tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post303719121112812789..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: Summer memoriesScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger49125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-4051591409753376472012-07-15T18:56:56.220-04:002012-07-15T18:56:56.220-04:00Mmm.... Dreamy
We all should have such a place wai...Mmm.... Dreamy<br />We all should have such a place waiting for us<br />And memories to guide us<br />RickFar Beyond The Ridgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05854741339081490896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-24810012405086941842012-07-12T14:14:22.434-04:002012-07-12T14:14:22.434-04:00This is beautiful - and very dense.
Ate it like a ...This is beautiful - and very dense.<br />Ate it like a mango.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-28204584790425362362012-07-12T00:59:35.756-04:002012-07-12T00:59:35.756-04:00You crawled inside and left these words to smolder...You crawled inside and left these words to smolder in there intensity sensual and enjoyableChris Lawrencehttp://velvetmedia.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-71023793441921934902012-07-11T23:00:12.955-04:002012-07-11T23:00:12.955-04:00Ah, I feel like I've intruded on a scene that&...Ah, I feel like I've intruded on a scene that's so intensely personal, meant only for a secret exchange.Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-4852657281640385892012-07-11T18:22:49.173-04:002012-07-11T18:22:49.173-04:00Fun loving memories and romantic words. This is a ...Fun loving memories and romantic words. This is a beautiful poem!Dana Dampierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00711570817935555856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-6685206777070036092012-07-11T13:57:28.116-04:002012-07-11T13:57:28.116-04:00A dreamy piece...moving and fully romantic. Nicel...A dreamy piece...moving and fully romantic. Nicely done.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-21625307213853459942012-07-11T13:10:48.613-04:002012-07-11T13:10:48.613-04:00Your love poems are so personal, so full of your o...Your love poems are so personal, so full of your own imagery and those images give rise to your own poetic symbols. The ocean, the palms, the fruit, and the colors enhance and explore the mysteries and give depth and wonder to your subject. Very well explored indeed!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-19831010284339033942012-07-11T10:19:53.098-04:002012-07-11T10:19:53.098-04:00This is such a delicate piece. I love that the mem...This is such a delicate piece. I love that the memory is full of shape and scent and texture. Luscious and full of hope.Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-6027071614068126362012-07-11T07:07:00.643-04:002012-07-11T07:07:00.643-04:00Beautiful & sensuous poetry...*sigh* Lovely :)...Beautiful & sensuous poetry...*sigh* Lovely :)Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216734722467789412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-20369230633042220132012-07-11T06:53:29.609-04:002012-07-11T06:53:29.609-04:00Evocative and gently sensuous. Life affirming at t...Evocative and gently sensuous. Life affirming at the end too. Loved it!James Rainsfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12981399551842327691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-9595271685026552412012-07-11T02:06:31.013-04:002012-07-11T02:06:31.013-04:00Ahh we both have love on our minds... enjoyed te r...Ahh we both have love on our minds... enjoyed te read :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17957913294364310380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-45516530265108098952012-07-11T02:00:31.603-04:002012-07-11T02:00:31.603-04:00A luscious and sensual memory...like eating a piec...A luscious and sensual memory...like eating a piece of fruit...and wanting another...yet nothing left but the memory...sweeter almost than the reality. Lovely write!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-66029144866447515732012-07-10T23:09:49.386-04:002012-07-10T23:09:49.386-04:00Wading into the expectation and memories at once -...Wading into the expectation and memories at once - well=conveyed. k.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-84847147874844459392012-07-10T22:07:38.979-04:002012-07-10T22:07:38.979-04:00I love the sense of creeping reality in this, esp...I love the sense of creeping reality in this, especially since it exceeds nostalgic expectations in the end. Good one, Grace.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-80598210198741224442012-07-10T21:58:45.171-04:002012-07-10T21:58:45.171-04:00this really drew me in... and that ending, love th...this really drew me in... and that ending, love the way it opens it all back up, the past, the present, becoming the future.mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-52281292444021365012012-07-10T21:11:54.698-04:002012-07-10T21:11:54.698-04:00A beautiful write from start to finish. The feel o...A beautiful write from start to finish. The feel of it carries the reader along. Very nice!Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/07/10/we-could-get-air-2/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-31635236219553870582012-07-10T20:27:20.191-04:002012-07-10T20:27:20.191-04:00"where laughter pelted the guavas and star ap..."where laughter pelted the guavas and star apples" LOVE this... a lovely start for another Heaven-ly poem!Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-63278338549602566962012-07-10T20:07:42.805-04:002012-07-10T20:07:42.805-04:00Not only did you bring me to my favorite place, th...Not only did you bring me to my favorite place, the beach, but with the journey you brought hope. As always, thank you Heaven!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-14421200595173493932012-07-10T19:50:43.503-04:002012-07-10T19:50:43.503-04:00Lulling as the sea. Loved this line: "where l...Lulling as the sea. Loved this line: "where laughter pelted the guavas and star apples"<br /><br />~Shawnaflipside recordshttp://flipsiderecords.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-73948437934773068842012-07-10T19:48:15.335-04:002012-07-10T19:48:15.335-04:00Always look forward to reading your work now...not...Always look forward to reading your work now...not to mention the "feelthy peectures" as a bonus!Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-4606963280649986012012-07-10T18:44:38.057-04:002012-07-10T18:44:38.057-04:00Oh hell yeah...I remember...lol. This has so many ...Oh hell yeah...I remember...lol. This has so many romantic visuals, it left me a little addled. That last stanza is a powerhouse. Heavy sigh....I am ready for a romantic vacation again.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-73967068118491583452012-07-10T18:06:39.761-04:002012-07-10T18:06:39.761-04:00thanks for sharing your summer memories with us......thanks for sharing your summer memories with us...love the apples and frogs..and road trip do certainly have their own kind of magic as well..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-72063304964064224172012-07-10T17:38:38.732-04:002012-07-10T17:38:38.732-04:00Nostalgia, but not too much, sadness, but not too ...Nostalgia, but not too much, sadness, but not too much, lovely images and phrases, plenty, and poem, beautiful. Enjoyed this vignette much, Heaven.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-67969628444558616102012-07-10T15:44:52.048-04:002012-07-10T15:44:52.048-04:00I sigh after reading this. Memories are good, or ...I sigh after reading this. Memories are good, or not, and life continues within nothing at times. Yet, love can live on and cradle the relationship. I love how you infuse such love and romance into your writing.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-43184954929920379632012-07-10T15:39:04.538-04:002012-07-10T15:39:04.538-04:00I am glad that memories are a large part of the su...I am glad that memories are a large part of the sum of my life...because likely as not, I remember the good, and have <br />somehow lost or forgotten the bad (after making amends and <br />changing, that is). <br /><br />Much of life must have been spectacular...<br />because it has brought me/us to this place<br />of continuous learning, doing, being, loving<br />LIVING!<br /><br />Thanks for allowing me these thoughts to write here.<br />HEAVEN! PEACE!<br />Stevesteveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04010875412308487592noreply@blogger.com