Saturday, 3 September 2011

Slowly

unfold me gently
with deep lingering kisses   
searing my skin pink 





unwrap me slowly
peeling each tissue to gaze
gem in jewelled folds





Poetry form:   Haiku (3 lines; 17 syllables)

For Haiku Heights Challenge # 62:   My choice for the prompt is slowly.   

picture credit:  gildam.tumblr.com
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21 comments:

  1. A.S.3 September 2011 at 10:20

    Um doce e sensual desnudar... entre beijos e caricias!


    Beijos meus!
    AL

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  2. Vinay Leo R.3 September 2011 at 10:36

    passionate, sensual, tenderly written haiku.. loved it! :) the image too is apt..

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  3. Brian Miller3 September 2011 at 10:36

    mmm...this sounds like a delicious afternoon...smiles. have a lovely weekend....

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  4. Anonymous3 September 2011 at 10:53

    hmmmm a heavenly way to spend a day ;)

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  5. Pat Hatt3 September 2011 at 11:00

    Yes quite the moment to be in, with just a touch of sin..haha

    Have a great long weekend too!

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  6. Ed Pilolla3 September 2011 at 13:17

    soft, sensual, creamy even. the gem is the thing, tho. your art is lovely with this. i want to nap in that satin sheet after i have peeled you away:)

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  7. Barry3 September 2011 at 13:35

    This has such a soft eroticism. Love this, gorgeous photo.

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  8. Anonymous3 September 2011 at 15:34

    Ummm! I like this one. It's delicious!

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  9. Anonymous3 September 2011 at 17:03

    grrr!

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  10. Cassiopeia Rises3 September 2011 at 17:27

    Oh I,like this very. Such a very sensual Haiku. Beautifully done.



    Melanie

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  11. andy sewina3 September 2011 at 22:17

    Sounds wonderful!

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  12. vivinfrance4 September 2011 at 02:41

    sensual sinful senryu. Beautiful.

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  13. Anonymous4 September 2011 at 07:40

    A beautiful piece of writing Heaven.
    It flowed wonderfully and made me go back and read it again, and again.
    Thanks for a great read.

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  14. Ramesh Sood4 September 2011 at 08:52

    Now a days I wonder more about unfolding the day.. and you are talking about sheets.. well..you have put it absolutely like an artistic adventure..

    I am here:

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.com/2011/09/weeds-grow-i-remove-them.html

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  15. Magical Mystical Teacher4 September 2011 at 21:41

    I was going to say "sensual," but too many other said it already, so I'll content myself with SEXY!

    Day 4: Corn in the Wash

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  16. Anonymous4 September 2011 at 22:32

    this is so steamy I think I blushed!

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  17. Blossom Vydrina5 September 2011 at 00:11

    exquisite!

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  18. Ron.5 September 2011 at 05:59

    Oy. I need a smoke.

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  19. Anonymous5 September 2011 at 06:00

    A perfect match of verse and picture.

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  20. Anonymous5 September 2011 at 18:28

    ....please go on, slowly.

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  21. Robert Gibson: PWES Editor7 September 2011 at 08:27

    ooooooooooooooooo


    I love this


    Wanna unwrap somebody now ....

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