tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post8359612137407265511..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: FloatingScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger45125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-87217779778795959002011-08-06T11:25:48.454-04:002011-08-06T11:25:48.454-04:00This made me feel like the figure in the picture. ...This made me feel like the figure in the picture. Beautiful! Shah - x http://wordsinsync.blogspot.com/2011/08/weekend-creation-blog-hop-plus-poem.htmlShah Whartonhttp://wordsinsync.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-55904198100925040292011-08-02T19:10:30.170-04:002011-08-02T19:10:30.170-04:00This is beautiful! Thank you.This is beautiful! Thank you.Patriciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00991524097486901864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-49970088806686063742011-08-01T14:08:00.786-04:002011-08-01T14:08:00.786-04:00lovely imagery Sweet lust...lovely imagery Sweet lust...1ManViewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17896979433381268598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-63740628026613150492011-08-01T11:34:15.452-04:002011-08-01T11:34:15.452-04:00I like the truth in this, how a false profession o...I like the truth in this, how a false profession of innocence can drag a person down, and how admitting this - and then letting go, forgiving - can buoy one up. Very nicely done, and the poem has a comforting feel to it.Mark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-35987436978148072352011-08-01T07:49:50.636-04:002011-08-01T07:49:50.636-04:00I like your metaphor, 'sea of 'and 'of...I like your metaphor, 'sea of 'and 'of forgiveness'. Nice one.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-49460535639811243962011-08-01T04:53:40.984-04:002011-08-01T04:53:40.984-04:00That was very soothing, to come out of complicatio...That was very soothing, to come out of complications and just relax, for hope is righteously our vision for a better tomorrow.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-14864788234283721512011-08-01T03:43:48.818-04:002011-08-01T03:43:48.818-04:00What a lovely write! Liquid, sensual. For someon...What a lovely write! Liquid, sensual. For someone who professes to be new to this, I would say, you're going to be a star! Well done! More, please.jackie dicknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-47212381976291244542011-07-31T22:28:10.947-04:002011-07-31T22:28:10.947-04:00I love, love your writing Heaven. And as much as I...I love, love your writing Heaven. And as much as I truly enjoy the eroticism of your blog I'm thankful you've diversified in your writing because it gives us a chance to see more of what you're capable of (you'll forgive me, I realize that's poor grammar but it's rather late). <br /><br />I've always been a fan of free verse but I also have to say that much of your poetry is more formal and structured than mine. I appreciate your discipline.<br /><br />This particular piece has a wonderfully airy feel and a cathartic tone. Being the eternal idealist and dreamer, the ending works well for me. :)Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04641761671561288846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-10893963384277983102011-07-31T20:11:28.881-04:002011-07-31T20:11:28.881-04:00Beautiful write about the cleansing power of water...Beautiful write about the cleansing power of water. Intriguing image...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-89727604797627184172011-07-31T18:12:01.836-04:002011-07-31T18:12:01.836-04:00I felt the water, the weight. Your lines.
You end...I felt the water, the weight. Your lines.<br /><br />You ended with forgiveness, safety.<br />That is something I haven't found.<br />Thank you for sharing. This connected to me in a very direct way.<br /><br />Wonderful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-34645754192468391762011-07-31T18:11:35.985-04:002011-07-31T18:11:35.985-04:00I felt the water, the weight. Your lines.
You end...I felt the water, the weight. Your lines.<br /><br />You ended with forgiveness, safety.<br />That is something I haven't found.<br />Thank you for sharing. This connected to me in a very direct way.<br /><br />Wonderful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-79970917706858379882011-07-31T17:41:09.262-04:002011-07-31T17:41:09.262-04:00Lovely piece, Heaven!Lovely piece, Heaven!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-64939961426302405892011-07-31T17:31:49.322-04:002011-07-31T17:31:49.322-04:00This reminds me so much of being baptized and the ...This reminds me so much of being baptized and the emotions felt afterwards.<br /><br />Nicely done, Heaven. Great image too!<br /><br />I'm here:<br /><a href="http://mypoetcharm.blogspot.com/2011/07/moments-in-sun.html" rel="nofollow">Moments In The Sun</a>The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-77094242808540410912011-07-31T15:17:03.728-04:002011-07-31T15:17:03.728-04:00Lovely fluidity to this.. so apt. A pleasure to re...Lovely fluidity to this.. so apt. A pleasure to reach a cleansing shore...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-9111646918518315072011-07-31T12:10:45.503-04:002011-07-31T12:10:45.503-04:00Beautiful indeed!
http://achu89.blogspot.com/Beautiful indeed!<br /><br />http://achu89.blogspot.com/Center Shockerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11649902594496085368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-14723224767789840252011-07-31T11:16:10.470-04:002011-07-31T11:16:10.470-04:00I appreciate the hope last verse brings. Nicely do...I appreciate the hope last verse brings. Nicely done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-42536256333649816102011-07-31T10:09:39.809-04:002011-07-31T10:09:39.809-04:00I like the simple flow of the poem. It does its wo...I like the simple flow of the poem. It does its work and isn't overwrought.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-81117797709240848572011-07-31T09:45:19.953-04:002011-07-31T09:45:19.953-04:00I love the imagery here.I love the imagery here.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-60682377768070979242011-07-31T09:41:22.081-04:002011-07-31T09:41:22.081-04:00Lovely write - the last stanza perfectly inspiring...Lovely write - the last stanza perfectly inspiring. ~ RoseAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988016086874324471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-18029740819450060752011-07-31T08:50:02.154-04:002011-07-31T08:50:02.154-04:00Thank you everyone for the visit and wonderful wor...Thank you everyone for the visit and wonderful words. I appreciate it ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-39618066002626999292011-07-31T06:13:08.812-04:002011-07-31T06:13:08.812-04:00This is very good. Uplifting...a poem of hope.
-H...This is very good. Uplifting...a poem of hope.<br /><br />-HAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-13678965091977682272011-07-31T05:31:42.138-04:002011-07-31T05:31:42.138-04:00Water is a powerful metaphor...speaking as someone...Water is a powerful metaphor...speaking as someone who was recently baptized...and cleansed.. :)Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216734722467789412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-78502165329096271412011-07-31T04:59:32.228-04:002011-07-31T04:59:32.228-04:00Such a soft blue ephiphany, womblike and free. Yes...Such a soft blue ephiphany, womblike and free. Yes, yes, yes. -BrendanBrendanhttp://blueoran.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-64790740124083463732011-07-31T00:35:04.414-04:002011-07-31T00:35:04.414-04:00WoW ! Powerful.WoW ! Powerful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-514030455939885002011-07-31T00:11:34.804-04:002011-07-31T00:11:34.804-04:00Very beautiful, Heaven.
Your poem gave me a sense ...Very beautiful, Heaven.<br />Your poem gave me a sense of such peace!<br />Love it!<br /><br />Margie :)Margiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14433759763753850718noreply@blogger.com