tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post1143589888551908452..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: Under the blockScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger45125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-12957929808392603862011-10-29T23:46:02.677-04:002011-10-29T23:46:02.677-04:00you write so beautifully...you write so beautifully...voidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16651972747339353711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-9468673881425090292011-10-29T04:31:41.697-04:002011-10-29T04:31:41.697-04:00Great lines. Enjoyable read.Great lines. Enjoyable read.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-35536528655528107992011-10-29T00:09:51.716-04:002011-10-29T00:09:51.716-04:00I love these lines in combination with the picture...I love these lines in combination with the picture; how cool!<br /><br />"even your shadow<br />behind grey roof"<br /><br />~Shawna (arbitrarymeaning.blogspot.com)✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-39263123804319200612011-10-28T15:10:34.804-04:002011-10-28T15:10:34.804-04:00i like how OCEANGIRL put it -multi-taskingi like how OCEANGIRL put it -multi-taskingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-83382036521891872382011-10-28T14:05:57.326-04:002011-10-28T14:05:57.326-04:00Interesting take on the prompt! You unearthed the ...Interesting take on the prompt! You unearthed the voice of despair~Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-89246282400676921492011-10-28T13:57:36.670-04:002011-10-28T13:57:36.670-04:00brilliantly written...
I m gonna say it again as ...brilliantly written... <br />I m gonna say it again as every one did it :P u nailed it !!Jyoti Mishrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01794675170127168298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-39150742502193225882011-10-28T12:11:06.879-04:002011-10-28T12:11:06.879-04:00Heaven, read some of the comments and not much I c...Heaven, read some of the comments and not much I can add that has not been said except BRAVO!<br />You are a wonderful poet!<br /><br />Margie :)Margiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14433759763753850718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-19709897381682278352011-10-28T11:01:43.296-04:002011-10-28T11:01:43.296-04:00This is outstanding, Heaven!This is outstanding, Heaven!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-80480202542310415172011-10-28T10:53:44.331-04:002011-10-28T10:53:44.331-04:00You nailed this on so many levels, that first vers...You nailed this on so many levels, that first verse made me shiver and those yelps made me shudder. Well done.author.nara.malonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07159847596372441526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-17171011914760650192011-10-28T10:29:03.663-04:002011-10-28T10:29:03.663-04:00Yeah, great!!!Yeah, great!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-62150579691012707372011-10-28T10:24:43.867-04:002011-10-28T10:24:43.867-04:00You really covered all the bases in this one, exce...You really covered all the bases in this one, excellent work. I too winced.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-14024473915003096252011-10-28T09:35:49.548-04:002011-10-28T09:35:49.548-04:00The spareness of the first piece lends itself to a...The spareness of the first piece lends itself to a feeling, a tone, of loss.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-11348127280913507912011-10-28T09:32:49.099-04:002011-10-28T09:32:49.099-04:00VERY cool photo interpretation!VERY cool photo interpretation!Rachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-58165478979001929702011-10-28T04:51:24.970-04:002011-10-28T04:51:24.970-04:00Animals yelping and screaming! Gosh! There is a lo...Animals yelping and screaming! Gosh! There is a lot of realism in its making. Excellent verse!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-19351422157781955492011-10-28T03:15:07.484-04:002011-10-28T03:15:07.484-04:00A n excellent challenge, met by two excellent poem...A n excellent challenge, met by two excellent poems...1ManViewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17896979433381268598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-43945768089332705292011-10-28T03:06:33.951-04:002011-10-28T03:06:33.951-04:00personally I like the first piece it had an eiry b...personally I like the first piece it had an eiry beautymoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-26669403263417331562011-10-27T23:58:58.465-04:002011-10-27T23:58:58.465-04:00haha well played heaven...the heart attack drives ...haha well played heaven...the heart attack drives it all home...grandma roasting that fat pig..ugh...well playedClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-83825147040372216672011-10-27T22:40:17.139-04:002011-10-27T22:40:17.139-04:00This is fantastic... and sad.This is fantastic... and sad.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-80995615672847329322011-10-27T22:29:22.039-04:002011-10-27T22:29:22.039-04:00As a widow, the first stanza moved me to tears. A...As a widow, the first stanza moved me to tears. As a human being, the second one moved me to nausea. Well done,<br /><br />Namaste..........cjcj Schlottmanhttp://cjschlottman-mypoems.blogspot.com/2011/10/blockhead.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-74895064707468758442011-10-27T22:22:14.533-04:002011-10-27T22:22:14.533-04:00roasted pig is appropriate for just about any type...roasted pig is appropriate for just about any type of gathering, I suppose!Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-78311882074690713552011-10-27T21:59:10.581-04:002011-10-27T21:59:10.581-04:00my country is known for its lechon (roasted pigs)....my country is known for its lechon (roasted pigs). we usually have them during big family gatherings, including funerals. many of us are already used to hearing them scream.Kikithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15443700017435144681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-63889556785070417122011-10-27T21:21:05.115-04:002011-10-27T21:21:05.115-04:00after a couple of reads, I read the title... :) be...after a couple of reads, I read the title... :) before that I thought the thing sought (1st stanza) was a person, perhaps grandpa (but not likely, because this is conflation at its best, MO). very visual, especially the second part; very sensual, the first. well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-5570947994296807352011-10-27T21:13:06.721-04:002011-10-27T21:13:06.721-04:00Unrelated? You ain't kiddin!
It is 55 words......Unrelated? You ain't kiddin!<br />It is 55 words...<br />Your writing is very intense Heaven<br />You do a fantastic job.<br />Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-EndG-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-52485009115995463802011-10-27T20:37:37.344-04:002011-10-27T20:37:37.344-04:00Enigmatic and well delivered. The sparse nature of...Enigmatic and well delivered. The sparse nature of the word limitation really adds to the tension.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-22661384628785388522011-10-27T20:30:01.520-04:002011-10-27T20:30:01.520-04:00As said perfect, you really did nail it, made both...As said perfect, you really did nail it, made both work with such a smooth transition, poor animal in the back kitchen..hahaPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com