tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post2047676494958062975..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: Yesterday's dreamsScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger48125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-7275703810271065982012-07-20T11:18:49.004-04:002012-07-20T11:18:49.004-04:00"sharply descending into white oblivion"..."sharply descending into white oblivion"--I like that. Lovely stuff. Thank you.dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-44362198983625674062012-07-19T18:18:44.169-04:002012-07-19T18:18:44.169-04:00sad but beautifully penned... love it...
JJRod...sad but beautifully penned... love it...<br /><br />JJRod'zJJ Roa Rodriguezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501127870785148555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-32791176616503370542012-07-19T13:43:11.920-04:002012-07-19T13:43:11.920-04:00A beautifully sad write Heaven....i love it! :-)A beautifully sad write Heaven....i love it! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-90214226496346643312012-07-18T22:32:05.479-04:002012-07-18T22:32:05.479-04:00Delicate merging of subject and object, as though ...Delicate merging of subject and object, as though she had agreed to pose for the artist , only to realise with a start she had somehow become a part of the painting. ThanksSilent Otto https://www.blogger.com/profile/00475494332523156366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-4443338946111446692012-07-18T03:39:44.827-04:002012-07-18T03:39:44.827-04:00Sublime, Heaven!Sublime, Heaven!Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-80588350721827672772012-07-17T18:58:52.506-04:002012-07-17T18:58:52.506-04:00Will her wait be worth it? Lovely piece!Will her wait be worth it? Lovely piece!21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-84686830948950230392012-07-17T11:31:48.480-04:002012-07-17T11:31:48.480-04:00Very vivid.Very vivid.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-88515771768947064682012-07-17T03:51:26.433-04:002012-07-17T03:51:26.433-04:00Goes so well with the pic...great write....Goes so well with the pic...great write....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-91406005800571883472012-07-17T01:04:41.312-04:002012-07-17T01:04:41.312-04:00Wilting red poppy words... mmm...nice one. :)Wilting red poppy words... mmm...nice one. :)Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-64013715886809725662012-07-16T19:49:59.772-04:002012-07-16T19:49:59.772-04:00Lovely poem and appropriate picture. Good one Heav...Lovely poem and appropriate picture. Good one Heavenmamtchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01695425892749695527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-74424229111569648672012-07-16T13:09:27.069-04:002012-07-16T13:09:27.069-04:00Replete with imagery. Hope she doesn't wait t...Replete with imagery. Hope she doesn't wait <i> too </i>long.Trellissimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-55080143415255710802012-07-16T13:08:16.977-04:002012-07-16T13:08:16.977-04:00I could see those wilted red poppy words.
Really...I could see those wilted red poppy words. <br /><br />Really nice work.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-5621392512034188252012-07-16T13:07:25.201-04:002012-07-16T13:07:25.201-04:00reluctantly i wait...thanks for this.reluctantly i wait...thanks for this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-12046717337459398192012-07-16T11:45:27.618-04:002012-07-16T11:45:27.618-04:00Romantic and heart wrenching at the same time!Romantic and heart wrenching at the same time!Dana Dampierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00711570817935555856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-67293430766862301642012-07-16T07:48:56.961-04:002012-07-16T07:48:56.961-04:00Nicely put together.Nicely put together.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-34934934839914061382012-07-16T07:42:05.106-04:002012-07-16T07:42:05.106-04:00Very well crafted Heaven! Ever the sensuous take a...Very well crafted Heaven! Ever the sensuous take as always!<br /><br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-10926995676283978182012-07-16T07:38:35.313-04:002012-07-16T07:38:35.313-04:00oohh! i love this!
and i love his paintings.
you...oohh! i love this!<br /><br />and i love his paintings.<br />your words fit perfectly!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-39455249552195562572012-07-16T07:38:20.671-04:002012-07-16T07:38:20.671-04:00Some very good descriptive phrases, I especially l...Some very good descriptive phrases, I especially like the last tw lines.Little Nellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11862657943846727987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-66955107739702795942012-07-16T07:11:39.211-04:002012-07-16T07:11:39.211-04:00Lovely poetic duality...white sky/ white oblivion....Lovely poetic duality...white sky/ white oblivion..waiting.Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-88538283983604204692012-07-16T05:52:34.607-04:002012-07-16T05:52:34.607-04:00It is difficult to be kept waiting by a lover. You...It is difficult to be kept waiting by a lover. You've got the urgency and need of young intense love very well.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01681799401614263953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-14020016783361330052012-07-16T03:14:36.320-04:002012-07-16T03:14:36.320-04:00Wonderful take on that image.Wonderful take on that image.Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-85707128305787436982012-07-15T23:01:52.699-04:002012-07-15T23:01:52.699-04:00Very well penned....and I find myself wondering wh...Very well penned....and I find myself wondering what she is waiting for, actually wonder what anyone waits for!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-3994899035226533602012-07-15T22:10:53.302-04:002012-07-15T22:10:53.302-04:00This is a superb piece, beautifully written and ev...This is a superb piece, beautifully written and evocative. I very much enjoyed this. Thanks :)PhotoDictionhttp://photodiction.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-12526647048602414272012-07-15T22:01:13.963-04:002012-07-15T22:01:13.963-04:00nice...great imagery and you capture a depth of fe...nice...great imagery and you capture a depth of feeling that culminates in the words hanging precariously on the slopes and edges...slipping off into oblivion...nice close grace...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-30068884525279009582012-07-15T21:35:18.690-04:002012-07-15T21:35:18.690-04:00you gifted me with a palette of colors...
you are...you gifted me with a palette of colors...<br /><br />you are gifted with words. I love the relationship between the two stanzas. :)Day Dreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00328602663476265431noreply@blogger.com