tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post7843927479506407730..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: GeminiScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger47125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-40135474904364093522013-06-12T01:16:28.114-04:002013-06-12T01:16:28.114-04:00I guess there's always live two people in us.....I guess there's always live two people in us.. <br />one good, one bad<br />one happy, one sad.. <br /><br />point is, which one we choose to reflect out :)Jyoti Mishrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01794675170127168298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-79516591334429341472013-06-11T02:22:16.094-04:002013-06-11T02:22:16.094-04:00Grace this is wow! It is so divinely beautiful, br...Grace this is wow! It is so divinely beautiful, breath-taking, I am completely in love with this poem =)<br /><br />I wrote one for Duality too but I was naturally late lol<br />http://mindlovemisery.wordpress.com/2013/06/11/duality/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-33399659798150507602013-06-10T08:21:12.996-04:002013-06-10T08:21:12.996-04:00Really amazing...the way you put wonderful images ...Really amazing...the way you put wonderful images with words....such contrasting personas...loved this.Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-20409190148105272662013-06-10T07:36:26.088-04:002013-06-10T07:36:26.088-04:00the two images within us.Wonderful metaphoric expr...the two images within us.Wonderful metaphoric expressions here!TCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-40787688283691457782013-06-10T02:40:08.972-04:002013-06-10T02:40:08.972-04:00"the moon's love... the sun's bride&q..."the moon's love... the sun's bride"<br />love this description!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-27375640979505875182013-06-09T22:17:06.224-04:002013-06-09T22:17:06.224-04:00Marvellous contrasting descriptions!Marvellous contrasting descriptions!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-71572326286135650492013-06-09T20:52:22.879-04:002013-06-09T20:52:22.879-04:00I love the last line. What a powerful piece, Heav...I love the last line. What a powerful piece, Heaven! Happy Sunday.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-68569890451195265322013-06-09T20:02:26.481-04:002013-06-09T20:02:26.481-04:00Truth in every verse that speaks of who you are. L...Truth in every verse that speaks of who you are. Like this alot.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-80636811647442933132013-06-09T18:53:55.563-04:002013-06-09T18:53:55.563-04:00"the first loves with a hungry stomach:
coa..."the first loves with a hungry stomach: <br />coarse grain pollen, wild honey & forest rain"<br /><br />That's lovely.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-63536319009836119142013-06-09T16:45:45.788-04:002013-06-09T16:45:45.788-04:00Love the picture~the saying 'opposites attract...Love the picture~the saying 'opposites attract' comes to mind. Beautiful poem.Linda Rogershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10387405429395292887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-27646063023102208362013-06-09T12:15:06.682-04:002013-06-09T12:15:06.682-04:00Very poetical, metaphorical, I will return to read...Very poetical, metaphorical, I will return to read again....my favorite: "the flame, growing like a peacock from her head",and Grace,<br />I like how you post the picture - after the poem, what make words work first... humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-20362222955380907342013-06-09T09:27:08.309-04:002013-06-09T09:27:08.309-04:00I love the contrasts Heaven, your writing has so m...I love the contrasts Heaven, your writing has so many beautiful bits that I'd love to have tattooed on my body, that says a lot about how good they are!Outcasthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03400755239612162157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-65530863765211380502013-06-09T09:26:22.473-04:002013-06-09T09:26:22.473-04:00Grace,
The picture is amazing..and your second ve...Grace,<br /><br />The picture is amazing..and your second verse really stands out..nice imagery throughout.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-59020177727642861792013-06-09T08:03:29.192-04:002013-06-09T08:03:29.192-04:00Quite amazing imagery!Quite amazing imagery!J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-14420455183999162632013-06-09T06:13:17.224-04:002013-06-09T06:13:17.224-04:00The third stanza is a real humdinger. Lights up th...The third stanza is a real humdinger. Lights up the whole poem.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-49089399694567963912013-06-09T05:03:24.530-04:002013-06-09T05:03:24.530-04:00Ah!! just lovely:)Ah!! just lovely:)Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-69023837151333880642013-06-09T01:54:55.326-04:002013-06-09T01:54:55.326-04:00First, I'm huge on this format- couplets with ...First, I'm huge on this format- couplets with the second line indented. It's so eye-pleasing to me. I loved the poetry too. One wild, one steadfast; great writing here! -MikeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-44678441209722503052013-06-08T22:51:25.414-04:002013-06-08T22:51:25.414-04:00Oh wow...loved loved loved it...this is the one I ...Oh wow...loved loved loved it...this is the one I wanted to write...it's gorgeous Grace. That ending had me feeling the wind taking me away...a truly wonderful piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-91607855449547430322013-06-08T22:51:04.854-04:002013-06-08T22:51:04.854-04:00Amazing - simply stunning!Amazing - simply stunning!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09589253190731511955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-20419257985252564152013-06-08T21:37:55.414-04:002013-06-08T21:37:55.414-04:00Wow this is great Heaven and thanks for the work o...Wow this is great Heaven and thanks for the work on toads! Its a great site :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-25930210283005589082013-06-08T18:57:25.215-04:002013-06-08T18:57:25.215-04:00You really ran with this one, Heaven. I like it ve...You really ran with this one, Heaven. I like it very much--some excellent, resonant lines and images--especially like 'loves with a hungry stomach...' very emphatic amid all the more delicate imagery.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-8284405844132935182013-06-08T18:50:50.493-04:002013-06-08T18:50:50.493-04:00Beautiful metaphoric writing indeed. Love your wo...Beautiful metaphoric writing indeed. Love your words - very much.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-63696876556384118112013-06-08T18:13:16.491-04:002013-06-08T18:13:16.491-04:00two of one so brilliantly interwoventwo of one so brilliantly interwovenChris Lawrencehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12082462583986448559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-83265718340731958422013-06-08T17:26:26.462-04:002013-06-08T17:26:26.462-04:00Thanks Claudia ~Thanks Claudia ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-48966448043488136532013-06-08T17:26:13.667-04:002013-06-08T17:26:13.667-04:00Thank you for the lovely compliment Miriam ~Thank you for the lovely compliment Miriam ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.com