I carry the darkness of the moon
Its scar is the long shadow swelling
on my cheeks
I am packed and ready to go
To northeast meadow, my pockets
waiting for summer
I want to know what you believe
for us: are we reckless like black crows
or growing as taproot
Here, where the seasons move like clock
Red-tipped, guzzling of morning dew
Brown-fallen, nipped by evening wind
Tell me our story again
How we met, how we watched dawn
tiptoe its feet above sea tides
How you kiss me so slowly
As if time is slow twister, kite-tangled
As if time is language, lost in your eyes
Let me not lose my way
Let me not shatter into thousand pieces
ink, thistle, seeds
before I find
That it's you that makes the longest day
sun-dappled, delicate silk as dragonfly wings
Let me come back whole
Let me remember & touch you once again
My second skin
My wild river
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Its scar is the long shadow swelling
on my cheeks
I am packed and ready to go
To northeast meadow, my pockets
waiting for summer
I want to know what you believe
for us: are we reckless like black crows
or growing as taproot
Here, where the seasons move like clock
Red-tipped, guzzling of morning dew
Brown-fallen, nipped by evening wind
Tell me our story again
How we met, how we watched dawn
tiptoe its feet above sea tides
How you kiss me so slowly
As if time is slow twister, kite-tangled
As if time is language, lost in your eyes
Let me not lose my way
Let me not shatter into thousand pieces
ink, thistle, seeds
before I find
That it's you that makes the longest day
sun-dappled, delicate silk as dragonfly wings
Let me come back whole
Let me remember & touch you once again
My second skin
My wild river
Posted for D'verse Poets Pub - Thanks for the visit ~
Absolutely incredible, as is always the case with your poetry. "Are we reckless like black crows or growing as taproot?" - great line! Though I wonder, do the two have to be mutually exclusive? :)
ReplyDeleteLovely metaphoric writing, Grace. Enjoyed what you did with the idea of the summer solstice. The last four lines are beautiful. Ah, to remember and touch again.....
ReplyDeletedo you have to choose between the reckless bird and the taproot...i love the humility of asking them to tell you the story of us again...there is an innocence there that makes me smile....those last 4 lines carry a lot of heart...
ReplyDeleteFabulous,stirring, beautiful poem Grace.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful writing Grace.
ReplyDeleteI like how your simple repetitions emphasize add emphasis to your yearning. Very apt seasonal choice of the summer solstice for your poem!
ReplyDeleteAh, it is the solstice, isn't it? I almost forgot. Beautiful poetic analysis of a love relationship, charged with perfect images.
ReplyDeletethe magic of touch of those long days that bend into us...love how you give it so much personality and make it so personal and sensual
ReplyDelete"I want to know what you believe
ReplyDeletefor us: are we reckless like black crows
or growing as taproot"
Mmmm, fantastic lines. Great use of repetition (and imagery!) here.
Grace a very sensual, as usual, poem with a deep thrust behind it. >KB
ReplyDeleteDeep thrust indeed, as you rise above the rest, make love to the solstice suitor so magnificently that we are breathless by the close. This is genuine, the real deal, poetry at the apex of form, heart, & verbosity; it was a privilege just to read it, to be in its company.
ReplyDeletethe romance of telling you the story of us all over again; wanting to relive those moments while looking forward to the next... beautiful...
ReplyDeleteI love this, but especially those last five stanzas.
ReplyDeleteAnother wonderfully romantic poem... you have such a talent for this. I would love to be able to write with such passion on love! The repetition adds great emphasis.
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely romantic poem and I love the image!
ReplyDeleteSigh. Such a longest day! Love:
ReplyDelete"How we met, how we watched dawn
tiptoe its feet above sea tides"
Happy Summer Solstice, Grace! May you keep your companion of the longest day into the lengthening nights.
I always seem to forget to breathe when I read your work. Stellar, stellar stuff.
ReplyDeleteThis just blows me away! Perfect, perfect!
ReplyDelete'...packed and ready to go' - cool.
ReplyDeleteCome back whole, great line indeed. Packed a ton into this one.
ReplyDeleteThere is a beautiful tenderness about this poem Grace, well done, I enjoyed this one.
ReplyDelete"My pockets waiting for summer"....how I love that! Then the glorious body of the poem topped with the bliss of "My second skin, my wild river." Truly spectacular writing, Grace. Wow. Also, lucky you! To feel like that!
ReplyDeleteSensual and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteIt is reliving the great moments together that one can never be tired of! Great writing Grace! And the image is perfect for a 'second skin'
ReplyDeleteHank
I love the fabulous imagery throughout this, wonderful!
ReplyDeleteYour poetry is lush, Grace ... always.
ReplyDeleteGrace, I loved every bit of this, like drinking something wonderful. The phrase you chose, "let me," we say every day, but you make it a plea, an essential need... gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteThe solstice, the darkness of the moon, and finally, that second skin. God, you can write. Thanks so much! Amy
very sensual and fabulous write Grace and ah... the last three stanzas are perfect...
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful and romantic flow of words, the softness of this poem touches the heart:)
ReplyDeleteAll natural - a universality, a naturalness - the repetitions become "a seeking", as well as an answer - the poem itself is a journey in understanding and in trust. Quite beautiful.
ReplyDeleteLet me come back whole in my second skin
ReplyDeleteLet me remember you, my wild river.
I love the twist, smiles ~ Thank you ~
Deletethe second part of the poem is unusually simple for you, Grace
ReplyDeleteOMG that's gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteMy new favorite! Wow, Grace-this one is gorgeous and layered so intimately~
ReplyDeleteBravo!
simply beautiful..super flow ..i loved it:)
ReplyDeleteLove the idea of dawn tiptoeing
ReplyDeleteOh, how important to refresh, to rewind the relationships, and I like that you're paying attention to details and point to 'That it's you that makes the longest day
ReplyDeletesun-dappled, delicate silk as dragonfly wings'. ~ Beautifully done!
I like these lines - "are we reckless like black crows
ReplyDeleteor growing as taproot". And these, too - "Let me not shatter into thousand pieces
ink, thistle, seeds
before I find
That it's you that makes the longest day
sun-dappled, delicate silk as dragonfly wings"
Beautiful images as always, Grace. Happy weekend.
This is a wonderful cascade of lovely images.. it cannot be better than this when love touches... The end end of the poem is a beautiful melancholic crescendo.
ReplyDeleteA love song, beautifully put, enchanting to read.
ReplyDeleteMy belated effort (I missed the cut off) is here.
Beautiful, light-hearted despite the contrasts.
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