Thursday, 8 December 2011

Shoeless

line drawn across
two squares, you in that spot,
me, on this side corner
with potted plant, small table
grey cubicles of busyness
surrounds us
like deserted islands,    
we toil through
serious business,  
walled hills of anonymity
unopened windows
until, you throw a
paper crane my head
laughing, I chase you 

outside

shoeless


unfettered sky





Posted for Flash Fiction Friday - For the G-Man.    Our office is full of cubicles; sometimes I don't even see my office mates until it is break time or time to go home.  Well, such is life....thanks for the visit ~      

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18 comments:

  1. moondustwriter8 December 2011 at 20:28

    mmm black high heels my favorite and why not fling them off and go barefooted into the sunset

    fun 55

    Happy Friday

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  2. G-Man8 December 2011 at 20:35

    My favorite state of Undress Heaven
    Great imagry!
    Loved your 55 My Friend
    Thanks for playing Barefoot, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  3. Pat Hatt8 December 2011 at 21:30

    Throwing off the shackles and running free, nice! Yeah all those cubicles does make it hard too.

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  4. Brian Miller8 December 2011 at 21:50

    def sounds playful...like the inclusion of the crane as well...they are very cool...

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  5. Brother Ollie8 December 2011 at 22:12

    I love the change of pace at the end. Strong finish.

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  6. KB8 December 2011 at 22:36

    Shoeless if a great way to be.

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  7. Laurie Kolp8 December 2011 at 22:41

    Nothing like a paper crane to lighten things up... enjoyed this!

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  8. Anonymous8 December 2011 at 23:40

    I like it! :D

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  9. MorningAJ9 December 2011 at 02:09

    I wouldn't try running in those shoes either!
    My 55 are here

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  10. ashok9 December 2011 at 07:46

    "walled hills of anonymity"

    I liked this line..

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  11. Anonymous9 December 2011 at 08:51

    I love the playfulness at the end. ;-)

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  12. Bubba9 December 2011 at 10:27

    I don't run very fast. LOL!

    Nice 55!

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  13. Claudia9 December 2011 at 11:43

    nice..having some fun in the office.. i work in an open plan office..and good luck..no cubicles - just glass offices for the big bosses.. the rest of us can run free and have fun...smiles

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  14. PattiKen9 December 2011 at 14:23

    Office cubicle fun! Perfect for a Friday frolic.

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  15. kaykuala9 December 2011 at 20:38

    You got it! That is the office scenario. You make friends during lunch breaks I suppose!

    Hank

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  16. Maude Lynn9 December 2011 at 20:54

    I love "grey cubicles of busyness."

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  17. Anonymous10 December 2011 at 02:41

    i love how your words move
    through my mind.

    nice!

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  18. Lydia10 December 2011 at 05:39

    Yes, "grey cubicles of busyness" is great...as are my memories of a few office flings. :) You really captured a feeling here, Heaven.

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