tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post1425925270400732344..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: Tanka: Dancing under the moonScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-374145317936836622016-02-11T21:34:58.025-05:002016-02-11T21:34:58.025-05:00passionate and sensual - just lovely Gracepassionate and sensual - just lovely GraceTruedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-39869920877618391812016-01-24T14:51:10.111-05:002016-01-24T14:51:10.111-05:00The fog-lit moon brings winter to mind, and then ...The fog-lit moon brings winter to mind, and then you turn this to spring with the rest of your luscious verse. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05126230685516232230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-41631458429557884522016-01-24T03:04:52.571-05:002016-01-24T03:04:52.571-05:00Beautiful, delicate, and delicious. I love reading...Beautiful, delicate, and delicious. I love reading your work.The Bizzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17797871556831556557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-10861138829811740962016-01-23T17:59:07.245-05:002016-01-23T17:59:07.245-05:00This is sensuously beautiful Grace! So much can be...This is sensuously beautiful Grace! So much can be said in so little, the beauty of a tanka!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-68407330376165518912016-01-23T06:02:26.357-05:002016-01-23T06:02:26.357-05:00Lovely lines...Lovely lines...ashokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07151604896442505084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-40968944001207315712016-01-23T03:15:36.110-05:002016-01-23T03:15:36.110-05:00this drew such a beautiful picture...this drew such a beautiful picture...Lady In Readhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13791002474933656220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-62319986421365511742016-01-22T20:51:47.317-05:002016-01-22T20:51:47.317-05:00The use of language here opens up as the poem proc...The use of language here opens up as the poem proceeds - we get sensuous and sensual information pulling us emotionally into the poem and putting ourselves into the scene as characters.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-43085284045982237882016-01-22T18:04:03.261-05:002016-01-22T18:04:03.261-05:00One word: Delicious! :)One word: Delicious! :)lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-5237714468021023452016-01-22T17:35:00.026-05:002016-01-22T17:35:00.026-05:00I love the intimacy.I love the intimacy.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-14908653095574622362016-01-22T13:54:25.078-05:002016-01-22T13:54:25.078-05:00Yikes ! Scandalous ! "She's a witch ! ...Yikes ! Scandalous ! "She's a witch ! Burn her !"DnD_Boomerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10563309372165610276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-24379066955140482662016-01-22T08:49:31.003-05:002016-01-22T08:49:31.003-05:00Sensual at play as fingers straySensual at play as fingers strayPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-9710642334815204142016-01-22T05:44:46.476-05:002016-01-22T05:44:46.476-05:00This is hot and so sensualThis is hot and so sensualcammies on the floorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16586868507532830934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-44460843998420109932016-01-22T05:19:17.108-05:002016-01-22T05:19:17.108-05:00Oh to be young again!Oh to be young again!vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-22012936854924027752016-01-22T05:15:46.084-05:002016-01-22T05:15:46.084-05:00soft and sensual...soft and sensual...Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-28227467348480764002016-01-22T02:47:46.568-05:002016-01-22T02:47:46.568-05:00You really fill our lives with sensuous imagery an...You really fill our lives with sensuous imagery and lusty presence, yet elegantly so, love it!Marina Sofiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15251903359649828285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-81552227820055785332016-01-22T01:08:50.230-05:002016-01-22T01:08:50.230-05:00"silk with desire." That line will linge..."silk with desire." That line will linger for awhile... I love the combination. <br />Thanks for this. Matthew Henningsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05561605742904573649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-12609664662925796422016-01-21T21:27:31.558-05:002016-01-21T21:27:31.558-05:00Beautiful and sensuous.... I was wondering why the...Beautiful and sensuous.... I was wondering why there was so much smoke on your page... (he-he) <br /><br />peace and love<br />1ManView<br />1ManViewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17896979433381268598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-61428478117066401332016-01-21T21:21:48.407-05:002016-01-21T21:21:48.407-05:00So beautiful. ~That moment when your skin is almos...So beautiful. ~That moment when your skin is almost broken open sexually so that seeds of expression burst forth, as if your flesh is fertile soil just waiting to be tended by capable hands ... I feel it. Brilliant metaphor. Also, I think it's interesting that you're blooming under moonlight instead of under sunlight. This speaks to your rarity. A unique sort of flower that doesn't follow predictable laws of nature.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-79936599651184593092016-01-21T20:18:39.470-05:002016-01-21T20:18:39.470-05:00Sensuous tanka!Sensuous tanka!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-36643437915125835232016-01-21T19:21:41.662-05:002016-01-21T19:21:41.662-05:00Lovely and dreamy... under fog-lit moon... Wonderf...Lovely and dreamy... under fog-lit moon... Wonderful, Grace :)ghostmmnchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16463509569970002409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-63994496881712319972016-01-21T19:00:25.562-05:002016-01-21T19:00:25.562-05:00Passionate pointed tanka, establishing so much in ...Passionate pointed tanka, establishing so much in a confined space/form. I like romantic poetics, that often lapse into erotica. Might be interesting to do at as a Poetics prompt one day--the results might redden our cheeks or increase our heart rate; smile. I'm in if it happens.<br />Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-64332810026994652722016-01-21T18:15:03.209-05:002016-01-21T18:15:03.209-05:00sweet peaches, and makes me long for Springsweet peaches, and makes me long for SpringPleasant Streethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00060701245925637719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-32093786057630062192016-01-21T17:27:09.456-05:002016-01-21T17:27:09.456-05:00*sinGinG sensual..
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further...Moving Art<br />sining sensual<br />feelings so much<br />further iNtricacies<br />sKin <br />share <br />danCinG<br />hands and fingers<br />iN feat of Love now..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-34266497074783561752016-01-21T17:09:20.282-05:002016-01-21T17:09:20.282-05:00This is very sensuous and so much said with just t...This is very sensuous and so much said with just the right words.Georginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01463869349871241765noreply@blogger.com