Thursday, 6 October 2011

Shattered

 
unblinking

still 

gray walls  
tremble

windows  
shatter


into 
thousand 
fragments 


spiraling

falling

into 
dark 
              
bottomless

well
of tears



Posted for The Gooseberry Garden:   Theme is Love and Loss. 
The scene is from classic story of Romeo and Juliet.

I have been traveling, back to my roots, for urgent (not so good) family matters.  I hope to visit you soon. Please note that my haiku/senryu poems for D'Verse Poets Pub- Form for all is here.

Picture credit:   http://shadesofkairos.wordpress.com/tag/romeo/ 

18 comments:

  1. spiraling into well of tears, I like. Hello Heaven.

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  2. a beautiful write....

    hugs dear friend :)

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  3. sorry you are having such a rough time heaven...felt verse....

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  4. Very good write, Heaven. Things should be ok!

    Hank

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  5. They sure spiraled into that well. Hope all takes a turn from the not so good to better soon.

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  6. Lovely write Heaven... You caught the essence of a heart breaking...

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  7. As provocative as it was minimal. Great to visit. I hope your travels are as gentle as they can be.

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  8. Powerful verse.

    Thinking of you during trying times...

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  9. Palavras que excitam... arrebatam!...


    Beijos,
    AL

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  10. The style heightens the poem. Blessings.

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  11. You were able to convey deep feelings with a minimum of word. Effective writing, Heaven.

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  12. your poem entered my heart - oOo.
    sublime, dear Heaven.

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  13. so much emotion and depth in so few words. beautifully written.

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  14. Moving.... Hope things are better. xx.

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  15. Heaven this poem is one of those
    killing me softly poems. Reminds
    me of Emily D. poems that can be read on a deeper level.

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