He was always telling her she is beautiful.
She sighs and wishes she can go out and feel the sun on her skin.
She feels like a cocooned ball, swallowed white in self pity and depression.
One day, she takes out his unopened birthday gift: a brush, oils of paint and canvas.
She reads his note once more:
You are beautiful.
You are beautiful.
She looks at canvas with sadness and begins painting.
First, with anger and sorrow, then with acceptance and hope.
Her canvas bursts with tears and passion in all the colours of life.
When the doctors came to take off the bandages, she didn't feel fear nor
apprehension. She touches the scars from the car accident, her memories
of that night stinging her eyes.
apprehension. She touches the scars from the car accident, her memories
of that night stinging her eyes.
Holding the mirror to see her face at last, she sees what he has been saying all the time.
After all, his heart beats in her core.
After all, his heart beats in her core.
Author's Note: Posted for The Mag 110 - I am trying my hand in micro fiction writing and have altered the picture a bit. Shared with Poets United.
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Fabulous take on the prompt !
ReplyDeleteThanks Bren ~
DeleteVery nice twist. Let's hope she can hang on to her new found confidence! I liked this very much. I think your micro fiction is off to a very good start.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the lovely words Margaret ~
Deletewell done. Very different than what I am used to reading from you. Middle stanza my favorite; all that emotion released in the art, much like poetry.
ReplyDeletewasn't expecting that!!! nice ending.
ReplyDeletelovely, hopeful and positively romantic.very nice read.
ReplyDeleteUnique take on the prompt...lovely...
ReplyDeletenice spun grace....nice progression to the tale as well as we uncover a bit more of their story...i take it he is dead and she literally has his heart...
ReplyDeleteThank you Brian for the encouragement. Yes, you got the heart of it ~
DeleteOh, that's sad... beautiful writing Grace. You should try out Flashy Fiction.
Deletean intriguing story that held my interest
ReplyDeletemore please.
Great take on the prompt, and wonderful to have the microfiction element. Story behind the story. K.
ReplyDeleteNice! That last line is a shocker!
ReplyDeleteOh my, I was not ready for that last line. Both heartbreaking and hopeful at the same time.
ReplyDeleteWow, a tale well-spun!
ReplyDeletewe are all beautiful
ReplyDeleteThe image we think is there may take a while to be replaced...
ReplyDeleteNice piece!
Wander
I love what you did with the picture! Lovely!
ReplyDeleteGreat piece, Grace. You should try Flashy Fiction. There are prompts everyday. The link is on my blog.
ReplyDeleteSoemtimes joy follows saddness.
ReplyDeletethis one proves you really write well...i am learning from you! thanks for sharing...
ReplyDeleteA tragedy creates a realization. It's an acknowledgement of feelings for the other that makes it beautiful. Great write, Heaven!
ReplyDeleteHank
i'm really in like with this one heaven.
ReplyDeletenicely done!
A tragic tale but you spun it wonderfully, the story feel to it was what made it for me and the emotional angle, nicely done!
ReplyDeletewe all wish we had someone that the love is so deep their heart beats in our core
ReplyDeletemirrored
I often wonder how much of the donor is reflected through the reciever.
ReplyDeleterel
Strong heart beating in your core!
ReplyDeleteThe triumph of hope and belief - very moving.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written ... I also thought about the donor heart.
ReplyDeleteAwww! Beautiful! You did a wonderful job here.
ReplyDeleteLovely idea, really well worked out.
ReplyDeletevery nicely written and realistic
ReplyDeleteI was there years ago after a car accident tho I have to say I was grateful to have eyes and a face (several layers of plastic surgery later...)
have a great week
An intense and brilliant write Heaven. Perfect for the prompt! :-)
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely - and we are all beautiful!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Mirrors never lies... beautiful poem ,love this so much !
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful!!! I love that he still speaks to her even after death. Such a wonderful, touching piece!
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