I never knew what I was capable of,
until I began writing.
there are journeys we make
alone, into white space, we take
no destination, just the sun for muse
for with each step, our eyes awake
there are open skies we seekwide and deep waters beyond the creek
searching for our voice and words
learns the tongue, coarse with leeks
there are roads we rip and weep
alas, its not ours to keep
no matter how tight we cling, we slip
through rocky mountains, so steep
there are doors we keep closed
like books on shelf with a pressed rose
wild ideas, lover's touch, car trips,
we forget while eating our toast
there are doors we keep closed
like books on shelf with a pressed rose
wild ideas, lover's touch, car trips,
we forget while eating our toast
there are roads we empty of words
stretching far, they strike our chords
cleaving breasts, awakening muse
learns to wield pen like a sword
there are journeys we make
with each step, our eyes awake
with each step, our eyes awake
Author's Note: After one year of blogging, I still don't know where I am heading to except trying out new forms and blogging stuff that interest and challenge me. It has been a wonderful year and I am grateful to all of you who have supported and visited me with kindness and smiles.
and D'verse Poets Pub - OpenLinkNight - Tuesday
Poetry form: Rubiayat Quatrain- Persian verse composed of four lines in a stanza, with the rhyme scheme AABA. I added the last two lines :-) This is my second rubiayat quatrain - my first one is here - thanks to Samuel Peralta.
picture credit: here
Happy Blogoversary, Heaven! :) Have enjoyed reading the poems you posted. Cheers to you and good journey always!
ReplyDeleteThank you Ravenblack for your lovely words ~
DeleteI think you have summed it up so well: there are journeys we make, with each step, our eyes awake. You have created an enduring legacy of your creativity here. I hope your writing always goes from strength to strength.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kerry for all your support and encouragement.
DeleteI enjoy sharing your journey with you and will enjoy seeing where your journey leads you! Happy Blogoversary to you!
ReplyDeleteThank you Mary for your visits and kind words.
DeleteHappy one year anniversary. There is one thing about our lives, we need to realise that we mustn't ever think we can remain in one place. We must change or, we stagnate too. Since I've been reading you, your writing has grown, it has developed so much more depth and feeling.
ReplyDeleteKeep on keeping on Grace, wherever the direction takes you.
Thank you Bren. I try my best to improve on my writing.
DeleteWonderful post! And happy one year anniversary. It took me several years to define my blogging persona, so to speak. Hope you find your groove. It's funny you posted about your muse today, as I did too. Have a great week.
ReplyDeleteThank you Denise for the lovely words. I feel I am always changing my style and persona.
Deletehappy blogoversary...its a journey which you capture so eloquently in your words and along the way if we are lucky, we find those that inspire us and touch our lives...thank you for sharing this year with us...
ReplyDeleteThank you Brian for holding my hand and gifting me with smiles in my humble beginnings. If not for your generous heart, I won't be where I am today. You continue to inspire me Poet ~
Deletecongrats on completing one year Grace! your blog has been a treat for me...keep it up!
ReplyDeleteThank you Ashok for your kind words.
DeleteAhh I love this!...every single little piece. And happy blogoversary!
ReplyDeleteLove this poem, this is my new anthem. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteHappy Blogoversary, Heaven. Always a pleasure to come here. Here's to endless years of happy blogging and great poetry!
ReplyDeleteGrace, what a beautiful journey you story for us on your 1st blogoversary - I expect most of can identify, here too:
ReplyDelete"I never knew what I was capable of,
until I began writing."
Well done...
Happy One Year of Poems!!!! Good for you. We have so enjoyed your journey. I love this poem, especially the last two lines......with each step, our eyes awake. Wonderful!
ReplyDeletevery good poem indeed.and wonderful utilisation of the form.may ur journey continue for many many years.
ReplyDeleteYour poem describes the journey in a wonderful way. Congratulations on your successful year. This is a wondrous path, isn't it?
ReplyDeleteCongrats on the year been a fun ride indeed. Not many know where they are going when they start, but it does become quite the venture, here's to many more.
ReplyDeleteThanks Pat for your support and friendship.
DeleteI thought you would noticed my rhymes :-)
A poem that is also an ars poetica that is also a memorial to a journey that has only just begun. Best wishes on your anniversary, and may you have more discoveries, insights, verses to share along the way.
ReplyDeleteAnd oh! Another rubaiyat! How wonderful is that? :-)
Its a nice form, thanks for sharing it with us.
DeleteThanks for your wonderful wishes ~
I thought for sure you'd been blogging for more than a year. You've accomplished a lot. Great job and congrats!
