tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post2853917399157056938..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: A mid-summer night's dreamScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger36125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-63350650711043520892012-07-02T00:02:04.882-04:002012-07-02T00:02:04.882-04:00we are all made fools of love.
The back and fort...we are all made fools of love. <br /><br />The back and forth here of emotions, thoughts reflects well al the agony one goes through... :)Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-48575674139872201122012-07-01T11:52:16.919-04:002012-07-01T11:52:16.919-04:00Really enjoyed this! You totally nailed the ether...Really enjoyed this! You totally nailed the ethereal and lessons learned too late <br />LovelySaravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-16628690097680873812012-06-30T02:20:44.919-04:002012-06-30T02:20:44.919-04:00What an interesting challenge theme. Great job!What an interesting challenge theme. Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-74965147099378643302012-06-30T00:12:43.678-04:002012-06-30T00:12:43.678-04:00very strong expressions...
every single verse was...very strong expressions... <br />every single verse was powerful... striking deep<br />love is a battlefield,<br /><br />#a sharp knife on her breast, a cut in her wrist, <br />when ardent eyes turn black and empty river<br /><br />This one's my fav :)Jyoti Mishrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01794675170127168298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-34208861712160400332012-06-29T22:49:08.384-04:002012-06-29T22:49:08.384-04:00I enjoyed this Heaven. "or maybe it was writt...I enjoyed this Heaven. "or maybe it was written in the stars<br />that she will get a blank tarot card,<br />a jester's awkward lines instead of a love letter" was my favorite part.Dark Angelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09449477369000569642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-21794669013667591062012-06-29T11:01:28.022-04:002012-06-29T11:01:28.022-04:00Wow..this is full of amazing lines and a lot of co...Wow..this is full of amazing lines and a lot of confused emotion, just as it should be. "Jesters awkward lines instead of a love letter" yeah...damn thats good.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-26118444921621983072012-06-29T07:08:35.972-04:002012-06-29T07:08:35.972-04:00always touching. always beautiful. always you.always touching. always beautiful. always you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-82080588679462353122012-06-29T01:56:41.343-04:002012-06-29T01:56:41.343-04:00a great poem with two prompts....a great poem with two prompts....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-74342223347272477092012-06-29T00:33:13.507-04:002012-06-29T00:33:13.507-04:00Another wonderful poem, your word talent always sh...Another wonderful poem, your word talent always shine..1ManViewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17896979433381268598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-8065749962133593092012-06-29T00:26:26.281-04:002012-06-29T00:26:26.281-04:00Swoon the ending was gorgeous! The blank tarot ca...Swoon the ending was gorgeous! The blank tarot card got me too...yikes! Mayhem and magic in this poem!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-3990243105476141612012-06-28T20:44:53.762-04:002012-06-28T20:44:53.762-04:00There's a lot about this I really like--the mo...There's a lot about this I really like--the mood you set, the descriptions, but my favorite line is 'ardent eyes turning black and empty river...' and the entire last two stanzas. Really enjoyed it, Heaven.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-56076912543026588722012-06-28T17:56:05.136-04:002012-06-28T17:56:05.136-04:00Oh, a wonderful write. We are, indeed, all made fo...Oh, a wonderful write. We are, indeed, all made fools of love. Shakespeare would enjoy this.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-25334815635880026902012-06-28T15:53:40.903-04:002012-06-28T15:53:40.903-04:00nice exploration of the dream, I felt this:
"...nice exploration of the dream, I felt this:<br /><br />"love is a battlefield,<br />a sharp knife on her breast, a cut in her wrist, <br />when ardent eyes turn black and empty river"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-87918525137984650222012-06-28T13:41:35.622-04:002012-06-28T13:41:35.622-04:00To throw everything to the winds for just love! Th...To throw everything to the winds for just love! The stakes are too much to gamble on. Great write Heaven!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-15811277132240789172012-06-28T13:07:57.472-04:002012-06-28T13:07:57.472-04:00well done Gwell done Gashokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07151604896442505084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-89747721926769926372012-06-28T13:06:35.603-04:002012-06-28T13:06:35.603-04:00I love this, especially "we are all made fool...I love this, especially "we are all made fools for love." Yes, indeed. Really enjoyed this.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-13996896055671670992012-06-28T12:38:49.702-04:002012-06-28T12:38:49.702-04:00I enjoyed your poem and the creative way you combi...I enjoyed your poem and the creative way you combined two prompts. <br /><br />'she didn't know love is a battlefield, a sharp knife on her breast, a cut in her wrist' ~ this line set the mood for me! <br /><br />Love Is A Battlefield one of my favorite Pat Benatar songs!!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-82340748591520750622012-06-28T11:31:39.919-04:002012-06-28T11:31:39.919-04:00The bemusement of love indeed ~ Thanks K ~The bemusement of love indeed ~ Thanks K ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-13635114898935126762012-06-28T11:30:48.159-04:002012-06-28T11:30:48.159-04:00I am glad you like the illustration because I spen...I am glad you like the illustration because I spend time searching for pictures to go with my posts ~ Thanks for the visit ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-58851615651077862752012-06-28T11:29:33.795-04:002012-06-28T11:29:33.795-04:00Thank you Karishma ~ Nice to meet you ~Thank you Karishma ~ Nice to meet you ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-50886067114227250642012-06-28T11:28:49.866-04:002012-06-28T11:28:49.866-04:00I based this on the poem by Shakespeare himself. ...I based this on the poem by Shakespeare himself. Thanks for the compliment and visit Mary ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-89728224050372323402012-06-28T11:27:46.179-04:002012-06-28T11:27:46.179-04:00Thank you for the wonderful prompt Dani ~
Happy ...Thank you for the wonderful prompt Dani ~ <br /><br />Happy day to you as well ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-34272077337844998622012-06-28T11:26:59.112-04:002012-06-28T11:26:59.112-04:00Thank you for the visit and support Brian ~Thank you for the visit and support Brian ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-41151398255386503012012-06-28T11:24:05.532-04:002012-06-28T11:24:05.532-04:00To everyone ~ Thanks for the lovely words and vis...To everyone ~ Thanks for the lovely words and visit ~<br /><br />I appreciate them ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-84712513157989955952012-06-28T11:22:54.764-04:002012-06-28T11:22:54.764-04:00Thank you Kerry ~ I admit that I had to read the...Thank you Kerry ~ I admit that I had to read the synopsis of the poem so I have an idea of what to write ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.com