Saturday 23 July 2011

Nonet: Pink shoes

wrapped in tissues, the gleaming pink shoes
peer sleepily from the old box
dreaming of hot tango nights
waiting, ever youthful
seductive, lifting
hips, tempting me
go back, dance  
one more
time



Author's Note:   This post is for d'Verse Poets:   Poetics - on your feet.  I have used a poetry form - nonet (9 lines) for this prompt about shoes.  I am really happy with experimenting with different forms, and I hope you guys try out other (shoes) poetry forms.   It is challenging but fun~

Happy dancing day ~

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35 comments:

  1. Brian Miller23 July 2011 at 20:49

    nice...yes go dance...it is never too late...smiles. i struggle with too much constraint when it comes to form...i do need to try more...gay will teach me...

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  2. Mary23 July 2011 at 20:55

    Heaven, I hear you. This is a wonderful poem. KEEP those shoes. Go dance again. When, if not now?

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  3. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall23 July 2011 at 21:20

    elegant imagery.
    wow.

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  4. Anonymous23 July 2011 at 21:27

    I find nothing sexier than a woman in heels on the dance floor ;)

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  5. Anonymous23 July 2011 at 22:11

    I want those shoes - this is such an elegant poem :)

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  6. Fireblossom23 July 2011 at 22:28

    Always listen to the urging of shoes...

    ;-)

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  7. hedgewitch23 July 2011 at 23:08

    Those shoes look like they could dance all night, and your words are music for it. Great nonet. (typo: peers should be peer in the second line--the s's just got sassy on you, ;-) )

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  8. Scarlet23 July 2011 at 23:12

    Thanks Joy...edited. Lovely comments - I appreciate it!

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  9. Anonymous23 July 2011 at 23:38

    Those shoes were definitely made for dancing. Fun!

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  10. Anonymous23 July 2011 at 23:46

    Love the poem and how its shape reminds me a bit of a high heeled shoe. A lot of good imagery and of yourself in this poem!

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  11. Templeton's fury23 July 2011 at 23:52

    great work! glad i stopped by...

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  12. Aeria24 July 2011 at 00:04

    Love the message, love the form. Nicely done :)
    aeria

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  13. kahit minsan24 July 2011 at 00:09

    I like the simplicity of the piece. it just flows.

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  14. Anonymous24 July 2011 at 00:11

    Those shoes are calling you! :-)

    David

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  15. Unknown24 July 2011 at 00:20

    Who could resist those shoes? lol, sounds like a great plan to me, too. Go dance!

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  16. signed...bkm24 July 2011 at 00:28

    beautiful and a beautiful dance the Tango...so seductive...Yes, let us dance...bkm

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  17. Jinksy24 July 2011 at 03:20

    Killer heels - literally!

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  18. Harshad Mehta24 July 2011 at 04:09

    Go ahead, have a tango!

    One can say this only after reading your poem!

    Glad found you.

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  19. Anonymous24 July 2011 at 06:16

    I am enjoying your nonets. I really like "Shoes." You did a great job. BTW...Those shoes are wonderful, I'd love to put them on and go dancing.

    As you said "Happy Dancing Day" so I will dance NOW--barefooted though-- to Funkagenda's Drift. Google it, you'll be dancing I promise.

    -H

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  20. ayala24 July 2011 at 07:42

    Listen to the shoes and go dance :)

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  21. Glynn24 July 2011 at 08:48

    "Hot tango nights" - a perfect description of those shoes. Good poem.

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  22. Unknown24 July 2011 at 08:56

    MMM love to dance have some wicked shoes .....just need the courage to wear them lol loved your poem thank you

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  23. Cynthia24 July 2011 at 09:24

    adorable poem and hot shoes

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  24. Tashtoo24 July 2011 at 11:52

    I'm a barefoot dancer...gravity is my worst enemy! :) But, I just might risk the fall for the sake of those shoes! Wonderful Nonet!

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  25. Alice Audrey24 July 2011 at 12:17

    You can dance in those? I always end up kicking my shoes off.

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  26. Tom Eliot24 July 2011 at 15:01

    AKA Tom Eliot
    I love the shape of this poem - a feminine form which perfectly falls into the character of your blog.

    It gives a strong impression of who you are and what you are feeling- expressive and intresting.

    Anything that reminds me of a lady i once danced the tango with is a winner...

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  27. Anonymous24 July 2011 at 15:40

    "dreaming of hot tango nights" -- oh yes, I love this.

    Love the pink shoes, too. ;-)

    Happy dancin' days!

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  28. Mark Kerstetter24 July 2011 at 16:23

    They're hot to look at, but I don't know how you could dance in those things!

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  29. Anonymous24 July 2011 at 17:34

    So fun but if I put those things on I'd be flat on my face!

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  30. Anonymous24 July 2011 at 17:51

    Shoes like that are for sitting only-I couldn't imagine dancing in them.

    They are beautifully sexy though and are calling to you... Love your nonet.

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  31. Anonymous24 July 2011 at 20:47

    This is great ... I recently learned of the nonet ... I appreciate viewing an example that I can relate! Thank you for sharing!

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  32. barbara24 July 2011 at 23:17

    Killer shoes.
    This is one time centering a poem is a plus. Really gives the "seductive" line umph.

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  33. Scarlet25 July 2011 at 06:55

    Thanks everyone for the lovely comments.

    In my younger days, I could dance in those shoes. Not now, I prefer dancing barefoot. But shoes like that pink killer shoes, hold a meaning to a woman. Men might not understand it- shoes are just different for women.

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  34. James Rainsford25 July 2011 at 11:16

    Love the form, the content and the very evocative photo.

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  35. Anonymous30 July 2011 at 07:52

    perfect!

    i ♥ shoes!

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