I stand by my window: red skin
As heat coils on last summer day
Lingering sweet as nectarines
I lay down pen & verses – stay
As tonight is harvest moon, pinned
So low in sky, orange bouquet -
Let’s celebrate, I say. You grin-
Light spills – sunset, moonrise, flaming
Each seed, each grain, a wine so sin-
Fully lush, we collect & weigh
These nights as silvered gems, claiming
Them as ours, one-of-a-kind – stay
I sway
into the night: plump orange
A pearl drop above thick maple trees,
Or a mirage, silvered grey as my hair
I take out my white veil, now worn frail
There is a time to forget, letting tides fall
But tonight, when moon wraps the sky,
luminous purple, radiant bride,
Remembering is all
you
Posted for D'verse Poets Pub - Tonight is the harvest moon ~
Poetry form: tetrameter-trimeter ballad form, using the rhyme scheme: ABAB, ABAC, ABCB.
And 55 moon-lit words for the G-man ~ Thanks for the visit ~
picture credit: Tumblr.com
And 55 moon-lit words for the G-man ~ Thanks for the visit ~
picture credit: Tumblr.com
loved the structure of the last part of the poem, dear!
ReplyDeleteThanks Dezzy ~
DeleteIncredible Heaven. Just in time for the beautiful harvest full moon at that.
ReplyDeletePerfect for tonight ~ Thanks Matt ~
DeleteReally enjoyed your fully rhymed ballad and its message; we should treasure each moment because we don't know how many of them we're going to get.
ReplyDeleteI like the shape poem too - although it was hard not to read it in a ballad rhythm
A challenging form Tony ~ Thanks for the encouragement ~
DeleteVery nicely accomplished ballad, Grace. Enjoyed your way of celebrating the harvest moon & the mention of 'silvered gems.'
ReplyDeleteAnd for G-Man...love the softness, the nostalgia, AND the shape of your poem.
Thanks Mary ~ See you later at G-man ~
DeleteYou really rocked the Maude-ballad challenge, Grace, and how great to leap right aboard a sweet shape poem for the great G-Man; loved your use of hyphenated words to meet the rhyme scheme; always forget that option.
ReplyDeleteThank you Glenn ~
Deletenice...i like the orange bouquet harvest moon and all the celebration that goes along... autumn is such a sensual and warm time..hmmm...nice
ReplyDeleteThanks Claudia ~ Should be a wonderful view tonight ~
DeleteWhat a lovely ballad and shape. That harvest moon was looking at me a minute ago.
ReplyDeleteWill check it out shortly Bjorn ~
DeleteGrace, this is beautiful. Your writing definitely has the nature of your name in it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Susan ~
DeleteBeautiful Grace, beautiful choice of words, beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Thank you Anna ~
DeleteThat is one amazing moon out there! And in here. Nice. It's also equinox ... in two days.
ReplyDeleteYes, autumn will officially be here ~ Thanks Susan ~
DeleteAh... such a beautiful read! A job well accomplished. :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you ~ Needs some fine-tuning though ~
Deletehey i am all for celebrating...particularly like the lazt stanza with sin-ful word play...and the echo of stay...
ReplyDeleteoff line for a few days...be back satrurday
Thanks for dropping by ~ See you soon ~
DeleteA very beautiful and such a sensuous moon. Just in time last night
ReplyDeletethe moon looked just like yours.
A romantic look at the Harvest Moon, interesting to note that it states we shall experience the equinox on September 22nd. Thank you for bringing the harvest moon to my attention and sharing the beauty of your words once again.
ReplyDeleteHas such a sensual feel to it . . . remembering is all you. Beautiful.
ReplyDeletesumptuous 55, Heaven, especially:
ReplyDeletewe collect/ and weigh these nights as silvered gems
Beautifully down, love that last verse and especially last line.
ReplyDeletewow, we are on the same wavelength... I hadn't seen yours, and didn't know it was Thursday :)
ReplyDeleteGrace...
ReplyDeleteOver the years I've read thousands of odes to the Orb. And in the capable hands of creatively talented writers like you? I'd happily read a Thousand more.
Loved your Harvest Moon 55
Thank you so much for playing yet another week. I don't care what the winning numbers were in the Powerball Drawing, I've hit the Jackpot with you...:-)
Have a Kick Ass Week-End
Grace, so beautiful! I also love the shape below the photo. And the images... wow!
ReplyDeleteShape one was my favorite too, after that type of moon, one may get another type lol
ReplyDeleteI like your moon-inspired poetry...
ReplyDelete'These nights as silvered gems, claiming
ReplyDeleteThem as ours, one-of-a-kind – stay. ~ love this lines, beautiful ballad
Beautifully romantic. I love the moon and your poem gives it an added dimension. The romance = I wish it could stay always. Lovely writing Grace.
ReplyDeleteFor some reason, my favorite part is that the white veil is now worn frail.
ReplyDeleteNice.
And I like the round visual aspect too.
Thanks for Friday 55!
Mine's here:
http://jannaverse.blogspot.com/2013/09/mcthoughts.html
Both of your poems do The Lady justice. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteFlash 55 - Round Red Robin 0001
Hey Grace-- both lovely and opalescent with Autumn moon. Thanks. k.
ReplyDeleteeach line is amazingly strung together Grace...wow
ReplyDeleteBeautiful from first to last, lovely moon poems, Heaven, and an interesting form as well in the first.
ReplyDeleteThese are both very beautiful. I enjoyed your shaping. And in the first, that long lasting passion and love.
ReplyDeleteFull moon can remind you of someone you love, this is often seen in ancient Chinese poetry.
ReplyDeleteHi Grace,
ReplyDeleteYes, indeed we both had the moon on our minds. The picture is amazing..
Both of these are so lovely, I can almost taste them!
ReplyDeleteTwo beautiful poems.
ReplyDeleteSuch beautiful poetry...
ReplyDeleteSuch beautiful poetry...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful shot Grace! The Harvest moon lends the grand support to the ballad. True to form! Nicely!
ReplyDeleteHank
I love the moon wrapping the sky!
ReplyDeleteGorgeous light lingers through out your poem
Happy weekend to you~
oh! my god this is awesome, especially the closing stanza:) Loved it very much.
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