Thursday, 15 January 2015

Seducing with TenWords




I don't wear
red
shoes nor lipstick
Only spice
                earthly- 












Fruit

 I draw from memory -
      half-dazed moon
      peeling your skin
                                ripening
~0~0~
Spell
Night sky carried you
    between violin percussions
    & electric kisses
~0~0~
Unmasked
With you
    i 
    become midnight 
    fire & oil 
    burnishing golden
    


First post is for Poetry Jam - Shoes or Feet hosted by Mary
And for D'verse Poets Pub - TenWords hosted by Victoria ~  Thanks to Brian for fun form, smiles ~

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50 comments:

  1. brudberg15 January 2015 at 08:09

    Oh I expected you to do well here.. these are all little gems, the names are each such integrated part of the the whole form... wonderful

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    1. Scarlet15 January 2015 at 08:24

      Thanks Bjorn ~ Channelling my other persona to life, smiles ~

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  2. Brian Miller15 January 2015 at 08:16

    spice is a good thing...and that comes out of personality...and attitude and many other things than just what we put on...its more who we are....the midnight oil in the last made me smile....do you remember that band?

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    1. Scarlet15 January 2015 at 08:31

      A little bit, such a crazy band it was ~

      Thanks for the visit Brian ~

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  3. Kathryn Dyche15 January 2015 at 08:37

    Ten words have never been so sensual and sexy. Very cool.

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  4. Donna Smith15 January 2015 at 08:56

    Loved all your "ten words-es"! Phew!
    The no red shoes and no lipstick... Loved the simplicity of it!

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  5. Gillena Cox15 January 2015 at 09:09

    luv your lil vignettes; musr say i live the shoe one best

    happy you stopped by to visit me at Verses

    much love...

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  6. Mary15 January 2015 at 09:16

    Very seductive, Grace. And (smiles) perhaps that spice moreso than red lipstick or shoes.

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  7. Pat Hatt15 January 2015 at 10:21

    A little spice can sure make the midnight oil burn bright

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  8. humbird15 January 2015 at 10:48

    My fav. "Spell" ~ nice painting with words.

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  9. Myrna R.15 January 2015 at 10:51

    Spicy can get red hot. Very sensual poetry as always.
    Have a good day Grace.

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  10. Claudia15 January 2015 at 11:10

    very sensual... i love a red lipstick every once in a while but there's just something about earth that is more immediate than anything else..love the moon peeling the skin a lot as well

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  11. Vandana Sharma15 January 2015 at 12:15

    so much said n those ten words!

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  12. Gail15 January 2015 at 13:25

    So well said with so few words.

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  13. Gabriella15 January 2015 at 13:54

    You did well, Grace. I think the first poem is the one I like best.

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  14. Peggy15 January 2015 at 14:08

    I enjoyed the 10-word form. Amazing how much can be said in so few words. I too like the red-shoe poem.

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  15. Glenn Buttkus15 January 2015 at 15:07

    Yes, word-spice sensuality in spades; gems, fun, imaginative; great take on Brian's fun form. I like the lines /night sky carried you/between violin percissions/& electric kisses/.

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  16. Anonymous15 January 2015 at 15:22

    These are incredible.

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  17. Kathy Reed15 January 2015 at 17:02

    You enjoyed writing these, I can tell...perfect little tenWords!

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  18. Anonymous15 January 2015 at 17:14

    sultry - the perfect antidote to cold weather

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  19. cammies on the floor15 January 2015 at 17:17

    Love how the "I" person sounds so down-to-earth and independent. Strong.
    No matter the ten words - very concise.

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  20. Anonymous15 January 2015 at 17:18

    So sensual… You mastered this form!
    I especially like the spell --I can listen those violin percussions and dream about an electric kiss.

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  21. Anonymous15 January 2015 at 17:34

    Such an amazing imagination you have.

    I love this piece by you.

    :)

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  22. Cressida de Nova15 January 2015 at 18:51

    midnight oil
    hearts
    unmasked
    nice piece

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  23. Ginny Brannan15 January 2015 at 20:33

    Smooth and seductive, like where you took these.

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  24. Truedessa15 January 2015 at 22:01

    The art of seduction in ten words as you added your own spices. I enjoyed reading this Grace.

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  25. Anonymous15 January 2015 at 23:28

    "fire and oil burnishing golden"...really like that line!!

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  26. The Bizza15 January 2015 at 23:48

    I'm never ever disappointed by your sensual poetry. Your words feel full and ripe in my mouth when I recite them... always a pleasure to read you.

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  27. Anonymous16 January 2015 at 02:23

    Seductive indeed. I loved "Unmasked" in particular. Beautiful writing. :-)
    -HA

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  28. Rosemary Nissen-Wade16 January 2015 at 04:45

    Wow, you do so much with so few words!

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  29. Misky16 January 2015 at 06:24

    Very spicy! Love the red.

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  30. Anti-Aging, Health, Personal Care16 January 2015 at 07:44

    The last is quite sensual and yet poetic ! Very creative !

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  31. kaykuala16 January 2015 at 08:50

    Economize with the words and out will jump the gems. Great lines Grace!

    Hank

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  32. Anonymous16 January 2015 at 09:04

    Very nice, evocative.

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  33. annell416 January 2015 at 09:44

    Each one a tiny wonderland!

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  34. JANU16 January 2015 at 10:15

    Love your spell...very nice.

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  35. Anonymous16 January 2015 at 11:51

    Oh so beautiful and sensual - these are lovely, Grace!

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  36. Anonymous16 January 2015 at 12:33

    Ooo, I just love "Spell." Fantastic imagery!

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  37. Other Mary16 January 2015 at 13:03

    Lush, delicious words! You made every one count!

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  38. Lolamouse16 January 2015 at 13:21

    Your writing is so sensual, even with only ten words!

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  39. Jennifer Wagner16 January 2015 at 14:07

    Heady with fragrance, sensuous. You managed so much with few words!

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  40. Unknown16 January 2015 at 19:23

    These are all gems but the last one really took my breath.

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  41. Unknown16 January 2015 at 20:26

    spice, over red any day... doesn't take a special person to buy red shoes; spice, tho - that's not in everyone...

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  42. ds16 January 2015 at 23:47

    These are perfect. Thank you.

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  43. alan170417 January 2015 at 05:52

    creating the beautiful from the fire of the ordinary, i can feel the enchantment in this.

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  44. kelvin s.m.17 January 2015 at 06:20

    Grace, these are all lovely gems to keep but your last take was seriously remarkable. You truly excel in short forms. Smiles. I hope you can still remember me... haha... the one who always disappear... glad to be blogging again.

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  45. Outlawyer17 January 2015 at 09:16

    All wonderfully sensual despite their succinctness, Grace. Thanks. k. (Manicddaily.wordpress.)

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  46. Anonymous17 January 2015 at 12:25

    I loved all these. The electric kisses really prickled. Tigerbrite.

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  47. Beate24 January 2015 at 20:41

    Especially loved the Fruits one! They're all beautiful though. You're so amazingly talented.
    I hope you are doing well!
    Have a wonderful weekend :)

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  48. grapeling4 February 2015 at 01:53

    a most excellent series ~

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