Sunday, 14 August 2011

Whisper my name

i hold you closer
no hushed sounds, not a whisper  
but love's voice clearly      





dawn comes quickly as 
velvet lips whisper my name 
breaking night's silence  



Author's Note:   This post is for Haiku Heights and the theme is Whisper.   Haiku and Senryu are both Japanese poetry forms that have three lines. The three lines (5,7,5 syllables), if reflecting nature, form a haiku; and if reflecting emotions and life in general, forms a Senryu.


Also shared with One Single Impression, the prompt is Silence.   And Poets United # 62.









42 comments:

  1. very apt photo for both ku. sensual.

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  2. Lovely and very sensual writing!

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  3. velvet lips whisper my name....I love that line, so sensual....

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  4. sensual indeed, just flows form your haiku and feed.

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  5. mmm...warm touches...loves voice can certainly be a loud silence...

    and the breaking of it first thing in the morning a very sweet experience...

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  6. Beautifully erotic! Love the image too!

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  7. Beautiful and sensually sweet!

    Here's my offering for Potluck 48: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/14/the-lake/

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  8. hmmm sensuous!! :) love it!
    Happy potluck!!!

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/08/13/words-not-spoken/

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  9. so sensual and purely romantic!

    loved it <3

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  10. Beautiful!
    Thank you Heaven for sharing your beautiful writings!
    I always enjoy reading and commenting.

    Margie :)

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  11. So short but, very sensual and .... mmmm... Lovely

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  12. Words not needed, very well said and so silkily.

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  13. Beautifully written, very sensual :)

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  14. Love the way u are able to sum up so much intensity in few words :)

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  15. Beautifully written.
    Thanks for a great read.

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  16. You possess the passion pen. I suspect it is rather like the philosopher’s stone in its power.

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  17. Lovley words and image. I had not heard of a senryu before. Interesting distinction.

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  18. Smart, Sassy, Sensual...
    Keep flowing and I'll continue to enjoy the journey as a meander these luscious currents...
    SLx

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  19. Wow- that was lovely- sensual and beautifully written! Thanks for the recent comment on my post~~very much appreciated!

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  20. Oh God, this is absolutely gorgeous! My first visit to your blog! Sheer class!

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  21. Oh God, this is absolutely gorgeous! My first visit to your blog! Sheer class!

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