Sunday, 24 July 2011

Temptation Sunday

you gave me

dark chocolates 

& a kiss 

caramel sweetness exploded in my mouth  

my whole body melted

even after you left

your taste still lingers

tempting me for more




Author's Note:   This post is for Poetry Jam hosted by Mark.    This week's theme is temptation.  The stress between obsession and denial -- food, sex, money, drugs, sloth, gluttony.  I chose food - I can't resist chocolates ~


Also shared for Sunday 160 (write a story in 160 characters).  Finally did it.
Happy day everyone ~

29 comments:

  1. love it when that feeling lingers...the kisses and...happy sunday heaven

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  2. Knowing you it was Godiva!!!!

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  3. Happy sunday too Brian.

    G-man - they are my fav :-)

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  4. Sweet sin, indeed. I don't know what the active chemical component in chocolate is, but all i can say is it's a good thing it's not illegal. this a melting little bon bon of a poem, Heaven.

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  5. sweet kisses and chocolate a perfect combo

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  6. You ended up with a mouth watering poem.

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  7. The lingering feeling is great. Congrats on finally doing the 160 too, the cat yaps too much to do that between me and you..haha

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  8. So hard to resist... temptation!

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  9. so true:)
    Chocolates are heavenly:)
    I love them:)

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  10. The sweetness of a kiss lingers long after the taste of chocolate disappears. Thanks for being part of the Sunday 160.

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  11. Yummy- I couldn't resist either!

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  12. juicy and sweet,
    well done 160.

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  13. I can't resist chocolate!
    Nicely done, Heaven!

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  14. Thank goodness for dark chocolate!
    Beautifully done :)

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  15. I didn't get that you'd chosen between them: I thought you'd gone for both!

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  16. Thanks everyone for the sweet comments.

    Dave, you are right - I got both ~

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  17. Well, that does it - I'm off to buy some chocolate now. I'll try to savor it a bit instead of devouring it.

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  18. Beautiful expression!
    Lovely flow....

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  19. This is really quite lyrical.
    Temptation in every line.

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  20. This is so good! Yummy good!

    Anna :o]

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  21. delicious! and a perfect 160! ♥ love this! dani

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  22. uh. now i want some damn chocolate!

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