Thursday, 14 July 2011

FF 55: Sweet repose




My hand gently cups your cheek

My finger draws a smooth line

from your neck

Around the slopes

Dark shades, long strokes

I tossed my pencils and oils aside

My tongue traced all the lines

Inhaling your breath in the canvas

You sighed and closed your eyes

I gaze at your beauty

in sweet repose


Author's Note:   This is my first time to try this - Tell a story in 55 words. Give it a try or just read more, go see G-man.




picture credit:  houseoferotica.tumblr 

29 comments:

  1. Warm, intimate and sensual, Heaven. And all in 55 words. Well done.

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  2. The artist knows his work ...

    glad to have you here at flash fiction

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  3. May be your first try but job well done once again, really touches the senses.

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  4. Heaven...
    Very sensual 55.
    I hope you found this to be creative, challenging and fun.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  5. whew...sounds like my kind of art...

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  6. Oh this is WONDERFUL!

    Art, sexy interlude, sexy interlude, art.

    -H

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  7. First time here..
    But i like the place.

    Fantastic expressions.

    Looking forward to new posts !!

    regards

    Jyoti Mishra
    Random Scribblings

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  8. Wow. The words are used so judiciously. Loved it.

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  9. Há em ti um fulgor
    que te desnuda,
    uma fogueira que irrompe
    de nocturnas margens.
    Um rio de desejos...


    Beijos doces!
    AL

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  10. Hmm... words are beautiful and creative and the photos ... well, I just put "workout at the gym" back on my list of things to do today... :)

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  11. very sweet. erotically sweet! lovely writing, as usual.

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  12. Oh my... this is superb. Love the metaphor of the canvas and the body.
    Just great, Heaven!

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  13. Wow! You sure heated up the page in such a few words!

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  14. You never disappoint. Delicious!

    Love the new pagw too. So pretty!

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  15. WOW!
    Good write, Heaven!
    I loved it!

    Margie :)

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  16. "Inhaling your breath in the canvas"

    steam is rising off your 55! love it!

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  17. wow.

    blushing, hot 55.
    well done, the words and the image,
    you are perfect if writing romance.

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  18. inhaling your breath in the canvas...art and making love are closely related sometimes..

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  19. Hot! I like the integration of fine art and the fact that you are comfortable and articulate with the sensual and erotic but don't cross that line into smut or porn which is all too easy and somehow the poetry goes out the window

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  20. this is amazing, causing images to dance in my head ;)

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  21. Hi thanks for visiting, amazing lol I think great minds think alike or something! :)
    Lovely!

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