tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post3114061176645602740..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: To stayScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger56125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-59241526720696203432012-09-25T18:14:10.244-04:002012-09-25T18:14:10.244-04:00I feel the influence of Neruda in this...just exqu...I feel the influence of Neruda in this...just exquisite!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-90596778718557856132012-09-07T19:46:51.663-04:002012-09-07T19:46:51.663-04:00Sensuality!Sensuality!Adura Ojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10787703060107491771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-2995829070933636082012-09-06T23:56:51.097-04:002012-09-06T23:56:51.097-04:00I'd have to say this is one of my favorite of ...I'd have to say this is one of my favorite of yours...and I love Neruda's poetry as well.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2012/09/06/canvas-2/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-57983620129505434622012-09-06T22:41:39.411-04:002012-09-06T22:41:39.411-04:00"i have come as one who cries at every moonri..."i have come as one who cries at every moonrise" when I read this line, I thought immediately of Neruda, A deeply inspiring poet. This is a beautiful poemAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-59659464249953998312012-09-05T20:25:44.072-04:002012-09-05T20:25:44.072-04:00Lovely, Heaven! So many beautiful words and I feel...Lovely, Heaven! So many beautiful words and I feel the wonderful sinking feeling of surrender :-) Thank you!! <br />-EvaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-2555588301996281472012-09-05T15:24:42.500-04:002012-09-05T15:24:42.500-04:00Staying is goood...
Anna :o]Staying is goood...<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-37375723295300416402012-09-05T14:52:59.312-04:002012-09-05T14:52:59.312-04:00All the words have been said, I can only repeat th...All the words have been said, I can only repeat that this is a very special poem. Of all the lines, this one resonates the most with me "even your shadows comfort me"<br />Elleceehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07049386448865741626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-65701529340830907412012-09-05T13:47:34.208-04:002012-09-05T13:47:34.208-04:00I enjoy Neruda and am happy to read how he inspire...I enjoy Neruda and am happy to read how he inspires your work. Awesome!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-37127253918337872592012-09-05T11:31:26.160-04:002012-09-05T11:31:26.160-04:00I know Pablo Neruda influences some of what you wr...I know Pablo Neruda influences some of what you write. But that's because you already have a poet's soul, and your love poems connect with something familiar in all our hearts.<br /><br />I really like this one. It is full of feeling.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-56257937315237866722012-09-05T08:35:30.277-04:002012-09-05T08:35:30.277-04:00What a beautiful story tinged with a hint of sadne...What a beautiful story tinged with a hint of sadness ~ I could feel the loss so desperate to be reprievedMike Sutcliffehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17306691004504818181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-41594666928259961062012-09-05T07:40:55.574-04:002012-09-05T07:40:55.574-04:00Has the wonderful urgency and painful feeling of r...Has the wonderful urgency and painful feeling of reconciliation. K.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-3825788597082163732012-09-05T07:39:12.895-04:002012-09-05T07:39:12.895-04:00Grace,
Loved the wonderful music and rhythm of thi...Grace,<br />Loved the wonderful music and rhythm of this...the metaphor of the lemon is exquisite, and the ending held such finality. Excellent piece.Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-62951169156696725842012-09-05T03:05:05.554-04:002012-09-05T03:05:05.554-04:00This is beautiful & written in the spirit of a...This is beautiful & written in the spirit of a Neruda Poem...evocative & lovely :)Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216734722467789412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-44341769182827282152012-09-04T23:40:22.130-04:002012-09-04T23:40:22.130-04:00Good for her! Stay on! There are lots to share. Ni...Good for her! Stay on! There are lots to share. Nicely Heaven!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-79766752293162092182012-09-04T23:19:37.936-04:002012-09-04T23:19:37.936-04:00inspiring this is. there is something so courageo...inspiring this is. there is something so courageous about staying.just a girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16826785377760697389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-77799478053654764552012-09-04T22:56:12.875-04:002012-09-04T22:56:12.875-04:00One icon on my desktop is a link to writings of Ne...One icon on my desktop is a link to writings of Neruda.<br />...and this, your writing is of countless numbers of peeps. <br />Our decisions--some poor ones--live with us forever. <br /><br />We can begin anew, very day is a new one. Knock, knock!<br /><br />PEACE, Grace!<br />Steve E steveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04010875412308487592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-87967610929876397612012-09-04T22:08:25.923-04:002012-09-04T22:08:25.923-04:00Wow! this was phenomenal Grace--loved that"fr...Wow! this was phenomenal Grace--loved that"fraction of a lemon leaf" and the ending--really fine writing :-)Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-90802485120958653262012-09-04T20:52:04.014-04:002012-09-04T20:52:04.014-04:00I love this, Grace. I'm pretty fond of Neruda ...I love this, Grace. I'm pretty fond of Neruda also, he has such a subtle way of shoveling out emotion. Love the ending and the longing in the comfort of a shadow. Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-82872506864327305852012-09-04T20:28:37.777-04:002012-09-04T20:28:37.777-04:00"a fraction of lemon leaf"
and also
&quo..."a fraction of lemon leaf"<br />and also<br />"arching feet in foamy sands"<br />are both such satisfying sentences...if that makes sense.Evelynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03773200135330787188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-956633367740809392012-09-04T20:14:09.577-04:002012-09-04T20:14:09.577-04:00So endearing, love the ending.So endearing, love the ending.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-71709232280360664962012-09-04T18:44:24.241-04:002012-09-04T18:44:24.241-04:00This is a sad song indeed, being a hopeless romant...This is a sad song indeed, being a hopeless romantic and someone who has a hard time letting go (damn those interminable voices) this hits a nerve for me. Sometimes wish I was the strong and independent one, but the harder I try, the worse I get. I guess I am who I am....maybe its time to embrace that. great job grace...wonderful writing.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-69099432380913458252012-09-04T17:43:19.779-04:002012-09-04T17:43:19.779-04:00absence makes the heart grow fonder.... I don'...absence makes the heart grow fonder.... I don't know who said that, but it's so true. And the opposite is..... so ... opposite! I mean we need that break every once in a while, we have to break that routine, that same-ole same-ole..... Get out, take a walk on the beach, come back later and knock on the door again.... Or in my world take separate vacations! LOL! It does a world of wonders... But in the very least you just captured life in it's raw essence here, dear Heaven... good poetry!John Allen Richterhttp://johnallenrichter.wordpress.com/2012/08/24/edge-of-unspoken-dream/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-55036131893234930812012-09-04T17:21:47.355-04:002012-09-04T17:21:47.355-04:00This is so beautiful...... I loved it! :DThis is so beautiful...... I loved it! :Dhjdbedfbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02789484033106868207noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-8112664287259449752012-09-04T17:21:40.960-04:002012-09-04T17:21:40.960-04:00Well, written answer. Like the yearning in your wo...Well, written answer. Like the yearning in your words. well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-39278977559854197082012-09-04T17:20:04.255-04:002012-09-04T17:20:04.255-04:00I really liked this piece, well writtenI really liked this piece, well writtenKimolisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.com