Wednesday, 29 June 2011

Vulnerable




stripping your body bare for me
you laid back and closed your eyes
giving me control 
trusting me your heart

vulnerable 

you are beautiful  

courageous 

strong


i love you more




Author's Note:   Symbolically speaking, I actually feel this way about those who write and blog about their work.   I admire those  writers (specially those from OSW) who bare "their soul" every day, every week, and encourage other writers to follow, in the same generous spirit.   I never thought I could get this far when I started 3 months ago, but I am still here, "baring my soul" steadily.   Thanks to everyone dropping by and giving me lovely comments.   Happy day ~  

11 comments:

  1. smiles. love those vulnerable moments both given and received...you give just enough to get the mind spinning...

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  2. Yes with someone you truly trust those vulnerable moments are great. Very thoughtfully stated.

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  3. Very strong metaphor for fellow poets, a wonderfully sensual write, appreciate knowing its full meaning. ~ Rose

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  4. Thanks for sharing your vulnerability with us. I echo Max's comment above, "Beautiful...".

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  5. yeah i agree with you, symbolically we bare our emotions,thoughts for the world to read:)

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  6. Hello heaven! I see you found my real life blog :) My actual blog is lovely-night-sparrow.blogspot.com. It is a work in progress at the moment!

    I just found your blog today, I love erotic photos and writings!

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  7. Belo... sensual!...

    Beijos!
    AL

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  8. Reminds me of Leonard Cohen's line "I wanna see you naked in your body and your thought."

    Gorgeous 55, and artsy blog.

    here is my 55

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