tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post4426892208448212604..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: color of last night's moon Scarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger57125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-24577800778613608602013-08-25T18:59:24.476-04:002013-08-25T18:59:24.476-04:00I have no words. You took my breath away with thi...I have no words. You took my breath away with this one! Well done!!<br /><br />I hope you had a beautiful weekend!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-21663922012544566462013-08-24T09:09:13.317-04:002013-08-24T09:09:13.317-04:00beautiful. I like the way you've shaped it and...beautiful. I like the way you've shaped it and kept it moving with a hookaspiritofsimplicityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14870339828098281415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-26417325505463131382013-08-23T23:40:33.962-04:002013-08-23T23:40:33.962-04:00Great poem with a great shape. I loved his eyes ha...Great poem with a great shape. I loved his eyes having the color of sadness equal to her own.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-1150796130134366382013-08-23T23:18:54.831-04:002013-08-23T23:18:54.831-04:00There is mystery and suspense in this piece, Grace...There is mystery and suspense in this piece, Grace. I h ope there is a happy ending for them. :-) And yes, I admire the shape of your poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-25678605826052885402013-08-23T22:35:20.671-04:002013-08-23T22:35:20.671-04:00I echo everyones comments - loved the shape and po...I echo everyones comments - loved the shape and poem - and such a great title! KAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-24514500571413399922013-08-23T20:17:33.491-04:002013-08-23T20:17:33.491-04:00nice imagery & I love the formatnice imagery & I love the formatAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-44421899844924569532013-08-23T19:23:07.682-04:002013-08-23T19:23:07.682-04:00This is like a myth or old ballad--lots of them wh...This is like a myth or old ballad--lots of them where the lover's face is obscured..but of course, she has to see...this is very tranquil though, full of serenity.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-51356810436754333142013-08-23T15:30:09.497-04:002013-08-23T15:30:09.497-04:00Beautiful! I love how you coupled the 55 word limi...Beautiful! I love how you coupled the 55 word limit with shape poetry. :) Peace, LindaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-18540742891412293902013-08-23T15:06:18.475-04:002013-08-23T15:06:18.475-04:00The photo with the lovely writing is just such a p...The photo with the lovely writing is just such a perfect combination, adore this.Outcasthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03400755239612162157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-13686193214827049432013-08-23T13:43:42.590-04:002013-08-23T13:43:42.590-04:00Nice play with colors, light, form...read couple t...Nice play with colors, light, form...read couple times :)humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-72152169553732456562013-08-23T12:41:12.773-04:002013-08-23T12:41:12.773-04:00What a beautiful, dramatic piece!What a beautiful, dramatic piece!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-80947192480006137372013-08-23T11:57:36.391-04:002013-08-23T11:57:36.391-04:00gI so much enjoy your writing Grace. This one is...gI so much enjoy your writing Grace. This one is full of yearning, a sad love but beautiful. Kepp doing what you're doing. You excel. Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-54494013668612184712013-08-23T11:19:35.299-04:002013-08-23T11:19:35.299-04:00Enthralled with your writing!Enthralled with your writing!Mademoiselle Modellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15451207941086886046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-65690859188168981892013-08-23T11:16:01.319-04:002013-08-23T11:16:01.319-04:00Beauty, as they say, is in the eye of the one beho...Beauty, as they say, is in the eye of the one beholding no matter the color of depth of sadness. This falls into the spectrum, Grace. Thank you for this!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13980610386630622755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-67520809845754953632013-08-23T11:10:05.513-04:002013-08-23T11:10:05.513-04:00Beautiful, poignan, perfect.Beautiful, poignan, perfect.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-40211420200386531092013-08-23T10:48:56.315-04:002013-08-23T10:48:56.315-04:00phew - this took my breath away! Lovely write.phew - this took my breath away! Lovely write.Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-6646124402215258502013-08-23T10:33:43.602-04:002013-08-23T10:33:43.602-04:00Beautifully penned, Grace. The last line is fantas...Beautifully penned, Grace. The last line is fantastic!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-27254528835489516632013-08-23T09:57:37.589-04:002013-08-23T09:57:37.589-04:00...Grace, both your words & the photo are eleg......Grace, both your words & the photo are elegant in so many ways... and yet so sad... i loved your title here... there's really something about the moon & the night & the stars that always bring sadness.... mesmerizing write... smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-31960780699417695022013-08-23T09:07:51.589-04:002013-08-23T09:07:51.589-04:00I liked the emotional links between
the character...I liked the emotional links between <br />the characters...soulful indeed.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-76123380542834444762013-08-23T08:38:56.313-04:002013-08-23T08:38:56.313-04:00So delicate and beautiful and sad. Loved it, Heave...So delicate and beautiful and sad. Loved it, Heaven.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-22246580343981259042013-08-23T07:07:49.572-04:002013-08-23T07:07:49.572-04:00you have mirrored the grief here so well. Nothing ...you have mirrored the grief here so well. Nothing else soothes than the moon hoping for some light there perhaps!TCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-9771719635048914852013-08-23T06:31:26.181-04:002013-08-23T06:31:26.181-04:00I wanted to write about the full moon outside my w...I wanted to write about the full moon outside my window ~ Thanks for the visit ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-57356066454899690032013-08-23T05:48:55.630-04:002013-08-23T05:48:55.630-04:00Life and soul exists where we least expect it! AN...Life and soul exists where we least expect it! ANd the moon, could it truly be the mirror, te biggest of them all?Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-6160512071203803772013-08-23T05:08:46.651-04:002013-08-23T05:08:46.651-04:00Wow...this was amazing! The tension of the emotio...Wow...this was amazing! The tension of the emotion and the shape worked perfectly together.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-1471143336431332992013-08-23T04:28:31.173-04:002013-08-23T04:28:31.173-04:00Melancholy perfection in word and form - really th...Melancholy perfection in word and form - really there's nothing more I can say.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com