We moved in this house with only 3 rooms:
Map Room,
Mirror in the Sky
& Elephants are Everywhere-
This how our constellations construct -
We start our morning in
Mirror in the Sky
where everything falls
into our bodies like magnets:
autumn leaves, goose feathers & apple seeds
Then by afternoon, we scamper
to Elephants are Everywhere-
Here, you fix broken appliances
and watch world war II documentaries
while I search for
Elephants in crossword puzzles
& worn books & labels of bottled jams-
And at night, we sink into
Map Room, where you would unfurl
our mast & scatter compass points across the table-
under a single flame,
your pirate's eyes search for latitudes:
east for spices, west for oil
north for mountain peaks
finally south, for my diamonds-
& i would sigh for every X mark you find -
Posted for: Imaginary Garden for Real Toads - For Margaret's challenge - To write about Place & D'verse Poets Pub - OpenLinkNight - Thanks to Karin (Manicddaily) for inspiring me to write about Elephants, smiles ~
Map Room,
Mirror in the Sky
& Elephants are Everywhere-
This how our constellations construct -
We start our morning in
Mirror in the Sky
where everything falls
into our bodies like magnets:
autumn leaves, goose feathers & apple seeds
Then by afternoon, we scamper
to Elephants are Everywhere-
Here, you fix broken appliances
and watch world war II documentaries
while I search for
Elephants in crossword puzzles
& worn books & labels of bottled jams-
And at night, we sink into
Map Room, where you would unfurl
our mast & scatter compass points across the table-
under a single flame,
your pirate's eyes search for latitudes:
east for spices, west for oil
north for mountain peaks
finally south, for my diamonds-
& i would sigh for every X mark you find -
Posted for: Imaginary Garden for Real Toads - For Margaret's challenge - To write about Place & D'verse Poets Pub - OpenLinkNight - Thanks to Karin (Manicddaily) for inspiring me to write about Elephants, smiles ~
oh wow grace - this is a very cool write ... love all the images..the sureal atmosphere you create... and now...where did you say is the way to the diamonds..? smiles
ReplyDeleteAh that sounds just like a place to live in.. and spending your days like this.. Like a day of thoughts and adventures. Great write... (and fun)
ReplyDeleteWhat an imaginative write, Grace. I love the three rooms and their purposes. I think I would like to spend more time in the "Mirror in the Sky" surrounded by autumn leaves and goose feathers!
ReplyDeleteGrace, this was a wonderful poem. I loved the imagery and the ending was superb. >KB
ReplyDeleteGrace,
ReplyDeleteWhat wonderful imagination and suppleness of language you demonstrate, week after week. Very fine writing.
Steve
Oh my gosh - I love this - from beginning to end, it captivated me. Wonderful! K
ReplyDeleteOh!
ReplyDeleteSo sensual
I love this
Wonderfully imaginative. Love this!
ReplyDeletethis is far & away one of your best, Grace; just damn stunning, leaving us in/on a surreal landscape within, or a part of, some domicile, some magic lair where poetry is spoken and the fantastic is the mundane, where a bobby pin becomes a stanchion, where doves fly through rooms & the fluttering of their wings is overshadowing by the trumpeting of pachyderms.
ReplyDeleteintriguing piece...i like how you set it up and then break each one down for us...the scattering in the map room was a cool part for me...also like hte whole constructing constellations section grace...its got authority to it...
ReplyDeletehappy tuesday
Wonderful thought - I want to live in a house like that! Especially when elephants are my favourite animals... and a very steamy ending in the Map Room.
ReplyDeletemm mmm mmmmm.
ReplyDeleteLove this, that last stanza is outstanding. Sigh indeed!
ReplyDeleteWonderful imagination, a very cool write Grace. I love it. :)
ReplyDeleteI sense a spicy metaphor. ;) Well done.
ReplyDeleteOh, I like this, Grace, especially the image of "autumn leaves, goose feathers & apple seeds" "falling into our bodies."
ReplyDeleteand from such we make a life...
ReplyDeletebeautiful imagery here
So imaginative and magical, Grace.
ReplyDeleteoh, if elephants would only be everywhere....
ReplyDeleteAmazing Heaven, as usual I'm incredibly impressed, oozes sensuality.
ReplyDeleteLove. Love. Love. (Did I mention that I love this?) Oh sensual and wonderful and complete. Perfection.
ReplyDeleteMaybe i would have love to have a visit too..... *smiles
ReplyDeleteTruly wonderful write! Your ingenuity seems limitless!
ReplyDeleteMirror in the Sky
ReplyDeletewhere everything falls
into our bodies like magnets:
autumn leaves, goose feathers & apple seeds
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Wonderful! and such a perfectionist on your words of poetic vision.
:)
Loved, loved this Grace--so very wonderful and creative
ReplyDeleteA creative write and that picture is amazing..
ReplyDeleteI agree this is may be one of your best. A beautiful read Grace with a suggestive close. Wonderfully done.
ReplyDeleteLove this Grace!
ReplyDeleteReally--this is about as good as it gets. The images are unusual and very effective. Excellent work!
ReplyDeleteI love all the magic in this... Really beautiful. I want to live in a house like that!
ReplyDeleteVery adventure-esque at your sea, enjoyed it much
ReplyDeleteThis otherworldly feel doesn't seem as foreign as it maybe should, but I think that is because you so adept at describing it all.
ReplyDeleteAn incredible write-- I love all the shapes and textures in this, it is really inspiring. I agree with Nico, as good as it gets! ~peace, Jason
ReplyDeleteHey Grace! Elephants, crossword puzzles, worn books and JAM all qualify as my favorite things--how did you know???? These is such an interesting idea for a poem, which you execute with great fancy and wit and that little bit of heat that you apply so well. This is Karin of Manicddaily--I will probably use an old google account as I am typing from iPad. Thanks. K.
ReplyDeleteLOVE! So much. Wonderful words Heaven. xx
ReplyDeleteWhat wonderful imagination you have. Very cool and sensual write. :-)
ReplyDeleteSo diamonds can be a man's best friend too? Ha. Liked this and the art both. Always so creative
ReplyDeleteBeautifully imagined - a new perspective that contains so much truth.
ReplyDeletevery different...
ReplyDeleteI admit, I had to read this one twice. Very well done. As always, thank you!
ReplyDeleteHave a beautiful week, my friend!
I love the idea of landscaping one's thoughts!
ReplyDeleteSo sensual and well crafted!
I love your poem and the art!
Wonderful Grace
Sensual, moving and so creative, one of my favorites.
ReplyDeleteImaginative, fun, sensual. Enjoyed reading this.
ReplyDeletesuper use of imagery! this feels surreal and loyal to love at once. intriguing write, Grace.
ReplyDeleteAlways such a pleasure to read, this was so creative and inventive and fun.
ReplyDelete... think most of my time would be spent in the map room... :) Quite the dreamy place! Thanks for participating in such a unique way.
ReplyDeleteI suppose 3 rooms is enough for any 'couple'...Bedroom..Kitchen...and something to do room...
ReplyDelete'We' started out with five rooms..and ended up with 3 rooms of life...and 2 rooms of stuff instead of children....
That's for taking me to that analogy2...or 3 if you will...
An interesting read Grace and amazed how you diversify in your work. Agreed with all the other comments a few gosh damn *sigh* moments in there. x
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