Thursday 14 July 2011

FF 55: Sweet repose




My hand gently cups your cheek

My finger draws a smooth line

from your neck

Around the slopes

Dark shades, long strokes

I tossed my pencils and oils aside

My tongue traced all the lines

Inhaling your breath in the canvas

You sighed and closed your eyes

I gaze at your beauty

in sweet repose


Author's Note:   This is my first time to try this - Tell a story in 55 words. Give it a try or just read more, go see G-man.




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29 comments:

  1. Steve Isaak14 July 2011 at 20:13

    Good, effective verse-work.

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  2. hedgewitch14 July 2011 at 20:23

    Warm, intimate and sensual, Heaven. And all in 55 words. Well done.

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  3. Monkey Man14 July 2011 at 20:26

    Steamy.

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  4. Unknown14 July 2011 at 20:34

    The artist knows his work ...

    glad to have you here at flash fiction

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  5. Pat Hatt14 July 2011 at 20:39

    May be your first try but job well done once again, really touches the senses.

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  6. G-Man14 July 2011 at 21:00

    Heaven...
    Very sensual 55.
    I hope you found this to be creative, challenging and fun.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  7. Brian Miller14 July 2011 at 21:01

    whew...sounds like my kind of art...

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  8. Maude Lynn14 July 2011 at 21:28

    Beautifully done!

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  9. Anonymous14 July 2011 at 23:06

    yes!

    *sinfully smiling*

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  10. Helena White14 July 2011 at 23:12

    Steam Heat! Great 55!

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  11. Anonymous14 July 2011 at 23:21

    Oh this is WONDERFUL!

    Art, sexy interlude, sexy interlude, art.

    -H

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  12. Jyoti Mishra15 July 2011 at 03:41

    First time here..
    But i like the place.

    Fantastic expressions.

    Looking forward to new posts !!

    regards

    Jyoti Mishra
    Random Scribblings

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  13. Zeba15 July 2011 at 06:24

    Wow. The words are used so judiciously. Loved it.

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  14. A.S.15 July 2011 at 06:47

    Há em ti um fulgor
    que te desnuda,
    uma fogueira que irrompe
    de nocturnas margens.
    Um rio de desejos...


    Beijos doces!
    AL

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  15. Bubba15 July 2011 at 09:36

    Nice job on your first 55!

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  16. Margaret15 July 2011 at 11:19

    Hmm... words are beautiful and creative and the photos ... well, I just put "workout at the gym" back on my list of things to do today... :)

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  17. Anonymous15 July 2011 at 14:25

    very sweet. erotically sweet! lovely writing, as usual.

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  18. Dulçe ♥15 July 2011 at 14:52

    Oh my... this is superb. Love the metaphor of the canvas and the body.
    Just great, Heaven!

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  19. Lolamouse15 July 2011 at 15:23

    Wow! You sure heated up the page in such a few words!

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  20. Drenchxoxo15 July 2011 at 16:27

    You never disappoint. Delicious!

    Love the new pagw too. So pretty!

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  21. Margie15 July 2011 at 18:56

    WOW!
    Good write, Heaven!
    I loved it!

    Margie :)

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  22. THE SARCASM GODDESS15 July 2011 at 21:43

    Mmmmm... steamy! Very good!

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  23. dolorah16 July 2011 at 00:53

    Well done :)

    ......dhole

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  24. Anonymous16 July 2011 at 04:34

    "Inhaling your breath in the canvas"

    steam is rising off your 55! love it!

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  25. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall16 July 2011 at 10:47

    wow.

    blushing, hot 55.
    well done, the words and the image,
    you are perfect if writing romance.

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  26. Claudia16 July 2011 at 14:40

    inhaling your breath in the canvas...art and making love are closely related sometimes..

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  27. Luke Prater16 July 2011 at 15:40

    Hot! I like the integration of fine art and the fact that you are comfortable and articulate with the sensual and erotic but don't cross that line into smut or porn which is all too easy and somehow the poetry goes out the window

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  28. Anonymous19 July 2011 at 15:57

    this is amazing, causing images to dance in my head ;)

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  29. Anonymous20 July 2011 at 02:19

    Hi thanks for visiting, amazing lol I think great minds think alike or something! :)
    Lovely!

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