Clasp your moon heart to mine
in the swelling waves of shadows,
closely entwine our cold hands
like twin seed pods with wings
Carry me across the ocean steps
where the tide is blue and sand washes
shore in quickening shades, elusive wind
to artist's fingers huddled over the canvas
Love, because of it, hold me close
as if an arrow pierced your side,
as if it is the last call of midnight train
hurling over the bridge of mud stones
Tie your heart at night to mine, love*,
so I awake to slow beating of your
chest underneath my palms, to the breath
of summer and crust of freshly baked bread
"So that our dream might reply
to the sky's questioning stars
with one key, one door closed to shadow."
Lines and Inspiration from Pablo Neruda: Tie your heart at Night to mine, Love
Posted for: Imaginary Garden with Real Toads and D'verse Poets Pub : OpenLinkNight
picture credit: here
I admire the sexy 'lullaby' effect, Heaven.
ReplyDeleteThanks Adura ~ After a long day in the office, I need a distraction ~
DeleteI love the midnight train......a lilting love poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherry ~ Neruda is my inspiration for my love poems, when my muse is sunbathing in the sun ~
Deletenice...second stanza hooked me...and the arrow through the side as well because i was not expecting it...awaking slow to the beating chest, nice touch as well....nice grace...
ReplyDeleteI like the second stanza too Brian ~ Thanks for the visit and kind words ~
Delete"So that our dream might reply
ReplyDeleteto the sky's questioning stars"
We may dream but we often are lulled into believing it would become a reality by and by. But if we question ourselves as we go along the dream is answered earlier. That's how I read it from your verse. Great write, Heaven!
Hank
That is good perspective Hank ~ Thanks for the visit ~
Deleteahh dreams, we seem to be on the same page ;) and some nice visions conjured
ReplyDeleteI know Aidz ~ Enjoyed your share as well ~ Thank you ~
DeleteI do love me some sex on the beach :)
ReplyDeleteyou are amazing with the words...
ReplyDeletewonderful poem of romantic togetherness.ethereally beautiful.
ReplyDelete"Clasp your moon heart to mine
ReplyDeletein the swelling waves of shadows,
closely entwine our cold hands
like twin seed pods with wings"...oh you pulled me in right there!
LOVE this!!!!
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful. I like how you acknowledge your inspiration. I must read Pablo Neruda again.
ReplyDeleteLoved all of this but especially:
ReplyDelete'Tie your heart at night to mine, love*,
so I awake to slow beating of your
chest underneath my palms, to the breath
of summer and crust of freshly baked bread'
Very sensual, romantic, and lovely read.
I adore that fourth stanza. Sensual and evocative!
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nice intimacy in this...esp. loved..the breath
ReplyDeleteof summer and crust of freshly baked bread...hmmm... i can smell and feel this..
Such a night would surely sizzle, intimacy abounds at your grounds. Have a sensual day.
ReplyDeleteClasp your moon heart to mine
ReplyDeletethis is a line that will stick with me... beautiful poem!
Very tender and trusting, really beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThis is good...it's really good...and as for sex on the beach, it can be really good too, except for discovering sand in unwanted places for days afterward.
ReplyDeleteThere is a really nice flow here, I like it!
ReplyDelete"and the sand washes shore
ReplyDeletein quickening.."
very nice image...to always love so...must be heaven...bkm
Delicious, delightful, divine, and dazzling, as always. This makes me ache for arms to hold me.
ReplyDeleteI admire that you always are finding fresh ways to tell your love songs. In a world awash in them, yours are so personal, and new. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Gay ~ I hope I will not run out of inspiration to write them as its my favorite topic to write about.
DeleteYou're amazing — so many unique, original, arresting, satisfying variations on your theme! This is another good one. :)
ReplyDeleteHa ha, having posted that, just read Beachanny's comment above - yes, thats what I was meaning to say. :)
DeleteHeaven, you paint shadows and colors, and scenes of ecstasy, all by using one key--that which unlocks your heart, full of thoughts for the very souls of us.
ReplyDeletePEACE!
This was beautiful, with many arresting and penetrating images. Wonderful.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and sensual!
ReplyDeleteI just love the second last stanza, Heaven! What a beautiful love poem!
ReplyDeleteLove the silky tone of this, from start to finish....
ReplyDeleteTo everyone ~ Thank you very much for the lovely words and visits. I appreciate them ~
ReplyDeleteVery tenderly and warm with passion, Heaven. Love how you engage all the senses, and describe touch senses in particular.
ReplyDeleteGorgeous poem! Love "to the breath
ReplyDeleteof summer and crust of freshly baked bread" ~ sensuous & beautiful :)
what better than to lie all night in the embrace of the one you love?
ReplyDelete♥
Powerful, yet delicate...like love itself. Beautiful work!
ReplyDeleteA very natural and uncontrived intimacy throughout. The first four stanzas are all action-driven, tied together so nicely by the final one. This is a fine, balanced and evocative poem.
ReplyDeletenice - love all your natural imagery
ReplyDeletethe last call of midnight train
ReplyDeletehurling over the bridge
Mmm...takes me back...
Gorgeous! I loved the magic, the memories align with your words! :D
ReplyDelete(What they said. I also love Neruda, though I only know him translation.) I love how you breathe just like he rest of us, but are able to unwrap passion with your voice.
ReplyDeleteHeavy sigh....I love the romantic writing. This was beautiful. The bread stanza was genious. Ohhhh yeahhh!
ReplyDeleteThe first stanza is simply brilliant, carrying the rest of the poem into raptures beautifully expressed.
ReplyDeleteinspiring.
ReplyDeletelove...you write it so well.
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