first blush of snow
fell this morning
- the color of sadness
is white -
bereft of sweat, and
memories of your hands
rough as brown soil
trailing my inner thighs
your soft lips
opening the core of me
stains the bed sheets
stormy sea and darkest sky
- the taste of black tea
is spicy -
devoid of secrets-
the room becomes just another room
white walls, full of unopened boxes
cabinet shelves, bare of cutlery
but aches - sealed tight in jars
and papers - inked by echoes
of your words, slow gentle rain
on my face, canvas of longing
- without you,
all seasons are the same -
Posted for: D'verse Poets Pub - Missing You -
Hosted by Stuart McPherson
I am happy to be on-line and devoting more time to writing ~
Thanks for the visit ~
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You have captured the emotion of missing one loved with heartfelt intensity, Grace. Yes, all months the same. I can picture that.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary for the compliment and visit ~
Deletesome nice heat in this and def. the felt longing for the loved one..things lose their spell if we can't be with the one we love...
ReplyDeleteYes, they do. Thanks Claudia ~
Deletewithout you all the seasons are the same...great closing line! (linked you btw---smiles) love your use of color in this as that is very evocative of the season as well...your soft lips open the core of me....like that as well..happy saturday
ReplyDeleteThank you Brian and Happy Saturday ~
DeleteCaptured ... every motion ... so lovely ... oh, so lovely ... Thank you ... Always, cat (http://catsrule.dogsdroole.blogspot.com) Love, cat.
ReplyDeleteThank you Cat ~
DeleteLonging but one day the return...
ReplyDeleteThank you John ~
DeleteThis one is so very intense, I could feel the heat and such heavy thoughts associated with it.
ReplyDeleteA true story? If so, well penned down! Again, wow!
A product of my imagination ~ Nice to meet you ~
DeletePhew....welcome back. :)
ReplyDeleteSoft lips, inner thigh...but aches - sealed tight in jars... and, missing you.
Brilliant piece of writing.
Thank Bren ~ Good to back in full writing mode ~
DeleteThis is so beautiful Heaven and a great way for you to come back to us. Welcome back, I've missed your lustrous and emotion stirring writing.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the warm welcome Matthew ~
DeleteSnow really can be depressing when you think of colorless days. This is very hot, though... I'm sure it melted the snow! = )
ReplyDeleteHopefully, smiles ~ Thank you Laurie ~
Delete....sensuous and telling...of missing intimacy with that special someone..
ReplyDeleteEvocative, sensual and deeply moving. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteseems like love brings both pain and happiness
ReplyDeleteThis is so filled with aches and yearning - it really touched me Grace.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this poem. This made me think of the one whom I'm missing!
ReplyDeleteMissing one can surely take its toll and be as cold as winter all year around, but at least no crummy snow is found haha
ReplyDeleteThe echoes in here are lovely--the white returning in sadness, white walls, pages, winter, and unopened boxes - you understate the move and have a good flow between organicness of relationship and blankness of of new (just moved into) room. Well done (as always!) k.
ReplyDeleteVery erotic and sad at the same time. Nice to have you back!
ReplyDelete.Grace..this poem is a gem... the prompt at dverse todays fits perfectly with your sentiments... and i genuinely..genuinely love your end in here..."without you..all seasons are the same..." ..is i think the saddest line i ever read in a poem since Mary Oliver's The Truro Bear And Other Adventures where most poems in the volume conveys sadness of thoughts..
ReplyDeleteGood day!
Gorgeous and sensual...sad too, there's a lot to miss in this one.
ReplyDeleteWithout you all seasons are the same... Achingly beautiful line.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeletevery moving..devoid of secrets the room becomes just another room, very powerful, and also the closing line, stunning!
ReplyDeleteThe colour of sadness is white- i really loved this line. Something about the silence of snow that makes me reflective. As ever, you are the maser of this sensual style of poetry...great descriptors, and bringing it back to the seasons being the same just hammers home the longing. stu mcp
ReplyDeleteLovely to see you again Grace, I'm a sucker for intensity and you have just tipped the scale.
ReplyDeleteYou have such a talent for extracting the juice out of an emotion. Here the sadness and longing that comes with missing a lover is so vivid. It made me feel the grief. Great that you have more time to write now.
ReplyDeleteEmotion of longing and emptiness and feel of a season all captured so beautifully; touched my heart and brought tears
ReplyDeleteGlad you've been able to find time to write your awesome poems.
ReplyDeletebeautiful. just beautiful.
ReplyDeletei really do feel a symmetry between us. i just wrote something before i came to visit, and it's along the same line of thought as yours. kinda of spooky! :)
I love those closing lines!
ReplyDelete"without you,
ReplyDeleteall seasons are the same"
Those words cause my heart to ache. Beautiful.
Sadly this reminds me of my husband's passing and yet it also brings happiness in remembering how much I still cherish the love I hold for him.
ReplyDeleteVery touching !
ReplyDeleteSimultaneously sweet and sexy.
ReplyDeletepasko na...sinta ko...
ReplyDeletehanap-hanap kita...
bakit magtatampo...
iniwan ako...
merry christmas, heaven! ;-)
felt this in my stomach. love it!
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