tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post6072837080024293176..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: Wild beatScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-46861894213840749722011-12-08T16:39:42.820-05:002011-12-08T16:39:42.820-05:00your writing is brilliantly vivid.
nicely done he...your writing is brilliantly vivid.<br /><br />nicely done heaven! *kisses*Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-10007341877700694862011-12-08T13:58:36.183-05:002011-12-08T13:58:36.183-05:00the words, the image, they form super hot and magi...the words, the image, they form super hot and magical imagery.<br /><br />another excellent poetry on lust and nature.<br /><br />smiles.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-46434508839156070362011-12-08T10:16:31.166-05:002011-12-08T10:16:31.166-05:00Nice to see this kinda writting from you..enjoyed ...Nice to see this kinda writting from you..enjoyed it.ashokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07151604896442505084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-87826830755979734532011-12-08T07:35:11.552-05:002011-12-08T07:35:11.552-05:00Excellent tension/contrast here. Filled with imag...Excellent tension/contrast here. Filled with images. I admire the way you've packed this into the form. Excellent poetry. By the way, thanks for the recommendation to the other site. I saw it too late to qualify for this week, I believe.Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-10517852273396709942011-12-08T00:32:15.259-05:002011-12-08T00:32:15.259-05:00The image got me ... and the first line and the la...The image got me ... and the first line and the last made it beautiful.. thanks I enjoyed it so much...<br /><br /><br />Shashi<br />ॐ नमः शिवाय <br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/12/whispers-buddha-song.html<br />At Twitter @VerseEveryDayShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-15487453245397734122011-12-07T22:45:45.721-05:002011-12-07T22:45:45.721-05:00Lovely. Wonderfully sensuous. Interesting form tha...Lovely. Wonderfully sensuous. Interesting form that seems to serve this one in its symmetry. Enjoyed this!Charles Elliott/Beautyseerhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jhh_oOn5_1gnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-51358622253189004972011-12-07T19:28:40.762-05:002011-12-07T19:28:40.762-05:00Oh my gosh, that first section is amazing! This is...Oh my gosh, that first section is amazing! This is my favorite:<br /><br />"bear me down gently<br />sea bed alight with copper sand"<br /><br />And that image is breathtaking.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-23028646614100829332011-12-07T15:20:58.026-05:002011-12-07T15:20:58.026-05:00You've mastered the cameo form beautifully!You've mastered the cameo form beautifully!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-44822801019850447802011-12-07T15:19:15.364-05:002011-12-07T15:19:15.364-05:00Well! my first reading of a 'cameo' …just ...Well! my first reading of a 'cameo' …just Heavenly.<br />I like the concretism of the lines….love in the concrete.<br />great job!tinkwelbornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14163026661564191285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-74172850750026155512011-12-07T14:18:26.482-05:002011-12-07T14:18:26.482-05:00Lovely, sensual poem.
I've never heard of thi...Lovely, sensual poem.<br /><br />I've never heard of this form....lovely, though.<br /><br />Lady NyoLady Nyonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-19532803447882582592011-12-07T10:49:41.285-05:002011-12-07T10:49:41.285-05:00Loved it! Sheer Heaven! XLoved it! Sheer Heaven! XMaureen Walshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03918266743094970790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-53997783267291827892011-12-07T07:57:48.190-05:002011-12-07T07:57:48.190-05:00This was a very well executed poem :) I loved it :...This was a very well executed poem :) I loved it :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10094116226854880072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-75989365538762605982011-12-07T00:55:36.098-05:002011-12-07T00:55:36.098-05:00love the salty spray our lips...hmmmm...can feel i...love the salty spray our lips...hmmmm...can feel it.. the pic is very cool too..kissed by nature..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-41718904415995382402011-12-06T23:08:38.932-05:002011-12-06T23:08:38.932-05:00Very clever cameos. The image is quite amazing, to...Very clever cameos. The image is quite amazing, too.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-69408880071896011702011-12-06T22:04:39.476-05:002011-12-06T22:04:39.476-05:00So nice the way words and landscape parallel each ...So nice the way words and landscape parallel each other. K.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-6714013128985247642011-12-06T20:28:35.499-05:002011-12-06T20:28:35.499-05:00Amazing images, both words and photo. You know how...Amazing images, both words and photo. You know how to write intimacy with such beauty and figurative speech.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-54953961349822318762011-12-06T20:20:49.849-05:002011-12-06T20:20:49.849-05:00interesting. i've never heard of cameo form b...interesting. i've never heard of cameo form before. thanks!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-83808052914254956212011-12-06T18:56:24.678-05:002011-12-06T18:56:24.678-05:00Oh these are beautiful, Heaven. I agree about the...Oh these are beautiful, Heaven. I agree about the sensuality - the word AND the pictures. Lovely.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-19651499829993270472011-12-06T17:20:47.527-05:002011-12-06T17:20:47.527-05:00A very sensual use of the form, very well done!A very sensual use of the form, very well done!Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-30983056981609252662011-12-06T17:18:04.453-05:002011-12-06T17:18:04.453-05:00Love the lines here, lovely!Love the lines here, lovely!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-4744703344995733302011-12-06T17:16:04.795-05:002011-12-06T17:16:04.795-05:00Hot and sassy, yet oh so classy! You write of inti...Hot and sassy, yet oh so classy! You write of intimacy with such a poised pen. (One that allows me to control my blush!lol) Love the imagery woven through, and the form (a new one for me) is certainly intriguing!Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-4662726706361921072011-12-06T15:54:06.598-05:002011-12-06T15:54:06.598-05:00Phhewwwww hot hot hot! Very Nice!Phhewwwww hot hot hot! Very Nice!Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-90882238883498533972011-12-06T15:49:22.909-05:002011-12-06T15:49:22.909-05:00I can feel the longing and desire in this ~ it mad...I can feel the longing and desire in this ~ it made my mind wander to memories ~ beautifully writtenMike Sutcliffehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17306691004504818181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-52812940889105339752011-12-06T15:08:42.039-05:002011-12-06T15:08:42.039-05:00I've done that on the beach...but you find san...I've done that on the beach...but you find sand in the strangest places for days afterward!Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-80671750043602027722011-12-06T14:56:41.709-05:002011-12-06T14:56:41.709-05:00Wonderful use of words!
Loved this, Heaven.
Margi...Wonderful use of words!<br />Loved this, Heaven.<br /><br />Margie :)Margiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14433759763753850718noreply@blogger.com