Thursday, 15 January 2015

Seducing with TenWords




I don't wear
red
shoes nor lipstick
Only spice
                earthly- 

















Fruit

I draw from memory -
      half-dazed moon
      peeling your skin
                                ripening


~0~0~


Spell


Night sky carried you
    between violin percussions
    & electric kisses


~0~0~


Unmasked


With you
    i 
    become midnight 
    fire & oil 
    burnishing golden
    


First post is for Poetry Jam - Shoes or Feet hosted by Mary
And for D'verse Poets Pub - TenWords hosted by Victoria ~  Thanks to Brian for fun form, smiles ~

photo credit:  here  

50 comments:

  1. Oh I expected you to do well here.. these are all little gems, the names are each such integrated part of the the whole form... wonderful

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    1. Thanks Bjorn ~ Channelling my other persona to life, smiles ~

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  2. spice is a good thing...and that comes out of personality...and attitude and many other things than just what we put on...its more who we are....the midnight oil in the last made me smile....do you remember that band?

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    1. A little bit, such a crazy band it was ~

      Thanks for the visit Brian ~

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  3. Ten words have never been so sensual and sexy. Very cool.

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  4. Loved all your "ten words-es"! Phew!
    The no red shoes and no lipstick... Loved the simplicity of it!

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  5. luv your lil vignettes; musr say i live the shoe one best

    happy you stopped by to visit me at Verses

    much love...

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  6. Very seductive, Grace. And (smiles) perhaps that spice moreso than red lipstick or shoes.

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  7. A little spice can sure make the midnight oil burn bright

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  8. My fav. "Spell" ~ nice painting with words.

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  9. Spicy can get red hot. Very sensual poetry as always.
    Have a good day Grace.

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  10. very sensual... i love a red lipstick every once in a while but there's just something about earth that is more immediate than anything else..love the moon peeling the skin a lot as well

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  11. So well said with so few words.

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  12. You did well, Grace. I think the first poem is the one I like best.

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  13. I enjoyed the 10-word form. Amazing how much can be said in so few words. I too like the red-shoe poem.

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  14. Yes, word-spice sensuality in spades; gems, fun, imaginative; great take on Brian's fun form. I like the lines /night sky carried you/between violin percissions/& electric kisses/.

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  15. You enjoyed writing these, I can tell...perfect little tenWords!

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  16. sultry - the perfect antidote to cold weather

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  17. Love how the "I" person sounds so down-to-earth and independent. Strong.
    No matter the ten words - very concise.

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  18. So sensual… You mastered this form!
    I especially like the spell --I can listen those violin percussions and dream about an electric kiss.

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  19. Such an amazing imagination you have.

    I love this piece by you.

    :)

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  20. midnight oil
    hearts
    unmasked
    nice piece

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  21. Smooth and seductive, like where you took these.

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  22. The art of seduction in ten words as you added your own spices. I enjoyed reading this Grace.

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  23. "fire and oil burnishing golden"...really like that line!!

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  24. I'm never ever disappointed by your sensual poetry. Your words feel full and ripe in my mouth when I recite them... always a pleasure to read you.

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  25. Seductive indeed. I loved "Unmasked" in particular. Beautiful writing. :-)
    -HA

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  26. Wow, you do so much with so few words!

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  27. The last is quite sensual and yet poetic ! Very creative !

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  28. Economize with the words and out will jump the gems. Great lines Grace!

    Hank

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  29. Love your spell...very nice.

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  30. Oh so beautiful and sensual - these are lovely, Grace!

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  31. Ooo, I just love "Spell." Fantastic imagery!

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  32. Lush, delicious words! You made every one count!

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  33. Your writing is so sensual, even with only ten words!

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  34. Heady with fragrance, sensuous. You managed so much with few words!

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  35. These are all gems but the last one really took my breath.

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  36. spice, over red any day... doesn't take a special person to buy red shoes; spice, tho - that's not in everyone...

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  37. These are perfect. Thank you.

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  38. creating the beautiful from the fire of the ordinary, i can feel the enchantment in this.

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  39. Grace, these are all lovely gems to keep but your last take was seriously remarkable. You truly excel in short forms. Smiles. I hope you can still remember me... haha... the one who always disappear... glad to be blogging again.

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  40. All wonderfully sensual despite their succinctness, Grace. Thanks. k. (Manicddaily.wordpress.)

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  41. I loved all these. The electric kisses really prickled. Tigerbrite.

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  42. Especially loved the Fruits one! They're all beautiful though. You're so amazingly talented.
    I hope you are doing well!
    Have a wonderful weekend :)

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