ReplyDeleteIt seems more than a year! Congratulations on the richness of your journey so far and the wondrous words you have sprinkled on us. I love this poem and it made me think, yes, how aware are we of the passing of time as we 'eat our toast.' Thanks for the footnote re your poetic form. I've read some Persian writings (in translation) but not poets.
ReplyDeleteDenise
Congratulations, "Naughty Girl!"
ReplyDeleteHappy blog anniversary, I have loved reading you and meeting you here. I wish you much happiness on your continued journey.
ReplyDeleteHappy Anniversary...may their be more journeys to fill white pages. This poem was beautiful!
ReplyDeleteHappy Blog Anniversary! May there be many more!
ReplyDeleteI for one am super glad you started blogging, you have lent me some fantastic thoughts, painted me some naked paintings with words and stretched my emotions to fit screen. Heres to another year followed by another....Cheers and lots of love in your general direction...congratulations.
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the cheers and love Corey. I appreciate your support ~
DeleteHappy anniversary!
ReplyDeletecongratulations. alone, into the white space. you capture the spirit so well.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ed for your lovely words.
Deleteooh, I do love when you use rhymes, I usually don't think I'm reading poetry if it doesn't have rhymes :)
ReplyDeleteBig congrats on the first year of blogging! Where's the party? :)
Thanks Dez ~ I think our friends, the rhyming cat and Pat, have influenced your love for rhymes :-)
DeleteHere, have some Canadian wine and cheese ~~~~~
Cheers ~
ooh, give the wine to the drunk Cat the Pat, but I'm taking the cheese :) and I'm off to do some mischief in the dark corner with Daniel Powter, I see you're invited him to the party too :)))
Deletenice...congrats on one year of blogging...it's a journey indeed...and a great and adventurous discovery trail...you never know what's behind the next bend and this is what i love so much about it.. nice capture of that journey with your poem as well...so happy celebrations..smiles
ReplyDeleteThank you Claudia. I appreciate your support and encouragement. Cheers ~
DeleteYOU have absolutely been a joy to read!
ReplyDeletecongratulations on a year of superb writing.
i look forward to many more years.
xoxo
Lisa, thank you for your sweet words. I appreciate it.
DeleteHappy, Happy Anniversary! Keep writing! xoxo
ReplyDeleteThank you for your support and lovely words ~
Deletewith each steps our eyes awake. So beautifully true. Happy Blogoversary Heaven. You are the beauty, and poet voice of the community. dVerse is not dVerse without you.
ReplyDeleteThank you Oceangirl for the love and beautiful words. I am honored to be part of D'verse ~
DeleteYou are such an amazing writer, Grace. LOVE this:
ReplyDelete"there are journeys we make
alone, into white space, we take
no destination"
Thank you for your lovely words Shawna ~
DeleteI appreciate it ~
Happy Anniversary to one of my favorite writers. Loved this poem - keep traveling, the destination is in the journey. Keep writing, lady! You're a real talent.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your support and encouragement. I appreciate it.
DeleteAs so many have said before me - this is a beautiful poem. There are on,y so man phrases and adjectives of praise we have to choose from :-) Happy one year anniversary. I am very happy to have found you.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ellecee. I am lucky to have found you too ~
DeleteHappy blogaversary! You seem to have evolved beautifully. Your writing is lovely. This poem describes your journey so well. Funny how blogging changes us.
ReplyDeleteIt does indeed. Thank you Myrna.
DeleteHappy blogaversary! I hope to read much more of your beautiful writing over the next year! Lovely poem :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Louise for your lovely words. I appreciate it.
DeleteHappy Blogaversary!! I am so happy to find your verse every week and to see where your white road has led you to--and looking forward to many more--
ReplyDeleteThank you Audrey ~ Cheers ~
DeleteHeaven, Happy one year anniversary blogging. Fantastic depiction of how the poetry and poetic journey has taken place and spoke to and through you. Very nice. Thanks
ReplyDeleteThank you Fred for the kind visits and encouragement. I appreciate it.
DeleteFirstly, congratulations on an immense milestone.
ReplyDeleteAnd much props for the poem. Very brilliant.
Thank you skyraft ~ I appreciate your lovely words ~
DeleteLet's raise our glass and toast a cheer
ReplyDeletehere's to another most poetic year! (Sorry...I had no candles) Congratulations on a wonderful year of words and fellowship, and here's to many more!
Cheers Natasha ~ Thank you for support and encouragement~
Deletethere are doors we keep closed
ReplyDeletelike books on shelf with a pressed rose
Beautiful words. I remember stumbling upon your blog quite a while ago (it IS hard to forget as the imagery is often erotic, but beautifully rendered and that is hard to find! Your writing is thoughtful and beautiful and I am glad it isn't sealed up and tucked away somewhere. Obviously, a blog can give you anonymity, but you have a gift of which you can be proud. Cheers on your first year!
