Thursday, 14 March 2013

Again

find me
in your fingers-
soft as a ripened peach,
musky as wild spring- and i'm yours

again








Posted for D'verse Poets Pub - Cinquain - Five lines of 2-4-6-8-2 syllabic count.

 Picture credit:   Artist Rosie Hardy 
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61 comments:

  1. Claudia14 March 2013 at 08:05

    hmmm nice...i like the soft as ripened peach image and the musky scent of spring...always love when i can smell a poem...nice...

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  2. Susan Daniels14 March 2013 at 08:14

    Oh, this is yummy.

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  3. Janine Bollée14 March 2013 at 08:16

    The juices running

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    1. Scarlet14 March 2013 at 08:52

      it is..ha..ha...Thanks for the visit Aprille ~

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  4. brudberg14 March 2013 at 08:22

    Oh this is very sensous and nice, and we need to spring to melt a little.

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    1. Scarlet14 March 2013 at 08:52

      I wish spring is here now...Thanks for the visit ~

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  5. Mary14 March 2013 at 08:36

    warmly seductive! Nice spice.

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  6. DEZMOND14 March 2013 at 08:36

    spicy!

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  7. Brian Miller14 March 2013 at 08:40

    musky as wild spring...i am yours again....whew...you got heat in a few words....very nice grace....

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  8. Scarlet14 March 2013 at 08:51

    Thank you Laurie ~

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  9. The Zen of Gavin14 March 2013 at 09:10

    With your use of words my mind is able to see so much more. Keeping to myself...

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  10. Unknown14 March 2013 at 09:14

    So delicious...

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  11. kelvin s.m.14 March 2013 at 09:34

    ...intimate... and quite an easy surrender that forgets yesterday's pain... i guess that's the mystery in when love takes over... nicely Grace... smiles...

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  12. ninotaziz14 March 2013 at 09:45

    I am sending this to my hubby, Grace - now. Too bad - he's asleep!

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  13. Outcast14 March 2013 at 09:59

    For such a short poem it's absolutely brilliant Heaven, just love it, intense and intimate, just perfect.

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  14. Unknown14 March 2013 at 10:31

    Love, love, love it. I just love passionate verbal expression.

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  15. Kathy Reed14 March 2013 at 10:37

    Oh yes, a man's hands;) You got a lot in that one;)

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  16. Anonymous14 March 2013 at 11:16

    Dreamy that's for sure. :)

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  17. David Patrick Torres14 March 2013 at 11:28

    Bravo! The peach image is perfect!

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  18. Anonymous14 March 2013 at 11:29

    WOW!!! That is stunning Grace. Adelaide Crapsey would never have believed her form could be so sensual and sexual - being a nice Victorian girl, and a minister's daughter to boot, it would never have crossed her mind :-)

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    1. Scarlet14 March 2013 at 11:43

      Thank you for wonderful post on cinquain, Tony ~ I like bringing a touch of sensuality to poetry forms :-)

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  19. Siggi in Downeast Maine14 March 2013 at 12:00

    This is wonderful...
    not the kind of words that trip into my computer yet...
    very special
    Peace

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  20. Pat Hatt14 March 2013 at 12:19

    And where will those fingers linger? haha very sensual indeed

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  21. Unknown14 March 2013 at 12:19

    My first reaction is... damn! Love the peach and the last line... perfect!

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  22. Unknown14 March 2013 at 12:36

    SO sexy!!!!

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  23. Margaret14 March 2013 at 12:52

    Good Grief. This is more than a "touch of sensuality". I think I'm drowning :)

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  24. JayG14 March 2013 at 13:37

    Again. Always fresh, exciting, even in familiarity.

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  25. Anonymous14 March 2013 at 13:38

    A passionate Cinquain. Lovely.

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  26. Unknown14 March 2013 at 14:21

    Absolutely beautiful. Very sensual.

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  27. Anonymous14 March 2013 at 14:26

    such a lush cinquain

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  28. Anonymous14 March 2013 at 14:30

    BEAUTIFULLY scented!

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  29. Heidi14 March 2013 at 14:40

    What a sexy cinquain! I love your writing Grace!

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  30. kaykuala14 March 2013 at 15:09

    Sensuously beautiful,Grace! Nicely!

    Hank

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  31. dragyonfly14 March 2013 at 15:26

    EVERY part of this works.
    perfect selection of words-emotion-sensual
    my personal favorite line...."musky as wild spring"
    I didn't even notice the walls of the cinequain
    whew...thanks!!

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  32. Panchali14 March 2013 at 17:12

    Ahem..a truly sensual piece. Lovely!

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  33. Anonymous14 March 2013 at 17:19

    I like your imagery - soft and ripened peach, musky as wild spring. Very sensual. :-)

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  34. Anonymous14 March 2013 at 17:23

    You didn't have to write a poem about me : )
    Very hot verse, girl. I was gonna quick the smoke, but maybe one more after this. But all that aside, it is very well written. Smooth as silk as always.

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  35. Dana Dampier14 March 2013 at 18:26

    Wow... seductive and sweet!

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  36. TCPC14 March 2013 at 19:12

    wonderfully intimate!

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  37. Nilanjana Bose14 March 2013 at 20:09

    musky as wild spring, wonderful and sensual.

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  38. Rosemary Nissen-Wade15 March 2013 at 00:01

    Oh, perfect! Including the pause before the last line.

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  39. Wolfsrosebud15 March 2013 at 01:34

    so soft and real... done with grace

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  40. Anonymous15 March 2013 at 01:47

    I knew you'd have something good for us! Suh-weet!!

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  41. Helen15 March 2013 at 04:58

    Sweet lust indeed!

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  42. Anonymous15 March 2013 at 04:59

    Very creative and poetic piece of writing !

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  43. Anonymous15 March 2013 at 08:02

    very effective. I feel all soft and receptive-like after reading this one. lovely.

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  44. RMP15 March 2013 at 10:46

    wow! that's a steamy little number. nicely done.

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  45. Truedessa16 March 2013 at 03:40

    soft and sensuous..

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  46. ashok 17 March 2013 at 00:48

    sweet & soft...

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  47. madigs17 March 2013 at 16:56

    ...mmmmm...

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  48. Jannie Funster17 March 2013 at 17:09

    It's wild spring here now. Which will give way to wild summer and fall. :)

    Peaches and herb. :)

    Pure Heaven.

    xoxo

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  49. Anonymous18 March 2013 at 02:23

    It made me think of them in a meadow! Beautiful! Thank you, as always.

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  50. Karen from Mentor19 March 2013 at 06:47

    scent and touch intertwined. nicely, nicely done.

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  51. just a girl20 March 2013 at 15:18

    i've missed reading you grace. as always, i love this.

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  52. Anonymous19 April 2013 at 16:02

    "Yum"

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  53. grapeling15 June 2013 at 04:54

    My. Oh. My.

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