Thursday, 15 December 2011

This Christmas




this Christmas
draw silk curtains close
blow off the apple scented candles
untie blue velvet ribbons
unwrap all my gifts
whilst the music plays our
favorite holiday songs

bring down the golden star
from pine scented tree, under
red plump berries and evergreen holly
kiss my chocolate dusted lips,  
tinder the chimney hearth    
this Christmas





Posted for Flash Fiction Friday:   Tell a story in 55 words - for the G-man.  Just a fun write from me about the holiday.    Also posted for Poets United:   The Thursday Think Tank:   
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28 comments:

  1. Teresa15 December 2011 at 20:09

    I love your fun little write.

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  2. Brian Miller15 December 2011 at 20:12

    oo its going to be a hot christmas this year...no need for a fire int aht fireplace...smiles...a nice intimate christmas sounds nice to me...

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  3. Pat Hatt15 December 2011 at 20:17

    That sounds like quite the Christmas to me. A present to unwrap and never want to have wrapped back up.

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  4. Daydreamertoo15 December 2011 at 20:23

    I wish I was having some of that for my Christmas too....:)

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  5. kaykuala15 December 2011 at 20:36

    Christmas cheer again. Nice write!

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  6. Ella15 December 2011 at 20:56

    Oh, this is beautiful! I love the details; you painted a wonderful mood! Merry Christmas, yours is warm n' bright~

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  7. Anonymous15 December 2011 at 21:06

    subtly sexy and sweet.
    -H

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  8. G-Man15 December 2011 at 21:24

    Oh HELL yes!!!
    Loved your steamy anthem Heaven.
    Fantastic piece of your very creative mind.
    Excellent 55 My Friend
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  9. Anonymous15 December 2011 at 21:51

    love this. love this: "chocolate dusted lips..."

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  10. Margaret15 December 2011 at 22:02

    I like "chocolate dusted lips"... That is certainly one way to celebrate the holidays!

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  11. Lolamouse15 December 2011 at 22:48

    That sounds much more pleasant than crowding around a table with relatives you really don't enjoy and stuffing yourself with food and making uncomfortable small talk! Wanna trade?

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  12. Jinksy16 December 2011 at 03:37

    Sounds like a plan worth following! ♥

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  13. Lady Nyo16 December 2011 at 04:19

    LOL! the true spirit of giving.

    Lady Nyo

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  14. Jyoti Mishra16 December 2011 at 06:14

    Enjoy your holidays n Christmas :)
    loved the way u weaved all ur feelings in those words ?!!

    An awesome read as ever !!

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  15. Laurie Kolp16 December 2011 at 07:56

    Yes... the best Christmas ever.

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  16. Maude Lynn16 December 2011 at 09:12

    That sounds like the perfect way to celebrate!

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  17. Mary16 December 2011 at 09:53

    I love the form and message of this poem. Yes, "this Christmas."

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  18. Other Mary16 December 2011 at 09:57

    Luscious Christmas write! Great picture to go with it too.

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  19. ashok16 December 2011 at 10:44

    chocolate dusted lips? hmmm..enticing!

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  20. Sheila16 December 2011 at 10:56

    Awesome and where do you find all of these cool pics?!

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  21. Scarlet16 December 2011 at 11:10

    Thanks for the lovely comments.

    Sheila - I get them from tumblr.

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  22. rch16 December 2011 at 12:49

    I don't think we need any tindering, this one is hot enough ;^)

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  23. Unknown16 December 2011 at 17:54

    rich, warm, evocative, sexy...

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  24. Sherry Blue Sky16 December 2011 at 21:48

    Lovely images for our imaginings.........love the blue velvet ribbons......

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  25. Anonymous18 December 2011 at 07:53

    cleverly cute!

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  26. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry18 December 2011 at 14:00

    hot and beautiful.

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  27. Pratibha19 December 2011 at 10:39

    sweet ways to celebrate love this christmas :D

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  28. Robert Gibson: PWES Editor20 December 2011 at 11:06

    I.
    LOVE.
    THIS.

    #thatisall.

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