Saturday, 3 September 2011

Slowly

unfold me gently
with deep lingering kisses   
searing my skin pink 





unwrap me slowly
peeling each tissue to gaze
gem in jewelled folds





Poetry form:   Haiku (3 lines; 17 syllables)

For Haiku Heights Challenge # 62:   My choice for the prompt is slowly.   

picture credit:  gildam.tumblr.com

21 comments:

  1. Um doce e sensual desnudar... entre beijos e caricias!


    Beijos meus!
    AL

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  2. passionate, sensual, tenderly written haiku.. loved it! :) the image too is apt..

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  3. mmm...this sounds like a delicious afternoon...smiles. have a lovely weekend....

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  4. hmmmm a heavenly way to spend a day ;)

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  5. Yes quite the moment to be in, with just a touch of sin..haha

    Have a great long weekend too!

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  6. soft, sensual, creamy even. the gem is the thing, tho. your art is lovely with this. i want to nap in that satin sheet after i have peeled you away:)

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  7. This has such a soft eroticism. Love this, gorgeous photo.

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  8. Ummm! I like this one. It's delicious!

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  9. Oh I,like this very. Such a very sensual Haiku. Beautifully done.



    Melanie

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  10. sensual sinful senryu. Beautiful.

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  11. A beautiful piece of writing Heaven.
    It flowed wonderfully and made me go back and read it again, and again.
    Thanks for a great read.

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  12. Now a days I wonder more about unfolding the day.. and you are talking about sheets.. well..you have put it absolutely like an artistic adventure..

    I am here:

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.com/2011/09/weeds-grow-i-remove-them.html

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  13. I was going to say "sensual," but too many other said it already, so I'll content myself with SEXY!

    Day 4: Corn in the Wash

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  14. A perfect match of verse and picture.

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  15. ooooooooooooooooo


    I love this


    Wanna unwrap somebody now ....

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