hmmm nice...i like the soft as ripened peach image and the musky scent of spring...always love when i can smell a poem...nice...
Thank you Claudia ~
Oh, this is yummy.
Thank you Susan ~
The juices running
it is..ha..ha...Thanks for the visit Aprille ~
Oh this is very sensous and nice, and we need to spring to melt a little.
I wish spring is here now...Thanks for the visit ~
warmly seductive! Nice spice.
Thanks Mary ~
Yes, Dezzy ~
musky as wild spring...i am yours again....whew...you got heat in a few words....very nice grace....
Thank you Brian ~
Thank you Laurie ~
With your use of words my mind is able to see so much more. Keeping to myself...
...intimate... and quite an easy surrender that forgets yesterday's pain... i guess that's the mystery in when love takes over... nicely Grace... smiles...
I am sending this to my hubby, Grace - now. Too bad - he's asleep!
For such a short poem it's absolutely brilliant Heaven, just love it, intense and intimate, just perfect.
Love, love, love it. I just love passionate verbal expression.
Oh yes, a man's hands;) You got a lot in that one;)
Dreamy that's for sure. :)
Bravo! The peach image is perfect!
WOW!!! That is stunning Grace. Adelaide Crapsey would never have believed her form could be so sensual and sexual - being a nice Victorian girl, and a minister's daughter to boot, it would never have crossed her mind :-)
Thank you for wonderful post on cinquain, Tony ~ I like bringing a touch of sensuality to poetry forms :-)
This is wonderful...not the kind of words that trip into my computer yet...very specialPeace
And where will those fingers linger? haha very sensual indeed
My first reaction is... damn! Love the peach and the last line... perfect!
Good Grief. This is more than a "touch of sensuality". I think I'm drowning :)
Again. Always fresh, exciting, even in familiarity.
A passionate Cinquain. Lovely.
Absolutely beautiful. Very sensual.
such a lush cinquain
What a sexy cinquain! I love your writing Grace!
Sensuously beautiful,Grace! Nicely!Hank
EVERY part of this works.perfect selection of words-emotion-sensual my personal favorite line...."musky as wild spring" I didn't even notice the walls of the cinequainwhew...thanks!!
Ahem..a truly sensual piece. Lovely!
I like your imagery - soft and ripened peach, musky as wild spring. Very sensual. :-)
You didn't have to write a poem about me : )Very hot verse, girl. I was gonna quick the smoke, but maybe one more after this. But all that aside, it is very well written. Smooth as silk as always.
Wow... seductive and sweet!
musky as wild spring, wonderful and sensual.
Oh, perfect! Including the pause before the last line.
so soft and real... done with grace
I knew you'd have something good for us! Suh-weet!!
Sweet lust indeed!
Very creative and poetic piece of writing !
very effective. I feel all soft and receptive-like after reading this one. lovely.
wow! that's a steamy little number. nicely done.
soft and sensuous..
sweet & soft...
It's wild spring here now. Which will give way to wild summer and fall. :)Peaches and herb. :)Pure Heaven.xoxo
It made me think of them in a meadow! Beautiful! Thank you, as always.
scent and touch intertwined. nicely, nicely done.
i've missed reading you grace. as always, i love this.
My. Oh. My.
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