tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post904719879190850756..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: ConfessionsScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger44125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-77211517867531230102011-08-17T15:55:11.745-04:002011-08-17T15:55:11.745-04:00I've added a postscript to my post.
Visiting i...I've added a postscript to my post.<br />Visiting is optional. <br />Best wishes,<br />Anna<br /><a href="http://annasadornments.blogspot.com/2011/08/confused-romantic-friday-writing.html%20" rel="nofollow">Anna's RFW No 14 - "Confused"</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926688000745346961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-58946580759460569912011-08-14T19:31:48.838-04:002011-08-14T19:31:48.838-04:00I see the appeal, though I sometimes find guys who...I see the appeal, though I sometimes find guys who do that kind of thing annoying--it tests my patience and my sense of being true to yourself. Nice work ~ MsQMs. Queenlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09941689050359457467noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-18472471706043851352011-08-14T08:20:53.199-04:002011-08-14T08:20:53.199-04:00Thank you for the feedback.
JL Campbell, I have e...Thank you for the feedback.<br /><br />JL Campbell, I have edited it. <br /><br />I appreciate all your inputs.Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-89924933826233455952011-08-13T23:16:04.008-04:002011-08-13T23:16:04.008-04:00Heaven,
It's great that you convey so much i...Heaven, <br /><br />It's great that you convey so much in so few words. Wish I had that talent. <br /><br />Embracing her close, he murmurs against her soft lips, - In terms of the line above, I was thinking that if it doesn't mess with your poetry flow (about which I know absolutely nothing) you could leave out 'close', since embracing her would be drawing her close. Hope this helps and that I haven't confused you.J.L. Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05666634455836834179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-48308464785679813232011-08-13T13:00:17.495-04:002011-08-13T13:00:17.495-04:00Poetry and poetic prose so beautifully melded. My...Poetry and poetic prose so beautifully melded. My favorite bit: "i lied, i do care"Ruth Madisonhttp://www.ruthmadison.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-29701270435643678622011-08-13T11:20:28.611-04:002011-08-13T11:20:28.611-04:00Piercing lines. .from beginning to end. Beautifull...Piercing lines. .from beginning to end. Beautifully done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-19044590731148801242011-08-12T18:16:05.366-04:002011-08-12T18:16:05.366-04:00That all linked rather nicely! I enjoy both haiku ...That all linked rather nicely! I enjoy both haiku and flash, so it was nice to see this combo, one playing off of the other. Nice!Lihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-30055409403934551582011-08-12T15:32:34.990-04:002011-08-12T15:32:34.990-04:00Hi,
Yes, this is a very sensuous text! I am no exp...Hi,<br />Yes, this is a very sensuous text! I am no expert on poetry, but I really like your haiku. (Great that you could combine several memes here!) You say so much with so few words. <br />Fits the theme "Confused", perfectly.<br />I agree with Jabblog's comment, the line 'I lied, I do care' says so much.<br /><br />Best wishes,<br />Anna<br /><a href="http://annasadornments.blogspot.com/2011/08/confused-romantic-friday-writing.html%20" rel="nofollow">Anna's RFW No 14 - "Confused"</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926688000745346961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-107760484611305632011-08-12T06:37:26.354-04:002011-08-12T06:37:26.354-04:00Hi,
Love the coyness of saying one thing whilst ...Hi,<br /><br />Love the coyness of saying one thing whilst another coquettish in mind. Both examples beautiful in own right!<br /><br />I adore Cinnamon biscuits/cakes, and sprinkled on custard let alone added to curried dishes! ;)<br /><br />best<br />FFrancine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-73333190660505149052011-08-11T23:16:58.143-04:002011-08-11T23:16:58.143-04:00Hey Heaven, sensuous seems to be the word. Clever ...Hey Heaven, sensuous seems to be the word. Clever how you manipulated this to fit the theme. Tasty lips. hmm...<br /><br />DeniseDenise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-46305092172049721222011-08-11T21:28:09.063-04:002011-08-11T21:28:09.063-04:00Hello.
I am in the land of the unknown when it com...Hello.<br />I am in the land of the unknown when it comes to all these poetry forms.<br />I do like the opening lines though. I think we've all said one thing and meant something else at some point in time.<br />I like the underlying sensual tone too. The image is perfect for the piece.<br /><br />Nicely done, Heaven!The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-49735771853915055532011-08-06T03:47:03.987-04:002011-08-06T03:47:03.987-04:00sensuous, romantic and somewhat tasty confession, ...sensuous, romantic and somewhat tasty confession, Heaven :) glad that haiku is growing on you :DVinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-62263490410279473572011-08-06T01:07:48.167-04:002011-08-06T01:07:48.167-04:00Mmmmm - what a delicious confession!Mmmmm - what a delicious confession!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-28162700871236783672011-08-03T22:21:13.255-04:002011-08-03T22:21:13.255-04:00This is a delicious confession--and confection!This is a delicious confession--and confection!Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-37923135627260019462011-08-03T08:20:58.068-04:002011-08-03T08:20:58.068-04:00A great read.
Love the connection between the phot...A great read.<br />Love the connection between the photo and the poetry.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-13170189340899659612011-08-03T07:13:38.529-04:002011-08-03T07:13:38.529-04:00terrific and sensuous :) great read..terrific and sensuous :) great read..Sayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08844362909084249093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-31232358830575684812011-08-03T01:48:54.876-04:002011-08-03T01:48:54.876-04:00nicely written, brought a smile to my place. i can...nicely written, brought a smile to my place. i can relate ;)Dishilicioushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00954015760830917157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-74409619538692214122011-08-03T00:56:31.369-04:002011-08-03T00:56:31.369-04:00i wish i could write like this.i wish i could write like this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-80215085354544754962011-08-02T23:19:58.833-04:002011-08-02T23:19:58.833-04:00Wine and cinnamon :)Lovely read.Wine and cinnamon :)Lovely read.Live2cherishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15826618983723239092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-91600221778125513522011-08-02T21:37:04.548-04:002011-08-02T21:37:04.548-04:00My, so full of romance. A joy to read!!My, so full of romance. A joy to read!!The Write Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-65097122711825473162011-08-02T13:56:01.366-04:002011-08-02T13:56:01.366-04:00Well written, enjoyed the word play.Well written, enjoyed the word play.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-61189672497727569602011-08-02T12:32:21.431-04:002011-08-02T12:32:21.431-04:00wow.. I love it.. heavenly..
Someone is Specialwow.. I love it.. heavenly..<br /><br />Someone is SpecialSomeone is Specialhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16271391140125090742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-6163190707764705092011-08-02T11:27:11.280-04:002011-08-02T11:27:11.280-04:00Wow steamy what a great read !Wow steamy what a great read !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-60258215409709738292011-08-02T07:42:56.710-04:002011-08-02T07:42:56.710-04:00'I lied, I do care' - says it all about th...'I lied, I do care' - says it all about the convolutions of romance.jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-57130927765792025222011-08-02T02:42:39.379-04:002011-08-02T02:42:39.379-04:00beautiful honest self-exploratory write...beautiful honest self-exploratory write...Emeniano A Somoza Jrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04271204092780723440noreply@blogger.com