tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post6729506558128395329..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: Dark loveScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger53125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-30521459259374241422011-10-23T05:58:16.786-04:002011-10-23T05:58:16.786-04:00I think the last verse of this poem is superb - I ...I think the last verse of this poem is superb - I wanted to read it again and again.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-34325423461277073742011-10-12T16:28:43.873-04:002011-10-12T16:28:43.873-04:00I love the dark/pale contrast. And the opening pho...I love the dark/pale contrast. And the opening photo is a perfect introduction. That is how a kiss should begin, forceful and gripping.<br /><br />This is a powerful line: "you wanted to scourge my body into hades"✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-83539637190167451692011-10-02T03:27:15.773-04:002011-10-02T03:27:15.773-04:00Dark but beautiful, the story of bitter power abus...Dark but beautiful, the story of bitter power abuse. Amazing how you wove the words!<br /><br />Congratulations for winning, your poem really is the best!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-64602687766137044922011-10-01T10:46:17.939-04:002011-10-01T10:46:17.939-04:00Your words brought every image to mind as I read t...Your words brought every image to mind as I read them. I think the short info afterwards was just the thing to complete it. <br />I think the pix goes perfectly with your words. <br />Intense and Brilliant,<br />IsadoraIsadorahttp://insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-33696710612364145672011-09-29T23:17:44.840-04:002011-09-29T23:17:44.840-04:00So often, I can pace myself in your shorter pieces...So often, I can pace myself in your shorter pieces, savoring the image and your gifts. This poem was a sensual headlong plunge toward a breathless (pardon the expression) climax. And no, I don't play the double entendre game when I comment on my friends' poems. Terrific piece, Heaven.Joseph Heschhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13217169295029029233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-19802485958289257732011-09-29T23:01:55.144-04:002011-09-29T23:01:55.144-04:00Dark - devouringDark - devouringmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-64896372704714199392011-09-29T16:56:45.649-04:002011-09-29T16:56:45.649-04:00Blame it on my over-active imagination. Thanks f...Blame it on my over-active imagination. Thanks for the wonderful comments and visits.Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-19565901653183023082011-09-29T15:56:56.128-04:002011-09-29T15:56:56.128-04:00Persephone's story was never this sexy. Your p...Persephone's story was never this sexy. Your poem is filled with such imagery ...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-1746020979486692202011-09-29T08:32:50.573-04:002011-09-29T08:32:50.573-04:00You definitely got into the roles here, Heaven--a ...You definitely got into the roles here, Heaven--a sharp retelling of the old myth.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-42114743004514782222011-09-29T02:06:09.725-04:002011-09-29T02:06:09.725-04:00this is powerful. i love it!this is powerful. i love it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-54431908635538953142011-09-28T16:48:21.277-04:002011-09-28T16:48:21.277-04:00Love this, Heaven! Beautiful words and the way you...Love this, Heaven! Beautiful words and the way you've created this story using myth, but also doors, ribbons, etc. gives it a modern feel. Hard to pick a favourite para, but I think beginning...'Forget, I want to...' <br /><br />I love the feeling of surrender : ) <br /><br />Gorgeous piece and really pulled me in from the beginning! <br />- Eva (your kindred sister : )Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-574441737568756362011-09-28T16:43:01.362-04:002011-09-28T16:43:01.362-04:00Heaven this is an amazing piece--I'm so impres...Heaven this is an amazing piece--I'm so impressed with your ability.<br /><br />I have nominated you for The Versatile Blogger Award--enjoy!<br /><br />http://bodhirose.wordpress.com/2011/09/28/the-versatile-blogger-award-2/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-18201729468405356312011-09-28T16:18:50.539-04:002011-09-28T16:18:50.539-04:00hot, sweet passion magically shown.
perfect take....hot, sweet passion magically shown.<br /><br />perfect take.Pat-Mather Brown Gordon-ceton https://www.blogger.com/profile/08054955235497418740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-10503680834328137302011-09-28T14:09:55.587-04:002011-09-28T14:09:55.587-04:00wow, you did an amazing job with this, love, love,...wow, you did an amazing job with this, love, love, love the imagery. perfect!mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-14980807033298703982011-09-28T13:55:58.670-04:002011-09-28T13:55:58.670-04:00Hello Heaven.
I don't know much about mytholog...Hello Heaven.<br />I don't know much about mythology, but I do love the sultry passion in this poem. Makes all the senses come alive. Your descriptions are quite vivid indeed.<br /><br />Wonderfully expressed.<br /><br />Thanks for the footnotes too.<br /><br />I also appreciated your visit & comment.<br /><br /><a href="http://mypoetcharm.blogspot.com/2011/09/your-song-of-love.html" rel="nofollow">Your Song Of Love</a>The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-77603810606135006842011-09-28T12:12:49.494-04:002011-09-28T12:12:49.494-04:00Oh Heaven this was fantastic. Makes me want to st...Oh Heaven this was fantastic. Makes me want to study more Mythology... I doubt its all as hot as this though.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-25357899780611181892011-09-28T11:32:56.343-04:002011-09-28T11:32:56.343-04:00So, can I say that this is the "dark" si...So, can I say that this is the "dark" side of Heaven? Sensual write :)Aphroditehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10194614359206424790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-38087501805468626852011-09-28T09:30:31.075-04:002011-09-28T09:30:31.075-04:00Great write! I don't know much about Greek my...Great write! I don't know much about Greek mythology, so this was quite interesting. :)Rachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-45869041425668071352011-09-28T09:19:12.484-04:002011-09-28T09:19:12.484-04:00A very hot (as Hell) poem! I love what you did wit...A very hot (as Hell) poem! I love what you did with the Persephone myth. Much more interesting to read than the typical mythology texts!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-32978845643019449272011-09-28T03:46:27.355-04:002011-09-28T03:46:27.355-04:00the velvet purple ribbon around your neck is luxur...the velvet purple ribbon around your neck is luxurious packaging to end on. what a read. you really cut it loose. your pen name in the body added a special spice, and i like how you loaded that into the final graph also.Ed Pilollahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09139531369534586168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-89427701686667395452011-09-28T02:47:44.486-04:002011-09-28T02:47:44.486-04:00phew! Awesome write about the 'darkness' o...phew! Awesome write about the 'darkness' of passion...lots of steam coming off this one!Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216734722467789412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-44610087336466946862011-09-28T01:12:00.210-04:002011-09-28T01:12:00.210-04:00Heaven,
Sensually proceeding with soft and eagerly...Heaven,<br />Sensually proceeding with soft and eagerly awaiting lips plus other warm moments, fly away! Great verse!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-2998952385418048442011-09-27T23:23:47.681-04:002011-09-27T23:23:47.681-04:00Very strong. We experience the ravagement and her ...Very strong. We experience the ravagement and her seduction. And the furious cries of the first mother-in-law known to mythology. A beauty. Thanks.Charles Elliott/Beautyseerhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zi2BnwdqSl4noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-73518872332065207702011-09-27T22:35:36.566-04:002011-09-27T22:35:36.566-04:00Most beautiful. You are my favorite poet Heaven.Most beautiful. You are my favorite poet Heaven.Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02399300464457820101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-6161106187197195342011-09-27T22:03:13.615-04:002011-09-27T22:03:13.615-04:00This is very sexy poem and there is a hind of sadn...This is very sexy poem and there is a hind of sadness this portrays but it was great that she got to be queen.<br /> http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/27/addiction-to-solitaire/#comment-1201Ann LeFlorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09421100825301270608noreply@blogger.com