Tuesday, 25 March 2014

Drunk with colors



color me summer

lips

to cheeks

amber-stained

arm

to fingers

 green tea-sipped, sugar-licked

sky dazzles 

drunken blue 

we gaze, without words

as colors drink

our skin

craving for sun's fever

& when you kiss me

rain-dust drenched

i turn 

softer than tulips

nibbled-pink 

neck

to 

toes



Posted for D'verse Poets Pub - We are writing about Holi, Festival of Colors & Love

picture credit:  here 

32 comments:

  1. Oh, the colors of summer are indeed beautiful. I am SO ready for them to appear.

    I especially like:

    we gaze, without words
    as colors drink
    our skin

    Enjoyed the illustration too!

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    1. Me too Mary ~ Its very cold this week but it should get warmer during the weekend, smiles ~

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  2. drunken blue craving suns fever
    i hear you....i have 2 inches of snow on the ground
    and its still pouring...
    i am in sore need of some sunshine
    cant wait to feel its touch on my skin...

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    1. We might have flurries later but not much snow, hopefully ~

      Can't wait for the sun too ~ Thanks Brian ~

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  3. yep... we got an inch of snow here in MI... was out this morning and it came down so fast. smiles.. this poem def made crave the sun... love that pic as well...

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  4. Color me crazy ~~~ for your poetry!

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  5. Need the color of the day to make all of this snow go away.

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    1. Need all the colors as it is snowing right now, ha ~ Thanks Pat ~

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  6. green tea-sipped, sugar-licked...hmmm nice... i too am hungry for sun.. it's a bit cooler here than last week...rain... ah.. longing for her kiss

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  7. 'craving for sun's fever' ~ me, me, me. At winter time I just want to live in the grocery store until summer...~ beautiful poem and picture.

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  8. Softer than tulips nibbling neck... ahh delicious.. and many wonderful use of colors..

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  9. A celebration of sun-drenched flesh-warming showers of warm color, so very sensual, so much longing; nicely done, Grace. I found my bad poetic self at a Farmer's Market for my palette foray.

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  10. a beautiful color wash of words... you made me sigh with dreams of summer.

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  11. Great write Grace - smiles. Love the pic you chose here.

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  12. Now that's summer!

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  13. softer than tulips...nibbled pink...enchanting

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  14. I love how you evoke so many colors in your poems, by mentioning the colors themselves or the sky, tulips, the sun... You have written a very warm piece, Grace!

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  15. "green tea-sipped, sugar-licked"

    A dream of a line, this one. A sweet and glorious piece of poetry.

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  16. The colors are so well textured here, just lovely."rain-dust drenched" I love the way this feels on the tongue!

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  17. Unlike snows in the West we have bright sunshine, too bright and hot this time. We miss the rain and there was even water rationing in some places. Like the snap of coloring the body in paints. Nicely Grace!

    Hank

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  18. Ah! Color drinks you as you drink it in and turn into its senses--summer and tips and petals. May you have it all, may you all find it as intoxicating as it sounds.

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  19. This has a striking rhythm and is pitch-perfect for the prompt. Sumptuous and sensuous! A real treat :).

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  20. May your life be filled with colours of happiness.

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  21. Thanks for the sensual wash of color this morning, I needed that after yesterday's snow.

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  22. "we gaze, without words
    as colors drink
    our skin
    craving for sun's fever"
    Who among us cannot relate to those words? Looking forward to the colors of summer as spoken so well in your poem.

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  23. we gaze, without words
    as colors drink
    our skin....sweet and sensuous !

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  24. You've left me going over in my mind the concept of "rain dust"; truly poetic writing...

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  25. hm...an entrancing & seductive array of colors. ah, but the ending from kissed on sounds heavenly.

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  26. "Color me summer" sets the tone for this sensuous poem. You write about intimacy with deftness and delicacy, Grace. :-)

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