Thursday, 8 September 2011

White windows




some days
i feel blue
wishing for earth
to stop spinning
play with fallen
brown, yellow leaves
on moist ground

some days
i feel mellow
counting apples
i plucked from trees   
crunchy and tangy
perfect for apple pies

days tucked at edges
nights unfurling arms   
before moon rises,
windows will be encased
white nostalgic frames  


Author's Note:   Re-posted for Poetry Jam - the prompt is windows
For Flash Fiction Friday (G-Man) And Poets United:The Thursday Think Tank #65 - Windows

Over the long holiday weekend, we went apple picking up North of our city, and enjoyed grilled sweet corn and meat.  Our friend baked us a delicious apple pie which we consumed right away.  The weather was  overcast with cool air;  a sure sign of autumn's arrival.      And yes, that is how I feel about the autumn season.

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43 comments:

  1. Anonymous8 September 2011 at 16:51

    what a pretty write

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  2. Eileen T O'Neill .....8 September 2011 at 16:55

    A very nice look at life both from outside the window and inside looking out!
    Lovely words....

    Eileen

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  3. Brother Ollie8 September 2011 at 17:07

    you put this all together perfectly...great flow

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  4. Ed Pilolla8 September 2011 at 17:44

    lovely seasons, from the inside out.

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  5. Jannie Funster8 September 2011 at 17:48

    days tucked at edges, I really like that!

    We used to eat crap apples so so so so sour, no sugar could ever save them for pie.

    LOVE the photo, me being a big window and lupines fan.

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  6. ayala8 September 2011 at 18:10

    A beautiful poem.

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  7. Susannah8 September 2011 at 18:25

    "days tucked at edges
    nights unfurling arms
    before moon rises,"

    ...really nice! :-)

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  8. Anonymous8 September 2011 at 18:35

    Beautiful, Heaven! Puts me in touch with autumn, my favourite season : )
    -Eva

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  9. Mystic_Mom8 September 2011 at 19:37

    Love how this feels, how it just is crisp and juicy like the apples...wonderfully done!

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  10. Pat Hatt8 September 2011 at 19:44

    And thus summer has come to a close, very nice write. Sounds like apple picking was enjoyed.

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  11. Brian Miller8 September 2011 at 19:44

    mmm...sounds like a wonderful weekend and good food too...love corn...fun little verse as well heaven....

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  12. G-Man8 September 2011 at 20:31

    Watching the Seasons change and the World going by from your window...
    I Love The Harvest!
    Loved your 55
    Thanks Heaven for playing today, please have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  13. PattiKen8 September 2011 at 20:35

    Autumn in a nutshell. I liked this a lot, especially the second stanza. Where's my rolling pin?hugatish

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  14. Daydreamertoo8 September 2011 at 20:43

    This is lovely. Gentle, lazy, I could almost taste the crips bitter sweetness of the apples and hear the crunch as it was bitten into.
    Lovely writing.

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  15. Cloudia8 September 2011 at 21:02

    What a lovely blog and poem!

    Thank you for kindly visiting so that I might discover you :)


    Aloha from Waikiki;


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  16. Raining Iguanas8 September 2011 at 21:09

    Photo stopped me. Poem kept me. +++

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  17. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry8 September 2011 at 21:19

    picking apples during September or Fall season is of one of the best,

    what a stunning 55, your window piece is lovely.

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  18. Anonymous8 September 2011 at 21:41

    Lovely piece...

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  19. Anonymous8 September 2011 at 22:02

    I must echo the praise for
    "days tucked at edges
    nights unfurling arms"-- beautiful imagery, striking metaphor. :)

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  20. Unknown8 September 2011 at 22:02

    soothing, romantic, easy. nice write.

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  21. Margaret8 September 2011 at 22:09

    I reiterate what Jannie & Susannah said...

    And where DO you get these photo of people with PERFECT bodies! THIS is why I insist on the lights off.... LOL ;P

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  22. Laurie Kolp8 September 2011 at 22:13

    Very comforting and stress-free. Can I go?

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  23. Anonymous8 September 2011 at 23:44

    Really enjoyed this calming, peaceful view through the window, Heaven. Lovely...

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  24. Mike Patrick9 September 2011 at 01:52

    Autumn throug a white framed window. You hold a lovely view of the world.

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  25. Madhulika9 September 2011 at 04:33

    nice blog....
    Loved your template :) :)
    keep writing.. happy blogging...
    Stay Connected...!!!

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  26. Cad9 September 2011 at 06:15

    I think some of your leaves floated in my direction!

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  27. Bubba9 September 2011 at 07:16

    Perfect words to describe the cusp of the next season descending upon us.

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  28. Unknown9 September 2011 at 12:44

    Oh, it's good to be able to roll with our moods. Sometimes I fight them. Love this phrase, "days tucked at edges" :)

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  29. Claudia9 September 2011 at 13:29

    i usually grab my sax and play the blues when i feel blue...smiles but playing with fallen leaves and plucking apples sounds like the perfect thing to do as well..

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  30. Ella9 September 2011 at 15:48

    I agree, I love the view in and outside! Really wonderful~

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  31. Anonymous9 September 2011 at 23:41

    with poetry you weave immense far reaching imagery. beautifully done. windows does inspire. :)

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  32. Kalyan10 September 2011 at 02:03

    simply beautifully captured shot and the lovely lines...nicely crafted!

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  33. Fireblossom10 September 2011 at 08:00

    This is perfect for a quiet Saturday morning, which is what it is as I write this comment. I love both the poem and the picture.

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  34. Nara Malone10 September 2011 at 08:20

    Lovely fall theme. I especially enjoyed that last stanza. Beautiful.

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  35. Shauna10 September 2011 at 12:06

    O. adore: days tucked at edges,
    the phrase of yours as well as those days I feel safe and the earth
    smells delish. It is fun having as
    many moods as their are seasons.

    Love this poem - life affirming.

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  36. Victoria10 September 2011 at 16:15

    A bit nostalgic with a taste of the different moods that cross our lives.

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  37. Sherry Blue Sky11 September 2011 at 13:41

    Lovely to read and imagine...."days tucked at the edges." Perfection.

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  38. Robert Gibson: PWES Editor13 September 2011 at 07:48

    This is Heavenly .... ;)

    Pardon the pun, I couldn't resist ;)

    Lovely poem hon :)

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  39. Mary2 November 2011 at 18:31

    When one feels blue or mellow, nothing like looking out a window framed in white to raise one's spirits. Nice post.

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  40. Shauna5 November 2011 at 00:30

    sweet, charming, could live inside
    the last verse and the pic. with
    a lover of course.

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  41. Poetry of the Day5 November 2011 at 23:03

    this poem is wonderful!

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  42. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall6 November 2011 at 15:29

    it is very beautiful.

    :)

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  43. Helen8 November 2011 at 04:09

    I want to visit the days you describe ... the image you shared.

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