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