No Song To Me In The Numb Hours ~ Kenia Cris
I ran out to the trees
They stood silent grey
In the waning light of dusk
Hiding my nakedness, I saw
A sign “reserved” painted
On a shiny chair, so I took
My paper and pen, and wrote
Of bridges I have burnt
Of lips I have kissed
Of boat cruises I want to take
Of ice-capped mountains I see
It was not enough
To quiver the leaves
To soften dry bark
To mend tired limbs
To seed crushed roots
So I folded my words
Into a paper boat
And left it for the trees
To dream of the sky and sea.
Posted for Imaginary Garden with Real Toads: The Sunday Challenge- Featuring Kenia Cris
Shared with Poets United
Picture credit: Kenia Cris
You really set the forest ablaze from its murky nature of the pic, like the thought of the paper boat too.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the visit Pat ~
DeleteHow moving! This is a really great poem Grace. I'm glad I stopped by to read it.
ReplyDeleteThank you ~
Deletenice....love how you brought in the paper boat element to this...a bit surreal, but so is the image...and perhaps the rains will carry the boat to the ones that need to read them for you. smiles.
ReplyDeleteI like that thought Brian. Thanks for your visit ~
Delete"So I folded my words
ReplyDeleteInto a paper boat
And left it for the trees"
Just beautiful! Love the direction you took this picture :)
Oh, this is sooooooo beautiful, I absolutely love it!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant ending! Folding your words into a paper boat... :)
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely... especially:
ReplyDeleteSo I folded my words
Into a paper boat
And left it for the trees
To dream of the sky and sea
Wow... what an absolutely amazing write!
ReplyDeleteGorgeous!
ReplyDeleteI love
"So I folded my words
Into a paper boat
And left it for the trees."
How wonderful this imagery is...I truly enjoyed this!
ReplyDeleteIt made me long for that natural connection.
ReplyDeleteSo I folded my words
ReplyDeleteInto a paper boat
I have fallen in love with the line, that image! Ah, I see others have as well. ha ha. Nicely done!
So very moving. <3 I'm touched by your poem because it tells my silence. The collage is really about leaving dreams behind. <3
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. Thanks for writing. <3
I am happy to write and make your picture shine. It is beautiful.
DeleteThanks for the visit ~
Verrry nice!
ReplyDeleteI'm sure the trees are grateful.
ReplyDeleteA very tender poem.
wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!
ReplyDeleteYou make the world such a dreamy place to be :)
ReplyDeleteLove your poems ..
The fog and a boat...the lake of words..of dreams. Love it!
ReplyDeleteThis is one of my favorites from your works. The honesty and brevity combine to create a feeling that nicely accompanies Kenia's image. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeletemmmmmmm.....wow, that was incredible, the lines, the imagery and the soft spoken tone. Just mmmmmm.....
ReplyDeleteexquisite piece.beautiful lines.
ReplyDeleteVery dreamy, melancholy and hopeful. I like it a lot.
ReplyDeleteNice poem! Keep it coming!
ReplyDeleteSometimes it is difficult to put into words how something (writing)makes you feel.....so I'm not going to spoil this wonderful feeling your poem has given me by writing any words to explain it.
ReplyDeleteFolding the poem into a paper boat - that was inspired! What a wonderful compliment to the image.
ReplyDeleteThis is just exquisite!Lovely feel to this---
ReplyDeleteThis is too good...very mature writing!
ReplyDeleteNice. Great words for the photo.
ReplyDeleteDreamy and beautiful! I loved it~
ReplyDeletefor some reason i'm hearing
ReplyDeletethe forest by the cure.
you're brilliant heaven.
you really are.
This is incredibly lovely - and original. Love the closing lines! Beautiful writing!
ReplyDeleteYes Grace! We often verbalize but putting our thoughts on paper soothes the muddled minds. Otherwise 'it was not enough,to mend tired limbs or
ReplyDeleteto seed crushed roots' Beautifully expressed!
Hank
I love the dreamlike tone of this poem. It fits the image so perfectly.
ReplyDeleteThere are so many things I like about this. I like the title and how it conflicts with the movement in the first stanza. I like the single lines, how they break the rhythm and declare the importance of what follows. They also make their own short, powerful poem when pulled and read alone. I love the lists build the urgency and loss. And of course, the last line is perfect. One of my favorites here, most definitely.
ReplyDeletea lovely, thoughtful, inspiring response to Kenia's photo...
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