tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post106851344555988332..comments2023-10-02T16:21:04.111-04:00Comments on Scarlet Verses: Clinging to youScarlethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comBlogger39125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-40979325609914951562011-11-05T15:28:39.213-04:002011-11-05T15:28:39.213-04:00hot waves of emotions, well done.
;)hot waves of emotions, well done.<br /><br />;)The Noiseless Cuckooclockhttp://www.thenoiselesscuckooclock.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-5019821742569636062011-11-05T15:14:17.650-04:002011-11-05T15:14:17.650-04:00Just how I love my poems...hot, short and deep!Just how I love my poems...hot, short and deep!Adura Ojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10787703060107491771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-52923871878310634502011-11-05T14:00:07.879-04:002011-11-05T14:00:07.879-04:00mmm... very sensuous and delicious! ♥mmm... very sensuous and delicious! ♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-48615641148113936132011-11-05T13:51:46.945-04:002011-11-05T13:51:46.945-04:00Well, how awesome is this Heaven! I just came fro...Well, how awesome is this Heaven! I just came from Lady Nyo's. Getting a double dose of love poetry and influence by Japan.<br /><br />xoJannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-87579648311522217702011-11-05T12:56:57.475-04:002011-11-05T12:56:57.475-04:00This poem is sumptuously erotic - I love that it i...This poem is sumptuously erotic - I love that it is in the female voice, and that her sexuality is not under-stated.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-18303062342675294632011-11-05T10:57:53.749-04:002011-11-05T10:57:53.749-04:00So beautifully expressed passion....brilliant.So beautifully expressed passion....brilliant.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-86249049322833775012011-11-04T23:32:55.895-04:002011-11-04T23:32:55.895-04:00this poem paints a beautiful picture in my mind! a...this poem paints a beautiful picture in my mind! a joy to experience :)voidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16651972747339353711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-9242466268544315612011-11-04T23:00:05.360-04:002011-11-04T23:00:05.360-04:00Kind of interior rhyme here which is lovely.Kind of interior rhyme here which is lovely.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-8568888066337963802011-11-04T22:57:37.395-04:002011-11-04T22:57:37.395-04:00Gentle sensuality in a nicely executed form.Gentle sensuality in a nicely executed form.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-91111276317363169132011-11-04T21:32:41.613-04:002011-11-04T21:32:41.613-04:00Wow, this section reads of incense:
"before ...Wow, this section reads of incense:<br /><br />"before the last rose petal<br />dips, and first winter <br />drop caresses my bare hips"✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-33589453786797599382011-11-04T21:22:59.725-04:002011-11-04T21:22:59.725-04:00Beautiful and sensual, thoroughly enjoyed! :)Beautiful and sensual, thoroughly enjoyed! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-11160206751288575902011-11-04T20:16:29.041-04:002011-11-04T20:16:29.041-04:00Why did the maple leaves make me think that this w...Why did the maple leaves make me think that this was a very personal poem?<br /><br />Very fitting for both the season, and my current mood. GET OUT OF MY HEAD HEAVEN! ^_^Ethan Lamberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18005642810763475029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-45786609461485938242011-11-04T15:29:41.063-04:002011-11-04T15:29:41.063-04:00beautiful choice of words!beautiful choice of words!ashokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07151604896442505084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-38418918352111008662011-11-04T14:47:38.953-04:002011-11-04T14:47:38.953-04:00Race against time...for love is transient as the s...Race against time...for love is transient as the seasons...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-4975038674957262682011-11-04T13:47:06.783-04:002011-11-04T13:47:06.783-04:00i like how you weave season and lust together..sen...i like how you weave season and lust together..sensual and elegantClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-58820399826881308582011-11-04T10:41:11.934-04:002011-11-04T10:41:11.934-04:00All the reasons I'm not allowed to travel alon...All the reasons I'm not allowed to travel alone. Very romantic, sensual on content, but very well written poetically; great word choices, combinations, images, reader involement, and line work.<br />a very elegantly sexy presentation of this form.Henry Clemmonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04156533198976128355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-26573881775613232622011-11-04T10:11:43.091-04:002011-11-04T10:11:43.091-04:00I love the passion! Really enjoyed this, Heaven.I love the passion! Really enjoyed this, Heaven.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-25632113665517519502011-11-04T09:51:19.165-04:002011-11-04T09:51:19.165-04:00You can really feel the desire and passion in this...You can really feel the desire and passion in this poem - powerful!rchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10390033530066470195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-76633857418626047102011-11-04T08:41:30.735-04:002011-11-04T08:41:30.735-04:00I think you hit just about every right cylindar wi...I think you hit just about every right cylindar with this poem!<br /><br />Beautiful....the mention of season, the way you intertwine it and lust, well, this certainly is in the spirit of the Man'yoshu.<br /><br />Brava!<br /><br />Lady NyoLady Nyonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-52929009026461842842011-11-04T07:51:54.952-04:002011-11-04T07:51:54.952-04:00You got me with the second line all the way to the...You got me with the second line all the way to the end...<br />wonderful wonderful poem.<br /><br />Just adore it.<br /><br />Peace, <br />Siggi In Downeast Mainesiggiofmainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12619003987159808104noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-7523896439658238832011-11-04T05:42:14.264-04:002011-11-04T05:42:14.264-04:00(The autumn leaf prompt, that is. Perfect for the ...(The autumn leaf prompt, that is. Perfect for the Man'yoshu.))Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-59410273267848672702011-11-04T05:40:09.863-04:002011-11-04T05:40:09.863-04:00That's gorgeous! What a lovely, unexpected use...That's gorgeous! What a lovely, unexpected use of the prompt.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-62846529058748220532011-11-04T03:50:50.886-04:002011-11-04T03:50:50.886-04:00elegantelegantIsabel Doylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17974989548030799086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-57089832618070348982011-11-04T00:59:35.569-04:002011-11-04T00:59:35.569-04:00lovely, sensual tanka.lovely, sensual tanka.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3925421712367848826.post-86490721221879535002011-11-04T00:30:21.445-04:002011-11-04T00:30:21.445-04:00Sensuality rules, and heat in autumn is always a g...Sensuality rules, and heat in autumn is always a good thing.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.com