Sunday, 24 July 2011

Temptation Sunday

you gave me

dark chocolates 

& a kiss 

caramel sweetness exploded in my mouth  

my whole body melted

even after you left

your taste still lingers

tempting me for more




Author's Note:   This post is for Poetry Jam hosted by Mark.    This week's theme is temptation.  The stress between obsession and denial -- food, sex, money, drugs, sloth, gluttony.  I chose food - I can't resist chocolates ~


Also shared for Sunday 160 (write a story in 160 characters).  Finally did it.
Happy day everyone ~
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29 comments:

  1. Brian Miller24 July 2011 at 09:59

    love it when that feeling lingers...the kisses and...happy sunday heaven

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  2. G-Man24 July 2011 at 10:00

    Knowing you it was Godiva!!!!

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  3. Scarlet24 July 2011 at 10:06

    Happy sunday too Brian.

    G-man - they are my fav :-)

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  4. hedgewitch24 July 2011 at 10:55

    Sweet sin, indeed. I don't know what the active chemical component in chocolate is, but all i can say is it's a good thing it's not illegal. this a melting little bon bon of a poem, Heaven.

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  5. moondustwriter24 July 2011 at 11:51

    sweet kisses and chocolate a perfect combo

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  6. Alice Audrey24 July 2011 at 12:16

    You ended up with a mouth watering poem.

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  7. Pat Hatt24 July 2011 at 12:18

    The lingering feeling is great. Congrats on finally doing the 160 too, the cat yaps too much to do that between me and you..haha

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  8. Daydreamertoo24 July 2011 at 12:26

    So hard to resist... temptation!

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  9. tarunima24 July 2011 at 13:33

    so true:)
    Chocolates are heavenly:)
    I love them:)

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  10. Monkey Man24 July 2011 at 13:54

    The sweetness of a kiss lingers long after the taste of chocolate disappears. Thanks for being part of the Sunday 160.

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  11. Jinksy24 July 2011 at 15:07

    True sweet temptation.♥

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  12. Laurie Kolp24 July 2011 at 15:40

    Yummy- I couldn't resist either!

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  13. Anonymous24 July 2011 at 15:44

    Mmmm! What a temptation! ;-)

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  14. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall24 July 2011 at 20:07

    juicy and sweet,
    well done 160.

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  15. France24 July 2011 at 20:39

    Yumm for dark chocolate!

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  16. Anonymous24 July 2011 at 20:50

    G O D I V A !!!! yum ~~

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  17. Margie24 July 2011 at 20:50

    I can't resist chocolate!
    Nicely done, Heaven!

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  18. Aeria25 July 2011 at 01:44

    Thank goodness for dark chocolate!
    Beautifully done :)

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  19. Susannah25 July 2011 at 05:20

    Mmmm, wonderful! ;-)

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  20. Dave King25 July 2011 at 06:09

    I didn't get that you'd chosen between them: I thought you'd gone for both!

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  21. Scarlet25 July 2011 at 06:52

    Thanks everyone for the sweet comments.

    Dave, you are right - I got both ~

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  22. The Bug25 July 2011 at 10:18

    Well, that does it - I'm off to buy some chocolate now. I'll try to savor it a bit instead of devouring it.

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  23. PremI25 July 2011 at 11:13

    Beautiful expression!
    Lovely flow....

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  24. Friko25 July 2011 at 12:29

    This is really quite lyrical.
    Temptation in every line.

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  25. Anna :o]25 July 2011 at 16:59

    This is so good! Yummy good!

    Anna :o]

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  26. Anonymous25 July 2011 at 19:36

    delicious! and a perfect 160! ♥ love this! dani

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  27. Anonymous27 July 2011 at 00:53

    That rocked!

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  28. Chris G.28 July 2011 at 11:37

    Mm...chocolate ;)

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  29. Anonymous30 July 2011 at 07:50

    uh. now i want some damn chocolate!

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