tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post4539392524501177960..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: Slipping awayScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger41125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-40195908611945654232012-02-22T18:41:07.968-05:002012-02-22T18:41:07.968-05:00Simply BeautifulSimply BeautifulAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-28054517360129203162011-11-13T00:25:28.497-05:002011-11-13T00:25:28.497-05:00There is a melancholy mood to this scenario. The t...There is a melancholy mood to this scenario. The terse nature of your style allows the reader's mind to fill in the picture from their own perspective too.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-41558560007759416202011-11-04T19:25:47.330-04:002011-11-04T19:25:47.330-04:00Thanks Ethan...I appreciate your kind words ~Thanks Ethan...I appreciate your kind words ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-14927361166211398462011-11-04T00:38:17.042-04:002011-11-04T00:38:17.042-04:00I don't know if you'll find this flatterin...I don't know if you'll find this flattering, sweet, or silly; but the fact remains that I've nominated you as among my favorite "Versatile Bloggers" - details of the whole thing can be found on http://bastardconfessions.blogspot.com/2011/11/versatile-blogger-award.html - Oh, also I reproduced excerpts of some of my favorite posts. If, for any reason, you would like anything I wrote about you taken down don't hesitate to let me know.Ethan Lamberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18005642810763475029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-37077066187920388432011-10-25T20:43:36.654-04:002011-10-25T20:43:36.654-04:00I read through this a few times before I could put...I read through this a few times before I could put a finger on how it made me feel. It was sad, yes, that he couldn't recognize her after time had changed her, and she wasn't "it" anymore. But she also didn't try and pretend she was still the girl he met at the ball so many years ago... she didn't plead, or produce the other shoe as proof. She just accepted that she was no longer what he was looking for anymore.<br /><br />It's very sad, but those are the saddest stories in the end, aren't they? The great romances that can't handle the inevitable change that comes with time? It almost made me feel hopeful... as if she was of strong enough character to hold out for someone who wanted her for who she was becoming, not who she was. The soot implies that she may have a long wait yet, but her hope (or my imagining of it) makes me feel a little optimistic somehow.Ethan Lamberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18005642810763475029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-4872766968450093662011-10-05T08:30:15.242-04:002011-10-05T08:30:15.242-04:00oh so sad is life sometimesoh so sad is life sometimesAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05325695409811633799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-69159238694520563952011-09-27T10:32:20.237-04:002011-09-27T10:32:20.237-04:00You know, I just noticed this morning that my righ...You know, I just noticed this morning that my right shoe was tighter than my left one. It makes me think that perhaps I'm not the one either :)The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-83253389224507578352011-09-27T02:55:39.403-04:002011-09-27T02:55:39.403-04:00Excellent, perfect.Excellent, perfect.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-30725995733094914392011-09-25T17:50:00.742-04:002011-09-25T17:50:00.742-04:00His loss. He shouldn't have waited so long.His loss. He shouldn't have waited so long.barbarahttp://briarcat.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-60021314196395984012011-09-24T13:59:46.384-04:002011-09-24T13:59:46.384-04:00lovly words...nice crafted lines!lovly words...nice crafted lines!Kalyanhttp://icetrail.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-43905344289588592752011-09-24T13:11:54.711-04:002011-09-24T13:11:54.711-04:00nice play here on "aschenputtel" how we ...nice play here on "aschenputtel" how we call her in germany...when the shoes don't fit...one can always walk barefoot...with or without prince..smilesClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-29633114040122915932011-09-24T09:46:05.146-04:002011-09-24T09:46:05.146-04:00The rain completes the gloomy ending..
divisiveThe rain completes the gloomy ending..<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2011/09/divisive.html" rel="nofollow">divisive</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-34752281212644827492011-09-24T05:14:24.424-04:002011-09-24T05:14:24.424-04:00Rather sad. The imagery of rain falling compliment...Rather sad. The imagery of rain falling compliments the gloom of not being 'the one'.madhumakhihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09624377766663002237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-38397482787568294302011-09-23T19:56:12.741-04:002011-09-23T19:56:12.741-04:00Excellent write!
She's not the one. The last...Excellent write!<br /><br /> She's not the one. The last few lines denote depression of sorts. No details but you are left with that hint. This is such fresh angle on that old tale. And I don't think I like this prince very much, especially when he referred to what he is looking for as "it".Ravenblackhttp://theotherdayplace.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-78003781232164445122011-09-23T17:03:31.330-04:002011-09-23T17:03:31.330-04:00Great retelling of the fairytale--and that would b...Great retelling of the fairytale--and that would be my luck, too.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-33953034757907425492011-09-23T14:48:39.529-04:002011-09-23T14:48:39.529-04:00reminds me of Cindarella :)reminds me of Cindarella :)voidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16651972747339353711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-11804705663487976182011-09-23T14:32:25.133-04:002011-09-23T14:32:25.133-04:00there is a deep pain hidden in this poem. a fairy ...there is a deep pain hidden in this poem. a fairy tale with a twist and different viewpoint. cinderella meets beauty and the beast. awesome work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-72793192214481779052011-09-23T13:37:58.909-04:002011-09-23T13:37:58.909-04:00Sometimes the shoe just does not fit...better to f...Sometimes the shoe just does not fit...better to figure that out before a long walk in the park. Wonderful writing Heaven. :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-89030508756232927632011-09-23T12:56:25.494-04:002011-09-23T12:56:25.494-04:00Great twist to the tale! Really cool, Heaven.Great twist to the tale! Really cool, Heaven.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-75649899935617715342011-09-23T12:25:23.632-04:002011-09-23T12:25:23.632-04:00I like the twist of your fairytale. Rain does cau...I like the twist of your fairytale. Rain does cause me to be reflective. It's raining right now.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-17983073718223149232011-09-23T11:47:55.186-04:002011-09-23T11:47:55.186-04:00Very, very nice. Full of vivid imagery, a lovely w...Very, very nice. Full of vivid imagery, a lovely write and even better, read.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-30846057095437025042011-09-23T11:07:21.599-04:002011-09-23T11:07:21.599-04:00Some day her prince will come. Guess she got her w...Some day her prince will come. Guess she got her wish.Monkey Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-47676900217495183152011-09-23T10:18:07.329-04:002011-09-23T10:18:07.329-04:00Another one who's not Cinderella, eh? Nice 55...Another one who's not Cinderella, eh? Nice 55 tale.Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-90995436681425300952011-09-23T08:45:29.963-04:002011-09-23T08:45:29.963-04:00The choices we make! thanks-The choices we make! thanks-izzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-43314458542596581652011-09-23T08:44:16.471-04:002011-09-23T08:44:16.471-04:00sad and haunting~sad and haunting~Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.com