Ophelia, by Odilon Redon
I gather her - limped hair & pale bones
Out of the water, bedraggled as washed-
out page, skirted & flamed
by love's complicated twists & turns -
I brush the wild flowers from her cheeks-
Scrap away dead leaves & tangled roots-
Gently, I press on her lips- sip this brew
Stirred with orange & yellow seeds
Mixed with tea leaves & sea-
weeds, stained with effervescent salt-
Hovering pollen dust swells
Into pools of blue sky-
Open your eyes & hear the murmurings
Of cinnamon trees, of red-song birds
There's a place for your dreams, sacred
& untouched by anyone but
you
Beautifully shaped by love & will
There is the garden
Where you can run freely & be
My hands will guide you, a step at
a time, until your voice grows stronger
Again, Love is madness
But you are braver than you can imagine-
War & peace, ink & sword
Your hands can birth & hold them, fiercely as sun-
There's a murmur, I hear -
There's another beat, I see you
Rising once more,
My beautiful daughter
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& The Art by Odilon Redon
and Poets United - Thanks for the visit ~
There is the garden
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Wouldn't we all love to find such a place? :-)
It would be a wonderful place Jinksy ~ Thank you for the visit ~
Deletea lovely piece
ReplyDeleteThank you ~
Delete"War & peace, ink & sword
ReplyDeleteYour hands can birth & hold them, fiercely as sun-"....love the lines :)
Thank you Sumana ~
DeleteThis is an amazing new ending to the story of Ophelia. I love the description of her removal from water and gradual resuscitation.
ReplyDeleteMore like an alternate to the sad & tragic ending of Ophelia ~ I thought the role of women was not given much power & light in the original version ~ Thanks Kerry ~
DeleteThis left a feeling of such tenderness with me, there was something magical about this write.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kathryn ~
DeleteThis is most, most beautiful. I love that this even occurred to you, to resurrect the most tragic of figures and empower her with her SELF. Your images, by the way, are beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of empowerment, specially with women ~ Thank you Karen ~
DeleteA really lovely write....There's a place for your dreams, sacred
ReplyDelete& untouched by anyone but you. Sounds of a place to be.
Thank you Tatius ~
ReplyDeleteYou have really captured the mood and colors in this painting(which I find very wistful) and given them voice, Grace. I love the way Ophelia is revived by her mother, gradually with all the magic of the earth, and her self and her importance, washed away by loss, restored to her. Thanks so much for this wonderful response to one of my favorite artists.
ReplyDeletea much happier ending. She should have used the Rosemary for memory before she floated away.. forgetting times were good and could be again.
ReplyDeleteA little tender loving care can go a long way
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written! <3
ReplyDeleteSo sweetly sad and haunting. She is one of my favorite characters. Thank you for writing, and continuing to write and touch.
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful Grace… this line in particular caught my breath "War & peace, ink & sword
ReplyDeleteYour hands can birth & hold them, fiercely as sun-"
A poem of such incredibly beautiful lines as "Open your eyes & hear the murmurings
ReplyDeleteOf cinnamon trees, of red-song birds" has me in awe this morning, Grace. Wow. And at the end to read "my beautiful daughter" - so lovely. The painting is spectacular, too. Gorgeous.
wonderful images, the description itself... love is madness.. and the ending took me by surprise. lovely.
ReplyDeleteso beautiful.. i would so much enjoy Ophelia to face another destiny...
ReplyDeleteHiya Grace, don't know how you write so richly so often... Another lovely read thank you... With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com
ReplyDeleteOh! For all the Ophelia's in the world, I pray for this healing! A murmur, a chance! Gertrude would have had to do it for Hamlet's Ophelia, but she could not because she is an Ophelia herself, used and abused and with no sense of self.
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful. By the end, I was imploring her to awaken as well.
ReplyDelete"Again, Love is madness
But you are braver than you can imagine-
War & peace, ink & sword
Your hands can birth & hold them, fiercely as sun-"
Simply beautiful.
Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteZQ
What beautiful words for your daughter...
ReplyDeleteI think of all of your poems that I have read, this one is my favorite, and that is saying something. Brava!
ReplyDeleteThis has such a rhythm and I love the victorious tone in the closing portion. Well written!
ReplyDeleteGrace, this was beautiful. Simply beautiful. Wishing you a bright and amazing week. ~~ Kim
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ReplyDeletea good week to you, Grace ~
I love that this is about your daughter, Grace. Fantastic! As always, thank you. Have a beautiful week!
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A lovely poem for your daughter. She must be very proud of her mother!
ReplyDeletewell-written poem !
ReplyDeleteLovely.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
I was completely carried away by this beautiful poem and its intense emotion.
ReplyDeleteI will always think this the true ending from now on! …and how often are mother's called upon to play this age old task? Lovely, lovely. . Sorry to be responding to this prompt so late - I truly thank you for participating!
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