tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post2042796184606258049..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: What we'll tell the moonScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger39125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-21304258732346431622013-06-29T21:06:20.958-04:002013-06-29T21:06:20.958-04:00Exquisite. Exquisite. benzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08208739746601391476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-37119436356007069242013-06-29T09:58:40.233-04:002013-06-29T09:58:40.233-04:00I love your play on words, Heaven. Have a beautif...I love your play on words, Heaven. Have a beautiful weekend!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-29442280439218723332013-06-29T08:18:51.899-04:002013-06-29T08:18:51.899-04:00The repetition works super well here and a lovely ...The repetition works super well here and a lovely close especially - really nice, Grace. Have a great weekend. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-24786241032625062242013-06-29T00:45:23.835-04:002013-06-29T00:45:23.835-04:00I like the metaphor of the moon for love - mysteri...I like the metaphor of the moon for love - mysterious, gentle, beautiful, and romantic, powerful even. <br /><br />Your words made beautiful images. :-) Happy weekend, Grace. <br /><br />~ImeldaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-32807700506144449662013-06-28T21:40:39.141-04:002013-06-28T21:40:39.141-04:00So lovely, a great symbol. So lovely, a great symbol. cammies on the floorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16586868507532830934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-258793745562001682013-06-28T19:56:11.458-04:002013-06-28T19:56:11.458-04:00The moon is heavenly. It invokes lots of beauty an...The moon is heavenly. It invokes lots of beauty and goodness though in reality it's just bare rocks. Great take Grace!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-73912933910715869142013-06-28T16:12:20.880-04:002013-06-28T16:12:20.880-04:00This is incredible Heaven, I get some seriously wo...This is incredible Heaven, I get some seriously wonderful vibes from this, just beautiful.Outcasthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03400755239612162157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-46600358168469462682013-06-28T15:33:53.562-04:002013-06-28T15:33:53.562-04:00so beautiful- each stanza filled with moonlight - ...so beautiful- each stanza filled with moonlight - lovely KAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-24547610591982236252013-06-28T10:34:54.789-04:002013-06-28T10:34:54.789-04:00Nice entering,Grace-you meet us like hospitable ho...Nice entering,Grace-you meet us like hospitable host-after only first stanza we already have taste of your moon 'lilac scented',and other wonderful meanings of moon bring us to the morning,but make anticipate the return of moon...humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-60706083265984789502013-06-28T09:55:01.608-04:002013-06-28T09:55:01.608-04:00"....the moon peels away the pretense..."..."....the moon peels away the pretense..." gorgeous Grace - the entire piece.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00216167544833329555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-54639232617868483702013-06-28T07:25:10.826-04:002013-06-28T07:25:10.826-04:00:)Loved it:)Loved itVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-15752627818331457952013-06-28T06:31:43.777-04:002013-06-28T06:31:43.777-04:00This has a beautiful gentleness to it.This has a beautiful gentleness to it.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-40953784694133931732013-06-28T02:30:55.186-04:002013-06-28T02:30:55.186-04:00This is really beautiful Grace. I enjoyed your op...This is really beautiful Grace. I enjoyed your opening and closing stanzas especially.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-33561209540586881742013-06-28T00:23:11.522-04:002013-06-28T00:23:11.522-04:00Cleaves is one of my favorite words! this is an ex...Cleaves is one of my favorite words! this is an excellent poem. Steven Marty Granthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12025403178005766557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-78782553667862940182013-06-27T20:09:10.895-04:002013-06-27T20:09:10.895-04:00This is beautiful, Grace. Anaphora works wonders ...This is beautiful, Grace. Anaphora works wonders with this poem. I do think sometime I have a love affair with the moon....perhaps many do. LOL.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-83934388048148933532013-06-27T20:01:56.625-04:002013-06-27T20:01:56.625-04:00Oh, as one poet writes, " I wish I hadn't...Oh, as one poet writes, " I wish I hadn't written that."<br />Beautiful read.LaTonya Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17837979981517423142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-24936728316784594932013-06-27T18:01:58.240-04:002013-06-27T18:01:58.240-04:00loved the personality you gave to the moon... i...loved the personality you gave to the moon... i'll be looking for it tonightWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-47869314666312170152013-06-27T17:13:40.542-04:002013-06-27T17:13:40.542-04:00Love the moon... this is great, Grace... especiall...Love the moon... this is great, Grace... especially the moon cleaves this night to two.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-32737233869746848762013-06-27T16:59:33.793-04:002013-06-27T16:59:33.793-04:00dark lilac scented.... so sensual! dark lilac scented.... so sensual! DEZMONDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14127166104359407763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-61205385396272977892013-06-27T16:34:29.333-04:002013-06-27T16:34:29.333-04:00Feel the moon so beautifully used as various meani...Feel the moon so beautifully used as various meanings throughout the poem in addition to the meanings of the moon. Hope that made sense. Lovely poetry!Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-52784272892601278542013-06-27T16:01:34.758-04:002013-06-27T16:01:34.758-04:00"our fingertips taste the dew like bees"..."our fingertips taste the dew like bees" The most delicious shudder slid down my back when I read this.... Chantelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10324845550553743658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-86009054530225290172013-06-27T15:46:42.985-04:002013-06-27T15:46:42.985-04:00Really beautiful, Grace, especially this:
"th...Really beautiful, Grace, especially this:<br />"the moon cleaves this night to two -<br /> one to savor as delicate wine-<br /> then to rage like storm split sky"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-56341581177224750522013-06-27T15:38:59.241-04:002013-06-27T15:38:59.241-04:00Thanks M :-) ~Thanks M :-) ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-89739792623926776122013-06-27T15:38:07.247-04:002013-06-27T15:38:07.247-04:00Wonderful choice of repetition - beautiful.Wonderful choice of repetition - beautiful.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09589253190731511955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-82900732334171161512013-06-27T15:30:25.912-04:002013-06-27T15:30:25.912-04:00ah, luxurious luna from Heaven :) ~ Mah, luxurious luna from Heaven :) ~ Mgrapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.com