Wednesday 7 September 2011

All of Me

some nights

i just want 

to watch her

slow and sensuous waltz


breathing in


my warm musky scent







some nights 

i just want to 

let myself go

inhibitions, control, fears

and 

let her have


all of me







Notes:  Some nights, I just want to write for myself.   No form, no inhibitions.


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14 comments:

  1. Brian Miller7 September 2011 at 23:10

    i think on some level we all have those nights...and it is good to cut loose at times...

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  2. Anonymous8 September 2011 at 00:08

    sometimes it is good to give into those nights ;)

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  3. Anonymous8 September 2011 at 00:22

    Absolutely loved this! Glad your wrote it. ;-)

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  4. Pat Hatt8 September 2011 at 07:33

    Agreed some nights that's all most of us want to do.

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  5. ayala8 September 2011 at 08:22

    sensual and beautiful...some nights that's all we need.

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  6. 1ManView8 September 2011 at 13:26

    Structured writing is part of being in control, following the rules to the letter. But writing for one self is why we write, it makes us feel like a kid inside all over again.. Even though I was in awe of your different styles of writing, I had miss "the you". Welcome back, and please visit us kids more often... You know I love this write in the second voice... Very sensuous... 1Manview ...

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  7. Maude Lynn8 September 2011 at 14:13

    I'm glad that you did! Wow!

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  8. Ed Pilolla8 September 2011 at 15:47

    want to swallow this...
    great write:)

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  9. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry8 September 2011 at 21:21

    amazing..

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  10. Margaret8 September 2011 at 22:06

    Wow. "Hot Stuff"! It grabbed my husbands attention! :)

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  11. Life8 September 2011 at 23:30

    i mean how do explain all the feelings in just a few lines...:)
    and all you write is so very true with every being...and the best part you don't inhibit yourself from writing with such a flow of open-mindedness....that's the beauty of your poetry...:)

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  12. Cad9 September 2011 at 06:17

    I wish you could convince Ada to feel the same...

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  13. Scarlet9 September 2011 at 08:27

    This version is actually the condensed version. The original is much longer and more descriptive. However I have learned that by putting a few choice words, it can send the same message and sometimes more powerful than a full description. I am glad to note that my mood resonated with you. Thanks for the visit ~

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    1. Anonymous14 April 2012 at 22:41

      Dickinson would agree.
      She wrote in an aphoristic manner too.

      I myself don't always have the patience or attention span to read OR write longer pieces.

      But sometimes we are left wanting more. . .
      like with your piece of all-of-you here.
      ;D

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