Thursday, 14 March 2013

Again

find me
in your fingers-
soft as a ripened peach,
musky as wild spring- and i'm yours

again








Posted for D'verse Poets Pub - Cinquain - Five lines of 2-4-6-8-2 syllabic count.

Picture credit:   Artist Rosie Hardy 

62 comments:

  1. hmmm nice...i like the soft as ripened peach image and the musky scent of spring...always love when i can smell a poem...nice...

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    1. it is..ha..ha...Thanks for the visit Aprille ~

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  3. Oh this is very sensous and nice, and we need to spring to melt a little.

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    1. I wish spring is here now...Thanks for the visit ~

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  4. warmly seductive! Nice spice.

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  5. musky as wild spring...i am yours again....whew...you got heat in a few words....very nice grace....

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  6. With your use of words my mind is able to see so much more. Keeping to myself...

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  7. ...intimate... and quite an easy surrender that forgets yesterday's pain... i guess that's the mystery in when love takes over... nicely Grace... smiles...

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  8. I am sending this to my hubby, Grace - now. Too bad - he's asleep!

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  9. For such a short poem it's absolutely brilliant Heaven, just love it, intense and intimate, just perfect.

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  10. Love, love, love it. I just love passionate verbal expression.

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  11. Oh yes, a man's hands;) You got a lot in that one;)

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  12. Bravo! The peach image is perfect!

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  13. WOW!!! That is stunning Grace. Adelaide Crapsey would never have believed her form could be so sensual and sexual - being a nice Victorian girl, and a minister's daughter to boot, it would never have crossed her mind :-)

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    1. Thank you for wonderful post on cinquain, Tony ~ I like bringing a touch of sensuality to poetry forms :-)

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  14. This is wonderful...
    not the kind of words that trip into my computer yet...
    very special
    Peace

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  15. And where will those fingers linger? haha very sensual indeed

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  16. My first reaction is... damn! Love the peach and the last line... perfect!

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  17. Good Grief. This is more than a "touch of sensuality". I think I'm drowning :)

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  18. Again. Always fresh, exciting, even in familiarity.

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  19. Absolutely beautiful. Very sensual.

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  20. What a sexy cinquain! I love your writing Grace!

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  21. Sensuously beautiful,Grace! Nicely!

    Hank

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  22. EVERY part of this works.
    perfect selection of words-emotion-sensual
    my personal favorite line...."musky as wild spring"
    I didn't even notice the walls of the cinequain
    whew...thanks!!

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  23. Ahem..a truly sensual piece. Lovely!

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  24. I like your imagery - soft and ripened peach, musky as wild spring. Very sensual. :-)

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  25. You didn't have to write a poem about me : )
    Very hot verse, girl. I was gonna quick the smoke, but maybe one more after this. But all that aside, it is very well written. Smooth as silk as always.

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  26. musky as wild spring, wonderful and sensual.

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  27. Oh, perfect! Including the pause before the last line.

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  28. so soft and real... done with grace

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  29. I knew you'd have something good for us! Suh-weet!!

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  30. Very creative and poetic piece of writing !

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  31. very effective. I feel all soft and receptive-like after reading this one. lovely.

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  32. wow! that's a steamy little number. nicely done.

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  33. It's wild spring here now. Which will give way to wild summer and fall. :)

    Peaches and herb. :)

    Pure Heaven.

    xoxo

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  34. It made me think of them in a meadow! Beautiful! Thank you, as always.

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  35. scent and touch intertwined. nicely, nicely done.

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  36. i've missed reading you grace. as always, i love this.

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