tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post5099675080003400773..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: Yours, unwrappedScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger75125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-33602962461283088702013-01-16T09:43:50.312-05:002013-01-16T09:43:50.312-05:00hey FFA tomorrow is:
http://www.rattle.com/poetry...hey FFA tomorrow is:<br /><br />http://www.rattle.com/poetry/2012/12/the-resurrection-of-form-in-poetry-by-david-james/Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-8865288906494806112013-01-05T22:33:36.711-05:002013-01-05T22:33:36.711-05:00always that note of sensuality in your words here,...always that note of sensuality in your words here, Heaven!<br /><br />hope the new year is treating you well!<br /><br />♥my heart's love songshttp://myheartslovesongs.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-17308056042823754472013-01-05T00:57:05.195-05:002013-01-05T00:57:05.195-05:00really nice, I like the last two a lot. Thanksreally nice, I like the last two a lot. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-11238776260454621592013-01-04T15:29:53.978-05:002013-01-04T15:29:53.978-05:00All luscious; I especially like your last lune.All luscious; I especially like your last lune.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-58828774724610393912013-01-04T15:20:35.061-05:002013-01-04T15:20:35.061-05:00Sensuous imagery Sensuous imagery John (@bookdreamer)https://www.blogger.com/profile/11576434749272275190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-51053435856643761512013-01-04T12:59:59.317-05:002013-01-04T12:59:59.317-05:00Wow! Gorgeous stuff, Grace!Wow! Gorgeous stuff, Grace!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-82064063003097727462013-01-04T10:56:26.148-05:002013-01-04T10:56:26.148-05:00'braille my face' Grace, this is gorgeous!...'braille my face' Grace, this is gorgeous! (guess it was the favorite of many, reading the comments... heh) marvelous job, so touching!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-82245027215113514912013-01-04T10:19:44.125-05:002013-01-04T10:19:44.125-05:00..braille my face... oh Grace i like that and no w.....braille my face... oh Grace i like that and no wonder you had these so easily flowing... it shows your calibre as an expert kuer... adorable.... smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-89181932049012398392013-01-04T08:29:47.029-05:002013-01-04T08:29:47.029-05:00You're a very poetic and romantic person.You're a very poetic and romantic person.All About Love And Sexhttp://www.luv2sex.infonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-88981440741240362312013-01-04T06:33:23.644-05:002013-01-04T06:33:23.644-05:00A great two-header this. No preference, though.A great two-header this. No preference, though.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-28064175509053102382013-01-04T05:58:20.597-05:002013-01-04T05:58:20.597-05:00let's hear it for the lune form...great emphas...let's hear it for the lune form...great emphasis..Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-45695584451962597342013-01-04T02:21:39.626-05:002013-01-04T02:21:39.626-05:00sensual beauty...i love it! sensual beauty...i love it! Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-1702758927466578202013-01-04T01:43:58.918-05:002013-01-04T01:43:58.918-05:00InterestingInterestingSabio Lantzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12963476276106907984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-81008819526123089922013-01-03T23:25:32.741-05:002013-01-03T23:25:32.741-05:00O. Braille me! I too am blind!
(I had forgot the...O. Braille me! I too am blind!<br />(I had forgot the rest and had to re-read to discover the perfect description of openness to love of other, of self. This/these are my new favorites.) Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-73170711605521314662013-01-03T22:05:43.901-05:002013-01-03T22:05:43.901-05:00Lovely workLovely workmarousiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12925164210601407878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-56202086046342668702013-01-03T21:02:41.307-05:002013-01-03T21:02:41.307-05:00I love the interaction between the couple...the se...I love the interaction between the couple...the sensuous exploration and passion. Really beautiful, Grace.Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-31981031044685775872013-01-03T20:54:31.356-05:002013-01-03T20:54:31.356-05:00Sensuous and sensitive, I really love this, "...Sensuous and sensitive, I really love this, "i come with awe" !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-1038122151871533762013-01-03T20:16:37.111-05:002013-01-03T20:16:37.111-05:00I imagine the pairing of these two as a dialogue b...I imagine the pairing of these two as a dialogue between a man and a woman, the first set (couplets) spoken by one and the second set (lunes) spoken by the other. Imagined thus, they reflect each other's breadth and depth of passion. Beautiful.Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-69176737284243325612013-01-03T20:03:39.791-05:002013-01-03T20:03:39.791-05:00Holy cats, Grace! I hadn't gotten to you on th...Holy cats, Grace! I hadn't gotten to you on the list from yesterday's Real Toads prompt yet. But wow, that was fantastic! I seriously love it. Whew.<br /><br />And this one gave me the best kind of shivers:<br /><br />"braille my face<br />with your candle lit fingers -<br />slowly, i melt"jasmine calyxhttp://jasminecalyx.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-75600681597703682152013-01-03T19:44:23.405-05:002013-01-03T19:44:23.405-05:00Yours, unwrapped: awkward kisses and uninhibited ...Yours, unwrapped: awkward kisses and uninhibited words can definitely unravel. lovely.<br /><br />Lune #1: love the comparison of kisses falling softly like snowflakes.<br /><br />Lune #2: there is definitely something very seductive about the line "braille my face."<br />RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-60088685714996536862013-01-03T19:42:33.459-05:002013-01-03T19:42:33.459-05:00I am leaning how to use punctuation from you K ~ ...I am leaning how to use punctuation from you K ~ Thanks for the comments and inputs ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-32502565054675341922013-01-03T19:40:07.859-05:002013-01-03T19:40:07.859-05:00Thanks Di ~ I am jealous of your beach vacation ~...Thanks Di ~ I am jealous of your beach vacation ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-85652024051019563392013-01-03T19:36:07.724-05:002013-01-03T19:36:07.724-05:00You know I didn't really understand what you w...You know I didn't really understand what you were doing earlier as I had not seen the Lune thing - yours work very well. The falling snowflakes brailling my face is so great. I've been pushing punctuation all day, but you may think of it, as the first time I read through I was thinking of the warm finger tips brailling the face and I got something from that, in the sense of the touch etc., and reading your face, but the snowflakes is such a perfect image that you might want a little comma or semi-colon there to separate the two images - especially since there's the divided stanza. (Just a suggestion from a punctuation freak.) I really love that image though and I confess to misreading it the first time. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-32255552634362860212013-01-03T19:14:23.845-05:002013-01-03T19:14:23.845-05:00That last stanza is pure magic...finishes off a wo...That last stanza is pure magic...finishes off a wonderful piece. Just loved it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-81896813989994277742013-01-03T18:31:45.838-05:002013-01-03T18:31:45.838-05:00Thank you Nico ~Thank you Nico ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.com