tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post7932338545107788254..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: Words at the tip of my tongueScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger51125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-71874774269078485702014-08-08T03:33:26.101-04:002014-08-08T03:33:26.101-04:00Your have sensuality in your grip.Your have sensuality in your grip.Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-21130452873459181362012-08-05T19:43:32.872-04:002012-08-05T19:43:32.872-04:00One of the best pantoums I've read this week, ...One of the best pantoums I've read this week, and the flash fiction is evocative and sensuous. Smart writing!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-47501563878651415732012-08-05T19:08:05.982-04:002012-08-05T19:08:05.982-04:00Love the pantoum! And then the verb poem provides...Love the pantoum! And then the verb poem provides such a nice counterpoint, I may never view punctuation the same way again...excellent as usual!Mary B. Mansfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-32891901283837795562012-08-05T13:02:16.610-04:002012-08-05T13:02:16.610-04:00awesome combination of rhythm, sensuality, formal ...awesome combination of rhythm, sensuality, formal structure and they were just dripping with oomph.fabulous stuff.Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-82120229224646911152012-08-05T10:41:08.655-04:002012-08-05T10:41:08.655-04:00Agreed. The verb was very sensual and I love the w...Agreed. The verb was very sensual and I love the way the lines carry you through the poem!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-57887266024428716342012-08-04T01:50:46.837-04:002012-08-04T01:50:46.837-04:00Both writes are so sensual. A tribute to your wond...Both writes are so sensual. A tribute to your wonderful style ...1ManViewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17896979433381268598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-91487085873066023422012-08-04T01:33:18.207-04:002012-08-04T01:33:18.207-04:00nice selection of verbs, Heaven! whew!
♥nice selection of verbs, Heaven! whew!<br /><br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-40969325186800995472012-08-03T23:08:22.583-04:002012-08-03T23:08:22.583-04:00Seriously hot verbs!Seriously hot verbs!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-50449383394118444552012-08-03T22:53:45.637-04:002012-08-03T22:53:45.637-04:00Oh me, oh my... you do know how to do sexy... wher...Oh me, oh my... you do know how to do sexy... where's my man? Yes, you've inspired me. It will be our little secret. Shhhhh... he won't mind. In fact, if he knew, he'd want to thank you. :)Serenahttp://www.serenahelriot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-91658099392875793082012-08-03T20:49:38.983-04:002012-08-03T20:49:38.983-04:00"I prefer the verb
to the n..."I prefer the verb <br /> to the noun<br /> when I am<br /> with you"<br /><br />I love this line. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-7089877346866423192012-08-03T20:40:08.415-04:002012-08-03T20:40:08.415-04:00Gorgeous, as always. I love the release in the fir...Gorgeous, as always. I love the release in the first one. And I'm sighing after the second. You take the sensual touch and place it so accurately into words. Adore~Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-79783416866240064152012-08-03T17:41:05.442-04:002012-08-03T17:41:05.442-04:00I love the movement in both pieces. Your pantoum ...I love the movement in both pieces. Your pantoum flows as beautifully as the dance you describe. I don't know about verbs or nouns, but I adore punctuation...RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-8937169793671198592012-08-03T11:12:02.248-04:002012-08-03T11:12:02.248-04:00Wow. You're so talented. I love the first on...Wow. You're so talented. I love the first one and the way you obeyed the form. So well done. The second one is very steamy, but classy.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-72864382257003106922012-08-03T11:00:19.017-04:002012-08-03T11:00:19.017-04:00So beautifully written with such grace! So sexy! L...So beautifully written with such grace! So sexy! Love love love both! You have outdone yourself, Heaven! Have you a blessed weekend.<br />hugs shakira <br />Mine is <a href="http://justmeshakirack.blogspot.com/2012/08/flash-fiction-friday-once-upon-time.html" rel="nofollow"> here</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10264352891639027269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-34992519773841709402012-08-03T10:25:28.030-04:002012-08-03T10:25:28.030-04:00beautiful G!beautiful G!ashokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07151604896442505084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-35647820584301499892012-08-03T08:53:45.460-04:002012-08-03T08:53:45.460-04:00Just lovely...Just lovely...Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-62811641202926622932012-08-03T08:08:36.701-04:002012-08-03T08:08:36.701-04:00gripping arms - nom nom!gripping arms - nom nom!DEZMONDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14127166104359407763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-73398319301772996582012-08-03T06:25:11.490-04:002012-08-03T06:25:11.490-04:00Wow...the verb is hot, hot, hot all the way! Ever...Wow...the verb is hot, hot, hot all the way! Everything from the shape of the poem to the words work!!! Nice!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-22200375752861465052012-08-03T06:03:42.328-04:002012-08-03T06:03:42.328-04:00A smoldering 55!A smoldering 55!Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-91458569137897154162012-08-03T04:58:22.266-04:002012-08-03T04:58:22.266-04:00Sensual and beautiful :)Sensual and beautiful :)ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-53978671750631055492012-08-03T02:47:35.727-04:002012-08-03T02:47:35.727-04:00I like the cocktail glass and the pink leaf.
And I...I like the cocktail glass and the pink leaf.<br />And I don't think there is anything left to say about the other that flirts with me and has me put in my own dashes--I love dashes--<br />But I do like how both kiss the tip of your tongue.<br /><br />Fine words!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-77726057830613712872012-08-03T02:41:39.544-04:002012-08-03T02:41:39.544-04:00These are both sexy. Another excellent phantom fro...These are both sexy. Another excellent phantom from today's challenge.Wyeth Baileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14362260758559640980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-51988537707366372772012-08-03T02:05:03.055-04:002012-08-03T02:05:03.055-04:00both your poems are dancing..playful and yep..i th...both your poems are dancing..playful and yep..i think i prefer verbs to nouns as well...smilesClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-4628612955316653902012-08-03T02:01:57.871-04:002012-08-03T02:01:57.871-04:00We are talking dance...my is it hot in here?We are talking dance...my is it hot in here?John (@bookdreamer)https://www.blogger.com/profile/11576434749272275190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-22187020160626114832012-08-02T23:51:59.677-04:002012-08-02T23:51:59.677-04:00Very cool together. The tips of tongues busy here...Very cool together. The tips of tongues busy here! (Sorry.) But very clever. k.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com