Saturday, 4 February 2012

Temptation





temptation came by the window
bold and inviting were his words:
what if, why not, and right now


inhaling his challenge, she slithered 
closer and danced up a storm, found 
she likes spicy food, and can lie smoothly   


locked in his firm arms, she learns her flaws




Posted for Imaginary Garden with Real Toads:   Prompt is Temptation by Fireblossom Fridays.

21 comments:

  1. One resists too long,
    and then there you go ...

    Sweet temptation.

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  2. Oh this is just bloody excellent!

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  3. naughty and delicious.

    of course i loved it!

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  4. That's the beauty and the danger of being drawn beyond one's usual boundaries...one meets another, unsuspected, self there.

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  5. he likes spicy food...ha...she learns her flaws is a line that sticks out to me as well...nice heaven...

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  6. Thank you for your encouragement. Brian, you are very perceptive.

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  7. The urges came to a climax indeed, being sucked from the safe little world one remains. Oh and I'm sure that window would be a delight for peeping toms too..lol

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  8. Sweet and sexy!

    And love the photo. I'm very much a voyeur so this gets my imagination racing. ;)

    Sign me this time,
    ~B

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  9. Excellently written, very well said.
    K

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  10. "temptation came by the window" is such an intriguing first line!

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  11. LOVE this, Heaven! the last line is killer!

    dani ♥

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  12. Well, you've just gotta go for it, I say!

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  13. love that last line, heaven- good write!

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  14. She learns her flaws and apparently is at peace with them, or at least a comfortable stand-still. Intriguing description of temptation.

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  15. short piece, but very rich in content. You do indeed provoke...

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  16. love this. hopefully she likes what she finds!

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  17. Superbly inviting. And Hot!

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