sweet cream drips
all over our shirts
hands sticky
cheeks stickier
this isn't easy
as we synchronize
our tongues lapping
me here, you there
until we get to the last piece,
which you gallantly offer me
we have learned two things:
messy ain't bad,
and giving in,
is the best way to keep us going
Posted for Flash Fiction Friday - Tell a story in 55 words - For the G-Man.
One of my top searched words - Old Couple In love - so here it is, readers. Thanks for the visit.
picture credit: here
The messier the better!
ReplyDeleteLoved your sentimental 55 Grace
It made me smile
Kudo's on the Yahtzee
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
Thanks for the visit G-man.
DeleteThis is sweet!
ReplyDeleteThanks MZ ~ Yes for my comment thingy is working ~
Deletemessy is def not bad...and giving in...will def keep you off the couch...ha...smiles.
ReplyDeleteI agree Brian ~
DeleteHehe... it all sounds very yummy, deliciously yummy in fact.
ReplyDeleteThey look like they are enjoying it a great deal ~ Thanks ~
DeleteHaha... you had me fooled here. Another great one!
ReplyDeleteThanks Laurie ~
DeleteSometimes messy can be quite fun! Very well written :)
ReplyDeleteYes, it can be ~ Thanks ~
DeleteAwe. As long as the giving in is not always one sided. But even if it is, this couple looks like giving in isn't so bad. Very nice write!
ReplyDeleteThanks Margaret ~ Enjoyed your share as well ~
DeleteLove the poem and accompanying image. You hit a homer with this one!
ReplyDeleteHa!
ReplyDeleteWarm Aloha from Waikiki
Comfort Spiral
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Messy ain't bad at all! (grin)
ReplyDeleteYou're not old yet when you still don't mind getting messy!
ReplyDeleteHow sweet! I have to admit, my first image was of a kid sharing with a dog. :-) This is much better!
ReplyDeleteThe messy would stir up my ocd though, that just might ruin my flow..haha...I see you changed the comment way too, nice!
ReplyDeletelol - unexpected and unexpectedly sweet!
ReplyDeleteLove the picture and LOVED your story! :P Mmmmm... oops! I spilled. :)
ReplyDeletemessy is good...
ReplyDeletesweet 55
Lovely 55 and a joy to share your joy!
ReplyDeleteMr.Trellis and I sometimes start nibbling from one end each of a frankfurter sausage. Not so messy - but results in a meeting of minds with but a single thought
That's my Ada! Ever the practical one...
DeleteA sweet treat from every viewpoint! Great 55 ♥
ReplyDeleteSweet indeed, Heaven.
ReplyDeleteAgreed -- on all the sweetness. And love the photo.
ReplyDeletexoox
Mmm. Love synchronized tongues. :)
ReplyDeletePerfect photo to depict your poem, though I had other things in mind as well ;-)
ReplyDelete-H
Nailed it - good, smile-inducing write. =)
ReplyDeleteblushing,
ReplyDeletehow sweet.
lovely 55.
Loved the opic, loved the poem... It reminded me of me.. lol.. Miss direction that is... Always bringing creativity to your blog..
ReplyDeleteI have just visited Morningerection blog. I see he choose to post your poem Devotion for Feb. Poetic License. Congrats. I was also honored to be posted with poets like yourself.... There is a poem above yours maned "I Would Burn".. Impressive ... Check it out if you haven't already. Personally, I had forgotten about it.
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They are having fun and this is a fun poem!
ReplyDeleteKeeps the dreaded boredom at bay. Lovely sweet 55.
ReplyDeletenice... I think you have the message for something lasting
ReplyDeleteLove this....it sounds so much like my husband and I...only it is more of a race to see who will get the last bite or lick...lol
ReplyDeleteawww...
ReplyDeletesexy romantic.