Yes, congratulations on your first year. Very well done — keep it up! I love this poem.
ReplyDeleteK
when we start writing something, we usually have no idea what direction it will take
ReplyDeletemessy little girl
"there are journeys we make
ReplyDeletealone, into white space,..."
With each poem, each piece we write, we start that journey anew. A lovely piece, Heaven, to commemorate your Blog's first anniversary!
Happy first year to you!! I love the stanza about the rose pressed...this poem has such an honest voice, really great, Heaven!
ReplyDeleteahhh this was great..a celebration of the poetic voice! i love how you've celebrated an awakening almost- and i know exactly how you feel- once you start writing the world somehow seems different and you see things differently- this was just a great testament to that- and congratulations to you on your 1st year anniversary!
ReplyDeleteWhat did we do before blogs and the internet! The poem captures the excitement of the journey!
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ReplyDeleteAn accomplished set of Quatrains. Congrats on your poetic blogging anniversary.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful verse, Heaven! It is a never ending journey every time. Sadly not many could appreciate the changes unlike what you had shown. Great!
ReplyDeleteHank
Great job of filling the form with artful imagery and ideas. I've enjoyed your work ever since joining up with dVerse last summer. Happy anniversary and keep it coming. Very nice poem here.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations, Heaven~! Blogging is quite the journey into the self.
ReplyDeleteBrava!
Lady Nyo
This is coming late Gracie... but thank you for your Heavenly words .. that make my heart sing every time I read!
ReplyDeleteThe placing of the words helped me to identify the style, even as much as the article in the Pub about it!
Happy Bloggiversary! Love you!!!!!!!!!!
Congratulations Grace on completing your first year of poetry. I want to repeat how proud I am of your accomplishments, and how far your poetry has come. Also how much you have developed as a writer. Your confidence has deepened and your subject matter has broadened to the point you take on art for arts sake, ars poetica as Sam said for your subject today. It's a wonderful exploration of your journey to date, and a guidepost along the journeys to come. Well done!
ReplyDeleteGay, your words mean a lot to me. Thank you for your patience and support of my earlier writings. I hope to improve and broaden my work and try out other forms.
DeleteWonderful journey...thanks for bringing us along.
ReplyDeleteExcellent as usual Heaven. This celebrates so much of your journey which I thank you for allowing me to share in all its richness and illumination. For there's light on this road, along with the love of words and poetic revelation.
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ReplyDelete*** Happy Blogiversary, Grace!!! ***
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How do I begin to celebrate you? Your words have continually washed through every part of me this past year. You've been sexy and cerebral, sweet and encouraging. You've painted pictures through your poetry and prose which I've carried to bed, lain upon my pillow and let drift lazily through my dreams. You've endlessly aroused me, stirred and challenged me to expand my writing. You have at times taken my breath away.
You are, my dear, my definition of wonderful and I look forward to another year of reading and learning you.
xo
Thank you for the music and lovely words...I really appreciate your support and encouragement. Cheers to you ~
DeleteHappy Blogiversary to you!!! I've enjoyed reading your work throughout this year. You have inspired me to aim higher with my haiku and tanka. I wish you happiness and a benevolent muse this coming year!
ReplyDeleteThank you Lolamouse ~ I appreciate your kind wishes and visits ~
Deletethose first two lines and image - wow! ;-)
ReplyDeleteIt is great that your inspiration
ReplyDeletebecame a part of life's narration--
now your words open fresh to life's wonder,
expressing the moods of daily sensation
you have one year of writing put under--
but it's the process that matters, not the occasional blunder;
and as you, like all of us, master life's gestation,
more and more, we hear your thunder
congratulations Heaven !!!
ReplyDeleteloved the way u weaved the journey in words :)
HAPPY BLOGOVERSARY!
ReplyDeleteYou write good.
xoo
HAPPY BLOGOVERSARY!
ReplyDeleteYou write good.
xoo
Happy blogsarry!..
ReplyDeleteJJRod'z
Happy Blogversary ... great milestone. I have enjoyed your first year, and look forward to more ...
ReplyDeleteI celebrated mine in January, and I am not sure where mine will take me or for how long!!! Enjoying the journey while I am on it!!
Thank you for sharing with us!! :)
I'm late, but here.. Congratulation on your year of beautiful poetry. You should at least think of making a blog book for yourself. I know it would be great with your creativity...
ReplyDeletePeace be within you..
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