Thursday, 6 October 2011

Shattered

 
unblinking

still 

gray walls  
tremble

windows  
shatter


into 
thousand 
fragments 


spiraling

falling

into 
dark 
              
bottomless

well
of tears



Posted for The Gooseberry Garden:   Theme is Love and Loss. 
The scene is from classic story of Romeo and Juliet.

I have been traveling, back to my roots, for urgent (not so good) family matters.  I hope to visit you soon. Please note that my haiku/senryu poems for D'Verse Poets Pub- Form for all is here.

Picture credit:   http://shadesofkairos.wordpress.com/tag/romeo/ 
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18 comments:

  1. Lisa6 October 2011 at 18:12

    spiraling into well of tears, I like. Hello Heaven.

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  2. Anonymous6 October 2011 at 18:31

    a beautiful write....

    hugs dear friend :)

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  3. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry6 October 2011 at 19:44

    love it,

    amazing imagery.

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  4. Brian Miller6 October 2011 at 19:48

    sorry you are having such a rough time heaven...felt verse....

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  5. kaykuala6 October 2011 at 20:27

    Very good write, Heaven. Things should be ok!

    Hank

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  6. Pat Hatt6 October 2011 at 20:30

    They sure spiraled into that well. Hope all takes a turn from the not so good to better soon.

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  7. 1ManView6 October 2011 at 21:25

    Lovely write Heaven... You caught the essence of a heart breaking...

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  8. Anonymous6 October 2011 at 21:45

    As provocative as it was minimal. Great to visit. I hope your travels are as gentle as they can be.

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  9. Anonymous7 October 2011 at 00:09

    Sending you good thoughts.

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  10. Lydia7 October 2011 at 05:53

    Powerful verse.

    Thinking of you during trying times...

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  11. A.S.7 October 2011 at 11:02

    Palavras que excitam... arrebatam!...


    Beijos,
    AL

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  12. Laurie Kolp7 October 2011 at 13:17

    The style heightens the poem. Blessings.

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  13. Anonymous7 October 2011 at 13:56

    You were able to convey deep feelings with a minimum of word. Effective writing, Heaven.

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  14. Jannie Funster7 October 2011 at 13:58

    I wish you safe travels.

    xo

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  15. Cynthia7 October 2011 at 22:23

    your poem entered my heart - oOo.
    sublime, dear Heaven.

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  16. void8 October 2011 at 01:13

    so much emotion and depth in so few words. beautifully written.

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  17. ayala8 October 2011 at 08:25

    Moving.... Hope things are better. xx.

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  18. Shauna9 October 2011 at 19:35

    Heaven this poem is one of those
    killing me softly poems. Reminds
    me of Emily D. poems that can be read on a deeper level.

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