tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post2873538656711119524..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: Sand-washed afternoonScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger46125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-3361509007976723102012-07-06T17:24:18.527-04:002012-07-06T17:24:18.527-04:00I have a weakness for fruit and poetry with color ...I have a weakness for fruit and poetry with color interwoven--so clearly this one makes me happy, happy. Beautiful.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-49773204731525701042012-07-06T00:33:00.414-04:002012-07-06T00:33:00.414-04:00I truly like this:
"sea-braced memories and...I truly like this: <br />"sea-braced memories and sand-washed poems"<br /><br />Happy Canada Day!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-18405477489064717832012-07-05T21:58:09.429-04:002012-07-05T21:58:09.429-04:00To everyone ~ Thanks for the lovely compliments a...To everyone ~ Thanks for the lovely compliments and visits ~ I appreciate them ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-77020623496987933592012-07-05T10:29:01.642-04:002012-07-05T10:29:01.642-04:00This is delicious! What a beautiful day, luscious ...This is delicious! What a beautiful day, luscious but sweet. I love the mix of what is distant and touchable. A pleasure to read. :)Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-14493690457033416172012-07-04T21:54:05.344-04:002012-07-04T21:54:05.344-04:00having grown up along the texas coast, i esp reall...having grown up along the texas coast, i esp really liked this<br /><br />esp liked,<br /><br />"your kisses lingered in the afternoon empty of expectations"<br /><br />now that's satisfaction ;-) very nice, thanks heaven ;-)adanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00710750989853277203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-26345430862161910612012-07-04T20:32:29.063-04:002012-07-04T20:32:29.063-04:00Luscious, sensual account of love in the summer......Luscious, sensual account of love in the summer...sea and sand...well crafted, lovely!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-35891022003533415952012-07-04T19:28:29.261-04:002012-07-04T19:28:29.261-04:00Oooh! Yummy as ever.Oooh! Yummy as ever.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-89107721455251348162012-07-04T14:44:56.239-04:002012-07-04T14:44:56.239-04:00You took me to the sea ...made my mouth water with...You took me to the sea ...made my mouth water with the descriptionsmofnthe fruit....and made me feel some long needed sunshine on the back of my neck (even though it's been aiming straight here for what feels like months)....you have such a way with this subject...I could never do it like this....v well done as alwaysAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-53744370923510553912012-07-04T10:02:00.583-04:002012-07-04T10:02:00.583-04:00Fruit poetry salad on the beach . . . delicious. ...Fruit poetry salad on the beach . . . delicious. I'm not a beach person (turns me into a tomato), but this sounds so blissful and a bit melancholy too. Thanks for stopping for a cup at my place.Tawnya Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16192389666581761739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-40863956477506822142012-07-04T09:41:43.935-04:002012-07-04T09:41:43.935-04:00In answer to above 'will some rain do from (UK...In answer to above 'will some rain do from (UK) - as we coud do with the sun - thankyou Heaven for sharing it with me - forgotten what it's like theose sun drenched days - and what passion you painte here the adoration - so so sensual - and I loved it - hugs Liblibithinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02804271915695515140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-1042105991326860482012-07-04T08:11:09.694-04:002012-07-04T08:11:09.694-04:00sister Heaven, send me some snow washed afternoon,...sister Heaven, send me some snow washed afternoon, not the sun washed, it's been 117F here for a whole week :)DEZMONDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14127166104359407763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-86989261512553945832012-07-04T07:08:19.261-04:002012-07-04T07:08:19.261-04:00Beautiful! This is so vivid, I could almost smell ...Beautiful! This is so vivid, I could almost smell the watermelon, chicken, and sea. Very nice write!Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/07/03/buttons-out-2/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-16606507500013321732012-07-03T21:54:38.931-04:002012-07-03T21:54:38.931-04:00Love making is like a vacation in poetry. Fruit is...Love making is like a vacation in poetry. Fruit is so sensual!colleenhttp://looseleafnotes.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-26604366911681739542012-07-03T21:29:38.908-04:002012-07-03T21:29:38.908-04:00Beautiful images sensuously depicted for the young...Beautiful images sensuously depicted for the young at heart. Great verse Heaven! Must have been a wonderful holiday!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-22660889129495298002012-07-03T20:10:07.035-04:002012-07-03T20:10:07.035-04:00You never fail to deliver. It is always worth the...You never fail to deliver. It is always worth the read. The heat and truth, the pain with the gain. Great lines as well. Truly smooth.henry clemmonshttp://henryclemmons.wordpress.com/2012/07/03/tween/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-53037094648410024092012-07-03T20:00:03.117-04:002012-07-03T20:00:03.117-04:00Lovely images, Grace. We both had lemon yellow on ...Lovely images, Grace. We both had lemon yellow on our mind :) Love this...i collected the smooth stones, pebbled grey and warm corals, <br />into an endless necklace, i twined them, <br /><br />sea-braced memories and sand-washed poems <br /><br />:)ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-2047310124707933432012-07-03T19:06:34.446-04:002012-07-03T19:06:34.446-04:00Great picture, and sensations--the beginning descr...Great picture, and sensations--the beginning descriptions had my mouth watering. Another fine work.Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-62957092463520720272012-07-03T18:48:18.540-04:002012-07-03T18:48:18.540-04:00so many textures, the sand, the paper, the waterme...so many textures, the sand, the paper, the watermelon...<br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2012/07/03/sonnet-41/" rel="nofollow">sonnet 41</a>zongrikhttp://zongrik.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-61377397513004423202012-07-03T17:27:22.897-04:002012-07-03T17:27:22.897-04:00I just love so much your last three lines, Heaven!...I just love so much your last three lines, Heaven!! Really beautiful writing!!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-24977824961109271962012-07-03T17:11:14.482-04:002012-07-03T17:11:14.482-04:00I especially love the line about the sand under yo...I especially love the line about the sand under your feet. Great word choice and description throughout.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-50787345824996703972012-07-03T16:55:59.900-04:002012-07-03T16:55:59.900-04:00'how soft and yielding
beach sands are under ...'how soft and yielding <br />beach sands are under my paper-paled feet'.....wow..these lines and your poem as a whole are absolutely captivating, filled with imagery to die for..thank you for sharing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-15737855969620079222012-07-03T16:36:46.625-04:002012-07-03T16:36:46.625-04:00ah nice..sounds like you had a great day at the be...ah nice..sounds like you had a great day at the beach celebrating..love all the images..esp. the untamed grass, sand dunes falling into bamboo mats.. sounds just relaxing..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-61911253165188478132012-07-03T16:06:39.130-04:002012-07-03T16:06:39.130-04:00Another beautiful post. Keep em coming and get you...Another beautiful post. Keep em coming and get your collection in a book, Heaven:)<br /><br />Adura Ojo xAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-8428352872856315052012-07-03T11:31:53.169-04:002012-07-03T11:31:53.169-04:00It sounds like you had a sensual, sexy weekend. G...It sounds like you had a sensual, sexy weekend. Glad you enjoyed. And I enjoyed reading your poem.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-14243780656688328902012-07-03T09:19:08.913-04:002012-07-03T09:19:08.913-04:00lovely choice of words...loved the "lemon sun...lovely choice of words...loved the "lemon sun"ashokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07151604896442505084noreply@blogger.com